Chapter 1: What happened to the Ice King?

It was just another fantastic day in the land of Ooo. Finn and Jake went to the candy palace to see if the candy people and dear Princess Bubblegum were not in any trouble. The candy people were walking along happily and peacefully. "A little too peaceful, don't you think Jake?" "Yeah man. Let's go to Princess Bubblegum." As they approached the candy palace, the young hero heard a loud scream. "Jake! Did you hear that?" "Yeah man! It sounded like it came from the Ice King!" "Dude let's go to the Ice Kingdom to check it out!"

Jake used his super stretchy powers to stretch his legs really long and Finn jumps up on to his back. Jake then takes giant footsteps above the candy people, trying to be careful and not step on them. "Come on Jake! This might be a new adventure for us! Yeaaaaaahhhh!"

Upon reaching the Ice kingdom, the heroes spot a shadow-like figure flying away into the distance. Jake and Finn rushes to the top of the Ice Palace only to find Gunter staring out the giant hole on the wall. "The whole place is a mess!" says Jake. "Holy Glob! Jake! Check this out, a piece of paper with a faded drawing!" Just as Finn and Jake could take a closer look at the drawing, the light of the palace went out! Followed by the sound of quick footsteps, Finn tried to grab his torch but then Jake screamed. "AAhhhhh!"

Thank you if you have finished reading my very first story! I just started writing fanfiction literally yesterday. So please comment down below how did I do for my first time and please give me some tips and pointers to improve :) I hope you enjoyed Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 will be out fairly soon.

DISCLAIMER :
This story was inspired by Adventure Time. I am not trying to copy anybody who has written something like my story. I came up with this story myself.