Hi I just had a sudden erg to Wright a story but i don't know if it's good or not, here are bits of the story i put together, please tell me if i should turn it into a story.
Most people wonder about what life will be like when they are older, if they will be married, have children with that so called big white house surrounded by a white fence with a tier swing on the front hanging from the greenest willow tree. Or some just wonder if they will be alive longer enough for that. I, like a lot of you worry that I will be alone for my entire life, that I'll go home to a small, cramp dark flat with a dog to welcome me. But really I should be worrying that I'll get good grades or what to wear the next day. This must sound really cheesy, but this is my life, things that I will never have but still dream of them anyway just to give me hope that there is something for me in this life and if there isn't I pray to god that when we die our soul travels to a newborn baby somewhere and make it better.
I had a dream once where I was sinking in a river and everyone around it was laughing, they didn't bother trying to save me, just laugh like it was something normal but I suppose death is. Most dreams for me are like that, they always end in me dying and everyone else is happy. Is that a sign? Am I better off dead? Some people think death is only the beginning what world do they live in?
My mind races through all of this as I sit on a clean clinical green bathroom floor, with tear drops running down my face turn into a puddle as it hits the floor with a splash. I'm not good enough for this world. My eyes misting over and I know it's coming the end is near and I'll be free. My bold head resting against the cold metal door as my eyes start to droop, it's over know i can stop fighting my mum can be happy and I might get to meet my dad finally. My eyes finally close and I'm hit with darkness and the next thing I heard was 'it's great to finally meet you baby girl welcome to the world' I guess I was right there are such things as second chances.
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