If your reading this then this is re write of my original story that was bad so I decided to rewrite it cause the original was terrible I just was pulling stuff out of my ass this might be a lincoln x harem story still don't know but if you enjoy okay and if you have some criticism let me know
"Character speaking"
(Character thinking)
"Shadow speaking"
(Shadow thinking)"1216 Franklin Avenue a House known to many to Royal wood as the loudest house in the entire city and not without reason as a family of thirteen live in it filled with most lively group of siblings you have seen was unusually quiet cause said siblings were just getting out of school and we see Lincoln walking home alone."
No one.POV
"Oh hey Lincoln here just walking home from school your probably wondering why I'm alone well Clyde's on a trip for a couple of days so it's just me for now," Lincoln sighed, as he continued walking.
"As Lincoln walks away down the road he passes across the street from above there were a pair of blood red eyes staring at him with a blood thirsty look,"
"Another soul for my lord to consume," the thing said as it flew off in the opposite direction
Scene change
"As Lincoln had made his way home the nearer he got the louder it got once he had finally made it to see and hear his house in all its glory with toys spread across the yard and good portion of the frisbees and boomerangs on the ceiling and fumes leaking from the top probably due to Lisa experiments hey it wasn't
perfect but Lincoln wouldn't trade it for anything."
Lincoln.pov
As I open the door to my house and walk in i see the house e in what a person would call total chaos so it's a pretty normal Friday but surprisingly the only one close to The TV is Lisa she some how must of gotten there first having nothing to do right now I go and sit next to her
"Hey Lisa what are you doing," I ask curiously
"Greetings brother unit" she said only sparingly passing glance of acknowledgement "I watching the local news to test something for me."
"Test something?," I ask confused "test what." Is ask
"You'll see." She says in a kinda sad voicel
I was about to ask her what was wrong and suddenly the news turns on
No.pov
"And we're to royal woods news I am your news anchor Rachel spruce" she said with a serious almost unnerving tone "and back to our story there have been reported cases of missing people 25 missing cases with the lates being A young man by the name of Rusty Spokes although there have been people of multiple ages the culprit seems to be interested in mostly children and adolescents and their calling card seems to be a draw of three black slash marks in the middle and two black eyes with blood red irises if you have any information on the
whereabouts of the culprit or the missing children please contact the authorities now Tom with sports." She said with a dark tone then had quickly dismissed to go to the next topic
Lincoln.pov
I was shocked so that's why Rusty was gone today then I thought back to what Lisa said "how did you know about this."I asked her
"Darcy wasn't at school and I saw her mom driving around looking frantically." She said in a kinda sad tone
"Don't worry there gonna find them" I say trying to comfort her the best I can
"I hope so" she says
We sat there for a minute until she eventually got up from the couch and went to her room as she left I was about to change the channel
"Lincoln can you come to the kitchen please."he said
As I walk past the dining room to the kitchen I see my dad in getting everything out for cooking dinner "aw son there" he said as he looked over his shoulder "so I thought i spice things up and make some salmon but to to make this certain kind I need lemon pepper can you run to the store and get it for me." He asks
"Sure dad." I say something to get my mind off the missing people
"Great son hears the money and hurry back." "He say as he starts working on cutting the salmon"
Scene change
As he hands me the money I walk to the front and walk out and make my way to the super market on the way there it was normal except I had a sneaking suspicion I was being watched as I made my way out the store I bumped in to a hooded figure and a bunch of his food and groceries dropped
"Oh I'm sorry l." I say as I start picking up the food and put them back in his bag
"Oh no problem." He says as he joins me to help pick up his stuff
As we finish picking up his stuff an putting it in its bag he looks at me as I hand him the bag
"Thanks." He says as he extended his hand for a handshake
"No problem." I say
As I reach for his hand and we shake the feel a surge or electricity enter my hand and go through the rest of my body when it finally get up look at my hand to figure out what had happened
Hey dude do you know what that wa-
I turn to ask him about the sudden jolt through me the hooded figure was gone I look around confused and looked back at my hand asi sigh and decide to figure it out later
Scene change
As I make it back home I give my dad the lemon pepper I just decide to watch the tv until dinner is ready
Time skip
3 hours
As we sit at the table dad bring his lemon pepper salmon out and we get started on eating I start eating suddenly my body feels shaky I feel dizzy weak everything was moving so slowly everyone was talking weirdly and every one and thing in the room was shaped wiredly like they were all in front of a fun house mirror and Lincoln was see it right in front of his eyes
Rita.POV
as I continue to eat I glance up to see my son Lincoln across the table it's dilated he sweating immensely look really sick like he's going to throw up so I look up all the to talk to my son
"Lincoln sweetheart are you alright"
As I say this all my my daughter and husband look at as I see all there face go from satisfaction from the food to instant worry or Lincoln's condition as we al wait for him to answer
Lincoln.POV
Lincoln sweetheart are you alright"
I hear someone I assume to be my mother as a I look up to see all my sisters and my parents look at me with worried expressions
"I feel dizzy may I be excused please." Trying to steady my self
"Sure sweety go right ahead" I hear weird deep voice come from my mother
As I try to make my way upstairs to the bathroom I stumble before I make my way up stairs I open the bathroom make it to the toilet and vomit up my food I just ate as after that my vision went back to normal as I look up trying to get my balance from the dizziness earlier
"What was that about." I say as my sickness was completely random
"I don't know what was that about." I hear a voice say from seemingly everywhere the voice was male but it didn't sound like my dad
"What was that who's there." I say look around trying to locate where the voice was coming from
"Look in the mirror and find out."
I slowly look away from the door And turned to the mirror and I see another darker me his hair is pitch black his close torn black jeans and a baggy gray jacket with the words utopian dysfunction a necklace with an upsidedown cross on it and the most different we're his eyes the majority was pitch black with his irises blood red and a black liquid streaming down his eyes all the way down never come down from his cheek
"Why hello bunny boy."
So what did you think yes, no, get this complete garbage out of my face if so let me know kinda want a beta reader for this