I didn't know there was a place here for Neopet fanfics! I've always wanted to try for the Neopian times, I just never was sure what to write about. I think I have a plot, so I'm gonna go for it. The two girls in this story are based off of me and one of my best friends.
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Whitney and Kylie were best friends. The two fifteen year olds attended the same high school, and would usually walk home together. Today was no exception.
"I can't believe all of the homework we got." Whitney said, groaning. Kylie nodded in agreement.
"Don't ya wish there was just some place to go that you could just..get away from it all?" Kylie asked hopefully.
"Yeah. Too bad there isn't." Whitney said as she kicked a soda can on the sidewalk.
"What's that?" Kylie asked asked as she picked up a gold coin.
"Gold dollar?" Whitney suggested as she continued walking. Kylie shook her head.
"No..look at it." she said, examining it. "Neopoint? What the heck is a Neopoint?"
"A what?" Whitney asked, turning around. Kylie shrugged and held out her hand with the coin. Not a second after Whitney's finger touched the coin, a bright golden light surrounded the two, and transported them to a magical, far away place, where you could literally get away from it all.
"Where are we?!" Kylie exclaimed as she looked around frantically. There were tons of people walking around, with pets..but they weren't like dogs or cats. They resembled wolves, tigers, dinosaurs, rabbits, bugs, reptiles, anything you could imagine.
"I have no idea.." Whitney said, looking around.
"Welcome to Neopia! Welcome to Neopia!" the two heard a voice say. They turned around to see a small creature giving out flyers to people who looked as confused as they did.
"C'mon." Kylie said as she approached it. Whitney followed, still glancing around every few seconds.
"New here, I take it? Welcome to Neopia m'dears!" the creature said, shoving the flyers into their hands.
"Er..Neopia?" Kylie asked. "What's a Neopia? Better yet, what are you?"
"I am a Chia." the creature chirped.
"So you're like a mutated version of one of those little potted things that grow grass when you water 'em?" Whitney asked. The Chia stared at her with a blank expression.
"No!" it exclaimed. "We are creatures that live in Neopia!"
"..The drink?"
"No, Whit, that's Fruitopia."
"Okay, okay, okay. Let me talk!" the Chia yelled loud enough to get both of them to pay attention. "Let me guess, you found a coin on the ground and when you both touched it it transported you here?"
"Um, yeah." Kylie answered.
"Oh good, good, good. The Faerie Queen's plan is working. See, we're trying to get more people to come here. Neopia is a carefree place, where you can forget all your troubles. I suggest going to the Create-A-Pet service, maybe even the Adoption Agency. Here, three hundred Neopoints for the both of you." the Chia said, tossing them each a small bag that jingled with coins. "When you want to leave, go to that archway over there." it continued, pointing to a gold arch. "And when you want to come back, just use that coin again!"
"Um..okay." Whitney said, now looking thoroughly confused.
"Now if you would excuse me." the Chia said happily, and began waddling off to another group of confused looking 'newbies'.
"..Are we dreaming?" Whitney asked. Kylie shrugged.
"Maybe we should go to this Adoption Agency place. Yanno, just look around."
"You go there, I'll go to Create-A-Pet." Whitney said, looking over to two big buildings. "They're right next to eachother." Kylie nodded in agreement.
"I'll meet you back here in like..fifteen minutes." she said.
"Okay." Whitney said, and the two went their seperate ways, into the buildings.
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There ya go, first chapter. Not too bad, in my opinion..
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Whitney and Kylie were best friends. The two fifteen year olds attended the same high school, and would usually walk home together. Today was no exception.
"I can't believe all of the homework we got." Whitney said, groaning. Kylie nodded in agreement.
"Don't ya wish there was just some place to go that you could just..get away from it all?" Kylie asked hopefully.
"Yeah. Too bad there isn't." Whitney said as she kicked a soda can on the sidewalk.
"What's that?" Kylie asked asked as she picked up a gold coin.
"Gold dollar?" Whitney suggested as she continued walking. Kylie shook her head.
"No..look at it." she said, examining it. "Neopoint? What the heck is a Neopoint?"
"A what?" Whitney asked, turning around. Kylie shrugged and held out her hand with the coin. Not a second after Whitney's finger touched the coin, a bright golden light surrounded the two, and transported them to a magical, far away place, where you could literally get away from it all.
"Where are we?!" Kylie exclaimed as she looked around frantically. There were tons of people walking around, with pets..but they weren't like dogs or cats. They resembled wolves, tigers, dinosaurs, rabbits, bugs, reptiles, anything you could imagine.
"I have no idea.." Whitney said, looking around.
"Welcome to Neopia! Welcome to Neopia!" the two heard a voice say. They turned around to see a small creature giving out flyers to people who looked as confused as they did.
"C'mon." Kylie said as she approached it. Whitney followed, still glancing around every few seconds.
"New here, I take it? Welcome to Neopia m'dears!" the creature said, shoving the flyers into their hands.
"Er..Neopia?" Kylie asked. "What's a Neopia? Better yet, what are you?"
"I am a Chia." the creature chirped.
"So you're like a mutated version of one of those little potted things that grow grass when you water 'em?" Whitney asked. The Chia stared at her with a blank expression.
"No!" it exclaimed. "We are creatures that live in Neopia!"
"..The drink?"
"No, Whit, that's Fruitopia."
"Okay, okay, okay. Let me talk!" the Chia yelled loud enough to get both of them to pay attention. "Let me guess, you found a coin on the ground and when you both touched it it transported you here?"
"Um, yeah." Kylie answered.
"Oh good, good, good. The Faerie Queen's plan is working. See, we're trying to get more people to come here. Neopia is a carefree place, where you can forget all your troubles. I suggest going to the Create-A-Pet service, maybe even the Adoption Agency. Here, three hundred Neopoints for the both of you." the Chia said, tossing them each a small bag that jingled with coins. "When you want to leave, go to that archway over there." it continued, pointing to a gold arch. "And when you want to come back, just use that coin again!"
"Um..okay." Whitney said, now looking thoroughly confused.
"Now if you would excuse me." the Chia said happily, and began waddling off to another group of confused looking 'newbies'.
"..Are we dreaming?" Whitney asked. Kylie shrugged.
"Maybe we should go to this Adoption Agency place. Yanno, just look around."
"You go there, I'll go to Create-A-Pet." Whitney said, looking over to two big buildings. "They're right next to eachother." Kylie nodded in agreement.
"I'll meet you back here in like..fifteen minutes." she said.
"Okay." Whitney said, and the two went their seperate ways, into the buildings.
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There ya go, first chapter. Not too bad, in my opinion..