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Max POV
A cold breeze swirled my hair all around my face. The same face as the girl standing next to me.
My name is Max Ride. My identical twin sister is Mini Ride.
I am 5, 6 1/3 (And yes the 1/3 DOES matter), I'm a nice tan color and have long, straight, dirty blonde hair that I usually keep down. I'm more of the musical type too. I'm in Band, I play flute for those of you who were wondering.
My sister, Mini is 5, 6 (See, told you the 1/3 matters), She is also tan but has long curly dirty blonde hair that she likes to have in ponytails. She a gym geek, (I know, weird.) and she is #1 on the school volleyball team.
Well, That's a bit about ourselves.
You probably think this is going to be really boring, Don't you? That I'll Keep blabbing on and on and on, don't you? Yeah, you do. Well, your wrong, I'm just getting started.
New school, New people, New places
Max POV
Ring
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Ring
Ri-CLOBBER
"Max, don't break you alarm clock again, You don't have any money left for a new one."
I groaned. Time for prison-I mean school. We just moved from Wisconsin to Arizona and what we found wasn't very pleasant. The air was always greasy, the streets were clogged with cars, and the people seem to pretty much hate twins. Every time we would walk past someone, they would give us dirty looks and move on.
I felt something cloth like drop on-to my chest. I peeled my eyes open, to see Mini staring down at me and clothes on my stomach.
"Get dressed, we leave in 20 minutes." She said.
Of course, Mini was dressed in a polka-dotted, V neck crop top with a floral printed belted skirt. She also wore caramel booties, an a cappella hat, and Rut&Circle sunglasses. (Link on profile)
I got up just as she left to avoid falling back to sleep. I walked into the bathroom and locked the door behind me. I checked out my clothes to make sure there wasn't any girlyness.
Mini had given me a red and black flannel shirt, Black skinny jeans, black high-tops, black sunglasses, and my SWAG hat. (Link on profile)
I quickly changed and ran down stairs. I grabbed a couple of frozen pancakes, tossed one to Mini, And jogged to the door.
"By mom!" Me and Mini screamed.
A muffled bye was heard from my mom's room. I ate the pancake in one bite, unlike Mini who eats them slowly.
Mini and I ran to the Bus and hopped on. We walked until we found a seat and sat in it.
Mini started talking to me, something about cafeteria food, when I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned to find a strawberry-blond boy looking a me.
He held out his hand. "The names Iggy. What's yours?" I refused to touch his hand and I refused to tell him my name. So I ended up probably looking like I wanted to throw up or something.
He nodded. " Ok, I see how it is. But just so you know, I've been trying to find a Girlfriend for my best friend, and I'd think you'd be perfect for him." And with that, he turned back into his seat.
Okay...
I turned around just a Mini was finishing up her story. " And they were never heard from, agai- Max, are you even listening?" I shook my head and smiled up at her. I earned a slap on the head for that.
Me and Mini linked arms and walked up to the secretary.
She glanced from behind her rather large glasses. "Names?" She said
I smiled and wiggled my eyebrows at Mini. She nodded. "Minimum Ride." I said. Mini did the same but with my name. The secretary looked baffled for a moment then turned back to her screen.
"Here are you schedules and your locker numbers and combinations. Have a nice day." Like that was likely. She handed us our schedules and me and Mini traded.
We gracefully walked down the hallway, avoiding all the stares and whispers. " Hey, Max, what classes do you have?" Said Mini. I handed her my schedule. She squealed like a teenage girl who just avoided wearing SPF 100.
"We have all the same classes except band and volleyball!" I smiled. " First class?" She looked down at the paper in her hands. " Math." Ugh. Here comes prison.
We walked into room 156, arms linked, smiles upon faces (ok, pretend I didn't say that). I led Mini to the teacher's desk. The teacher himself was to busy scolding the class that he didn't even notice us. I taped his shoulder and is pant suit almost came of.
" My goodness, apparently we have two new students. Why don't you introduce yourselves?" He pointed me to go first. I walked to the front of the classroom. " Hi, my name is Maximum but please just call me Max. Please. Questions?" A few people raised
their hands. I pointed to a boy with, like, a million freckles. " Are you twins with that chick over there?" He pointed to Mini. I stared at him. " No dip, Sherlock." I said. I pointed to a girl in the back corner. " Were did you get your shoes from? They look really expensive." I looked down at my high-tops and let out a laugh. " I got them from e-bay." A few people let out a couple of chuckles. I pointed to a boy in the back. " Will you go out with me?" I shook my head. " Just keep kissing that pillow."
Mini introduced her self and got the same questions as me. " Ok, Mini, I want you to go sit next to Marcus and Lila." Said Mr. Davis as I later figured out. I shaggy haired boy raised his hand. " And Max, Go sit next to Fang and Iggy." A Boy with black hair raised his hand. I have to admit though, he was pretty hot.
I sat down in my seat as Mr. D continued with his lecture. I took out my notebook and doodled a bit. I felt my neck tingle and I turned around. I saw the boy named Fang staring at my drawings. " You're a really great drawer, you know that?" He said. I shrugged. " I guess I get that a lot now that I think about it." He smiled. " Your cool, you wanna hang out sometime?" I nodded. He sat back in his chair. I turned around in my chair trying to hide the blood rising to my face.
Maybe this won't be prison, maybe just a minor jail cell.
Sorry if Fang's kind of OOC in this chapter, with all the talking and what not. I just thought I'd make it more interesting.
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