Hello readers this is my first story the other story is my friends that im posting for him i hope you like and it and please review and tell me what i should do differently
I felt two huge powers: One of them I knew was Frieza, but I didn't know who the other was. I went and got Gohan, Piccolo, and Vegeta. Then we went to go see if and how Frieza was still alive, and who that huge power level was. When we got there, there was a ship just like Frieza's. And as we walked up it opened, and a mechanized Frieza walked out, behind him, a taller more, muscular frost demon. He looked like Frieza's second form. Frieza lifted his hand and pointed right at me
"There father! The tyrant yelled. "There is the one who hurt me!" Then spoke Frieza's father. So you are the one that harmed my son. How did a puny Saiyan like you defeat him?"
Then I spoke, "Whoever you are, if you and Frieza have come to harm this planet, I can't allow you to do that." then Frieza's father spoke, "You can call me King Cold, and we have come to kill you and anyone else that gets in our way" The large Demon smirked, "then destroy this planet."
Then piccolo spoke "I'm sorry but you won't be destroying the earth and if your anything like your son this is going to be too easy" That's when Frieza came in "Well as you can see I have been rebuilt with the best technology my father could get so I am much stronger than before namekian". Now Vegeta began to speak "Frieza you're a tin can on legs, what could you possibly do?" Frieza smiled
"You want a demonstration of my power monkey?". Then before Vegeta knew what happened, Frieza attacked him. Frieza punched Vegeta in the stomach catching him off guard then spun backwards and kicked Vegeta, causing him to stumble. Goku yelled to Gohan "Stay back!" and charged Frieza his first punch missed but his second hit its target punching Frieza in the head then launched him into the sky with a ki blast. Vegeta then flew up and yelled "GALICK GUN" and hit Frieza point blank.
Then a figure flies in, unsuppresses his power, and attacks Cold, catching him off guard with a kick to the head, then a ki blast throwing him into the ship, nearly flying through the wall of the craft. Frieza then takes advantage of the opportunity to grab and throw Vegeta into the ground and launch a huge pulsing ki ball at Vegeta. Goku intercepts the ki blast, destroying it, and charges Frieza, grabbing him by the tail slamming him into the ground as he did Vegeta, but instead he flies in and knees Frieza in the stomach, getting him out of the fight for a little while.
He turned his head just in time to see the new fighter furiously attacking cold hitting him so fast that he couldn't keep up then cold fell out of the sky and he screamed something and blasts out a blinding white attack that destroys cold and his ship creating a huge crater where they used to be in the process. Then he looks at Goku and yells "BEHIND YOU" he turned around just in time to watch Frieza yell "DIE MOKEY SCUM" and throw a ball of energy so large and powerful it could destroy earth. So Goku transformed into a super saiyain and said "KA ME HA ME HA" and shot the blue ki blast at the ki ball when it hit the ball kept going but began to move back towards Frizea then Goku yelled defiantly and the ki ball and blast flew back at Frieza and kept going until the ki ball exploded. Then he transformed back to a normal saiyain to see if Vegeta was ok and who their mysterious helper is