HEY GUYS, JUST A WORD OF NOTICE, THIS IS A REWRITE SINCE MY OTHER DOCUMENTS ON MY COMPUTER CRASHED AND THERE WERE WAY TO MANY ERRORS ON ITS PREDDESECOR SO IM REWRITING THE WHOLE SERIES WITH MY FRIENDS HELP AND AND ADVICE. ,
I BEN SPENDING MONTHS THINKING ABOUT THIS AND WHEN I WAS LISTENING TO CHOP SUEY IT CAME TO ME, WHAT IF Naruto HAD THE HELP OF Jiraiya AS A REAL TRAINER AND THE ONLY VILLIAN WERE MADARA.
AND KUBUTO WAS THE NEW Orochimaru WHILE MY Orochimaru STAYED LOYAL TO THE LEAF,IT WOULD BE SO AWESOME NOW I WONT GO INTO TOO MUCH DETAIL BUT IM POSITIVE YOU'LL GUYS WI LIKE,NOT MAKING IT A HAREM ITTS JUS NARUHINA ALRIGHT ENJOY,
OH ALSO I READ YOUR COMPLAINTS ABOUT THE TEXT BEING TO HARD TO READ SO I REVISED ALL THE CHAPTERS AND NOW ITS A REAL FANFIC STYLE SORRY AGAN ENJOY!
"demon/summoning" talking
'demon/summoning' thinking
"dialogue"
'thoughts'
jutsu
(song/lyrics)
Chapter 1: Soaring tears
He stood on top of the toad boss looking at the very evil that not only plagued his ancestors.
The sage of six paths.
His village.
And now his family, his eyes flowing with tears but keeping the strength to go on with his plan,never did he think that his last moments with his child would be in such unwanted circumstances.
All the thoughts of teaching his son his first words. Watching him make his first steps. And hearing him laugh as his mother plays with him.
All of it was taken from him.
Not being able to see him grow up and revive the Namikaze/Uzumaki clan, the chance to see him with his first girlfriend, not being able to see him become a man before his eyes, all because some damn deranged soul of a man. And his reckless need for vengeance.
The time for 'what ifs' were long gone and it was time to perform the ritual. Performing some hand signs he jumped of the toad and slammed the floor with his hand and before him stood a alter fit for a new born child, he placed his son and as he sat him down he saw his wife struggling with her binding on the fox.
"humph, you know Naruto the one advice I can give you before I leave is...Don't stop striving for peace my boy." As he began to rush through hand signs he intercepted a pierce from the foxes tail that was headed towards his son
The fox struggled to break through in an attempt to halt his fate of becoming a prisoner again,the demon readied its tail to strike aain but instead of piercing the babe, it saw the shinigami
it was to late.
" I WILL NOT SUCCUMB TO ANOTHER DAMNED PRISON, DAMN INSOLENT HUMANS."
The shinigami spoke unto his summoner "I HERE TO COLLECT HUMAN, NOW WHERE IS THE CONTAINER." Minato pointed towards his son and the shinigami proceded to rip the chakra and soul of the kyubi and Minato soul as wel and compete the ritual.
Both parents faces were drenched in tears to see their baby boy grow up alone and prayed that he would be taken care of.
"Sorry Kushina... I guess...I'm not receiving any...father of the year...awards" with that the sealing process completed and the fox's chakra ripped away from him. half of its chakra, was sealed along inside his new container. Minato's body fell limp and Kushina gave one last speech to her son knowing he'd never see them again.
"Naruto...this is your mother...though...your fathers means...may not...be seen as good to you now...but...please...have faith...and know...we both loved you...eat your vegetables...and...we hope the letter...to Sarutobi gets to him on time...so your fathers wish...will be fulfilled...you are the child...Naruto...the one who will save this ninja world from darkness...the one who will spread light...so for your mom and dad Gahh!...please...change this world"
as the lovers die in front of their crying baby, the sandaime arrives and is torn by the sight before him 'so he pulled it off, and the child is still alive' he held onto the letter that was sent to him by Minato's toad summons
"take the bodies to the hospital there maybe hope for Kushina, and wrap the boy in some blankets and lets head back to thee village,this is going to be a toughie"
the ANBU did as they were told and retrieved the bodies of the heroes and headed out, Hiruzen hed the babe as he jumped from tree to tree back to the village and as he arrived in his old office, a feeling of nostalgia, and sadness awoke within him and sat the babe on his old desk and sat down. For 10 minutes he sat there and after another minute he began to weep,
The "Kami no Shinobi".
Wept.
And in those days all felt humility an came into terms with their own humanity seeing not only their hero fall, but witnessing the lives lost and the destruction before them was enough to make the hardest of shinobi like Ibiki feel like as though pain was the only escape.
No one took this as hard as the now current Hokage
"my wife. my successor. My home. What has this village done to deserve the lost of so many to die. And I a former Hokage couldn't do not a thing I did made a difference, kami why have you brought such suffering upon this village!.
Hiruzen looked on the boys arm and noticed a tattoo that resembled a swirl of some sorts but instead of lines it was kanji and the words swirled read "wind", what in kami's name is that?"
he pulled out a pipe and began his daily drive to flavor country. Its been 10weeks and things were starting to become batter but Hiruzen knew he still had to give some very important news, he saw how the council reacted to it but now he needed to know how his village would. he sat back in his chair and awaited for the conformation from one of his ANBU's weather or not his village has gathered.
"are they here cat?"
"yes lord Hokage they await your announcement " he nodded and dressed in his formal hokage garbs
"good is the boy asleep?"
"yes I nursed hm back to sleep like you instructed but sir, are you sure its right to tell him about his 'tenant' I mean wouldn't it be better off just keeping it a secret"
"if we kept secrets from the people, we would be no better than those western countries"
"but we're still a ninja village sir secrets are our specialties"
"i agree but this was his wish and as a hero his wish will be fulfilled weather they want to or not". He walked on top of the tower and before him stood his village, his people and as they cheered he stuck his hand up to halt them.
"no cheers for me my dear village for your true hero is here"
he brought up young Naruto and everyone stood silent
"inside this boy, is the Kyubi no Kitsune,the yondaime has sealed within this child, the very demon that plagued our home"
'the child will destroy us all'
'we should kill it'
'why would the yondaime curse an innocent child'
'that monster'
were just some of the stuff whispered but as Sarutobi heard this he knew it was time to hit em hard
"But!, this child is no ordinary child, this boy is the son of the very man who sealed it within, Naruto Uzumaki Namizake, is the son of the Hokage, and his final wish was for you was to see him as a hero, though many of you are probably torn by the fact that your very fear is right n front of you.
I assure you Minato has properly sealed the fox within the babe properly, any shinobi present can testify to his skills inn sealing and as such it has come to my decision that I pass a new law, the younger generation will not know of the demon sealed inside Naruto, nor will any of you speak of it to him, second this boy will be guarded by my top ANBU until my student Jiraya arrives to retrieve the babe...how many see fit to have not only have the very thing that destroyed our home, but the only thing keeping us safe here within our village walls, if you are than then step forward"
no moved then within the crowd, a fairly tall jonin stepped forward, he had long black hair, pale skin with purple marking around his eyes and eyes with slitted pupils. Many were surprised at his courage when everyone wished for the boys head,
"I Orochimaru have suffered a lot from the night, not only did my lab and precious equipment were destroyed...but my wife died fighting off the fox, with that my student Anko's parents were also killed by the demon and my other two student are dead as well"
many were moved by the sadness present in his voice, but were confused because his face showed nothing of hurt,but instead neutrality, as if he didn't really feel pain. But he was hurting like hell
"but with that I feel as though I am still in indebted to the very man who saved not only my wife but to my new daughter as well, Minato, though he wasn't my student showed me he was worthy of Hokage, even before your retirement and for a man to sacrifice his own son, to save his village...is worthy to have his final wish honored".
Orochimaru's speech brought little gaps of hope back into the village, seeing one of the sannin come forward with his grief and lost made others believe that they to can over come this harsh trial as this shinobi has.
The little purple haired girl in the back of him screamed in approval and soon...many others followed and after the cheers were shared, the village was soon back on its pace for reconstruction and the Hokage left to his office, not before summoning a certain serpent to his quarters.
"You wanted to see me lord Hokage?"
" need you to go on a search mission for me"
"and who am I searching for sensie?"
"Jiraiya."
Orochimaru was taken back by his request "Sensie you can't be serious, I know hes the child's godfather but searching for him is like trying to find darkness in light, it can't be done"
"Orochimaru, I can't stress enough how important this mission is, in my old age I can be Hokage for long, and Tsunade will need t come but at a later date and entirely different reasons,besides, he must take the boy for training anyhow. When the child is older of course."
" hai sensie, I will search for him but what about my daughter, Anko?"
"i will place her in the same care I left Naruto, Cat"
"yes lord?"
"i want you to also house mis Anko as well in your facilities till her father returns "
"hai lord"
"well anything else to add Orochimaru?"
"sigh, I guess I should get packing, but please lord Hokage keep Anko training I may be her new father , but I don't want her skills hindered, I guess I should take this as a chance to gather up new test subjects on my way over kukukuku"
"glad to see your excitement now I'll send you off but please be careful,and good luck" as his student departed Hiruzen took a deep breath knowing that the road to rebuild will be hard and knowing not everyone will enjoy his successor's final wish, he knew once his students return that the hope is just over the horizon.
So far its been 5 years since he left to retrieve his teammate and during his absence but during his leave, his daughter has been training vigorously under the tutelage of the sandaime and perfecting her art of Heibi-combat style, the Hokage had to put up with his constant request for an orange jumpsuit but instead he put him in an outfit Jiraiya had bought for the boy before his birthed which was essentially a chibi version of his own instead there is no head piece and the geta were black.
"but old man, this isn't what I wanted"
"naruto your a ninja, and the orange you asked for is not ninja attire you'll wear it and learn to like it now lets begin your training"
"neither is this"
He tried to teach the boy his basic styles and combat arts though Hiruzen would scold Naruto for his hyperactive behavior he still admired the boys prowess when Naruto turned 9 he began to focus on chakra control. though he as a little disappointed when the boy couldn't perform a simple academy clone, his family summons Enma concluded since the boys chakra reserves are ocean sized, simple jutsu like a bushin clone wont work out for him, so why not teach him the shadow clone.
Hiruzen saw the reasoning behind his claims, and decided it would be reasonable to give the boy at least one high ranking jutsu...no harm in that right?
Oh was he wrong...so...very...wrong.
As soon as he finished his Kage-bushin training, reports of pranks done by Naruto were becoming an epidemic, the Uchiha clan had all of their clothes switched out for furry costumes, and the bunny suited head clan leader called for a meeting with all the Uchiha's, in hopes to gain back their pride
"Friends family, loved ones, we were struck in the one place where no Uchiha should ever be hurt, the pride, we all never forget this day, April 25 as the day Uzumaki Naruto(sniffles) made our clan look like a bunch of animal molesting freaks"
Fugaku broke down crying and so did many Uchiha except one named Shisui who didn't mind to have his outfit changed
'I do not see the big deal in this whole matter besides I got 3 more like this hidden in my cellar'
and the incident where the Inazuka clan had on bondage outfits and their dogs a had gag balls in their mouth, Tsume had to show up to the meeting with a black bustier on,black latex underwear, and long latex knee high boot heels, many of the male council men had nosebleeds(including one perverted Hokage) and some thought it was fitting to her 'dominating attitude' (no pun intended)
"if any of you bitches say a word, I will switch your balls with your eyes and only thing you'll see is your fucking testicles. GOT IT?" they continued the meeting but afterwords the sandaime had to put limitations on Naruto's shadow clone usage. another year has passed and Orochimaru approached the gates with his long awaited guest, they had no trouble getting in since being a Sannin, your name is known everywhere,so does your image.
The two went to the tower and as they approached the door they heard crashing, yelling and curse words being thrown "Give me back my hat you little trickster!"
"sorry Ji-ji but no can do, you might as well take that request, and shove it up ur perverted ass"
"Naruto! Give him the stupid hat back im trying to tend to my snakes here, but its really hard with you two IDIOTS screaming!"
"you the one screaming, ya loud ass bitch"
"...what the hell did you call me Naruto?"
"...uh...i love my best friend Anko"
"naruto...run,run as far as you can, and when you think your far, keep running" said the fearful sounding sandaime
"NARUTO IM GOING TO RIP YOUR FUCKING HEAD OFF GET OVER HERE!"
Naruto ran outside and crashed into his godfather who he didnt recognize, they both crashed on the floor and stared into each other eyes for a spit second before Naruto spoke. "...your a pervert aren't you?"
"yes...yes I am"
"hmm indeed...well I gotta go be"
"he disappeared in a puff of smoke to his friend Sasuke house "hehehe she'll never think to look for me here." "is that so ya little shit?" said an all to sweet tone behind him. He slowly turned around to see his 12 year old friend wearing her 'playtime coat' that had snakes pouring out of it and all of them hissing at his direction at that moment Anko beat the crap out of her best friend and skipped away.
"man women are scary" said Naruto as he jumped from a tree to see his clone poof away
"well I see he has the shadow clone jutsu down" said Jiraiya as he, the sandaime, and Orochimaru stood in front of him
"hey its the pervert, and Heibi teme" both sanin sweat dropped at their nick names as the hokage chuckled
"Naruto, this man is Jiraiya the toad sage, one of my former student and the sensie of the fourth who was your father, the other man here was also my student, his name is Orochimaru the villages Head scientist" Naruto stood shock at the two legendary figures before him
"wow that would mean you are the most powerful pervert, and the smartest pedophile ever!" both men face-faulted and had tick marks on their head.
"Naruto, I am here on a request from my former student who was also your father, and he not only made me your godfather, but he said in his will that I would be taking care of you for the time being until you strong enough so you and I are going to be training at the toad summoning world how do you like the sound of that"
"uh but what about my friends, I won't ever see them again? And the academy how will I become Hokage, better yet a shinobi if I don't attend ?"
"calm down Naruto I will talk with your teacher, seeing how Jiraiya here is a sanin he's granted special permission to take anyone as his student and I've allowed to leave for private training, and since he's the only one that have any knowledge on your fathers clans techniques then your allowed a leave from school, most clan children your age are trained under their clans arts like your friend Sasuke, Kiba,and don't worry he'll have you in time for the graduation exams."
he thought for a moment but saw the benefits that can come from this and decided to reap the winnings "alright pervy-sage I'll come with you but I have to tell Itachi and Sasuke though"
"don't worry I alreaddy notified your uchiha friend and he says good luck and be prepared".
And with that the two set off to begin his training and learn Naruto's clan secret by none other than Jiraiya the Toad Sage.