Hey guys, it's Kakkoii. (if you are wondering what that means, its awesome or cool in Japanese.) I've finally uploaded my first story! I might add more chapters to this, depending on what kind of feedback I receive :) So, enjoy, and PLEASE break it to me softly when you comment! It IS my first story after all, though some criticism would be appreciated. Oh, and you know the deal-all characters in my story except Liana , her parents , Loyid, Zoë, Nowa, and Roman (plus his minions) belong to Stephanie Meyer. I also own the plot. ENJOY!
CHAPTER ONE
BOOK ONE Seth: Love at first sight
I so didn't want to hang out at La Push today so I went to Port Angeles just to hang out nothing special, Leah was getting on my nerves talking about how I need to get out and find a girl somewhere or I will end up just like her blah, blah, blah... and that was the best advice she had ever given me.
So any way I was just walking around the shopping center, then like 9 feet away from me was a girl, she looked pretty hot from behind had a nice body and beautiful long and curly hair and her scent smells like chocolate with strawbarries... but something familiar about it was very faint ... weird. You can tell she was part native american (Yes!) and some other things too well anyway all of a sudden she tripped and dropped everything, as she was picking them up I decided to make my move.
"Hey miss let me help you with that." I said.
She was startled "Oh thank you". Wow her voice is beautiful like silk...
then she looked up at me and blushed because I was gawking at her(like an idiot If I must say), and that's because she was the most beautiful thing I have ever seen, with big brown eyes and a perfect face, then it occurred to me that I have just imprinted.(Ahh crap...)
BOOK TWO Liana: Man of my dreams but worst day of my life.
My name is Liana D. Anastasia but my friends call me Ana and I am 15 years old. I just finished shopping for my mom and as I was walking I tripped and dropped all my bags (yeah I know I am clumsy) as I was picking them up I heard a voice " Hey miss let me help you with that"
surprised I said "Oh thank you" and I looked up to see the persons face and then it happened.
He was extremely hot and I blushed because he was looking at me like I was umm... well hot (not that I wasn't), and I likeed it, then
he said "Hey my names Seth it's nice to meet you... Umm..." Hmmm what was I supposed to say...Oh! My name...
"Oh my name is Liana but you can call me Ana and it's nice to meet you too Seth oh thanks for helping me"
he blushed a little and that was really cute "oh that, no problem."
I looked away and said the stupidest thing i could ever say "Well Seth I um got to go so bye." STUPID, STUPID, STUPID why did I not give him my number or anything gosh I'm flippin stupid
! Then as I was walking away from the hottest guy I know, Seth ran to me and said" Um Liana do you want to go out some time or if you are not busy this afternoon we can go for a walk or something."
YES he asked me out I calmed down and put on a "hopefully" nonchalant look and said "Yeah sure I would love too but first I need to drop my bags at home you can come if you want."
He smiled "YES! - I mean yes I will come with you" I giggled "ok then my car is over their" he looked surprised and said "You have a car?" "Oh yeah I am 15 I got it for my quince I also have my learners permit." (Quince is like a Spanish sweet 15.) "Oh wow" said Seth "let's get going" (Ok I know I just met this dude and all but I have this feeling...like...like I dont want him to...go... Man I am such a teen!)
On our way to the house Seth was talking about his family in la push and some of his friends then as pulled up to the house I said "I will be right back!"
I got my bags and I went inside my house "Hey mom! Hey Zoë I am home!"
Just then my mother called from the living room. "Oh Liana good your home" well duh I just said that : (...
"ANA!" my little sister called from the other room.
"Hey Zoë, how was your day." she smiled her cute little smile "Awesome!"
I went into the living room to my mom "Umm mom can I ask you something?"
she looked up at me "Yes what is it Liana? "
I looked down and said "well mom I have a date tonight and I was wondering if you can tell dad I can't meet with Loiyd tonight kay?"
Just to let you know my dad's best friend, Loiyd is a vampire but we keep it a secret (of course we have to or we die), my family (meaning me and my dad) learn about them and their special abilities.
My mom smiled "Sure who's the lucky guy?" I blushed even more and said "Oh his name is Seth and mom he is really hot" she laughed "Ok well have a good time" I smiled and rushed out the room yelling "Will do mom bye Zoë love ya." I yeah i gave them hugs as I left and I would of done more..., but at the time I did not know that next time I see them they would be dying.
Please tell me what you think! I know it's not as good as others, but it's my first one. Plus if you tell me what you think I should do then I will do it and see if it makes my story better. Even if you don't comment I am glad that someone read it. And again THANK YOU!
