Disclaimer: I do not own the Naruto franchise or the Overlord franchise. If I did Naruto would be paired up with Yugito, Temari or Karui and Overlord would be a lot more graphic.
In a dark and dreary cave in Hi no Kuni strange creatures were fervently searching for something under the leadership of an older creature, he was short and skinny and a scruffy beard was covering his chin, he wore a strange patchwork cloak, in his hand was a cane which he used to support himself and when he walked a limp was evident, he obviously held some kind of authority as he was bossing the other creatures around. The aforementioned creatures were turning the cave upside down and making a right mess of things until one of them shouted.
"We find him! Look!"
The creature in charge waddled up to the tomb the creatures had discovered and said;
"Yes this is indeed the right one, but he seems to be asleep, rub some acid into his eyes that'll freshen him up!
The figure the strange creatures were looming over awoke with blinding pain shooting through his eyes, as he opened his eyes for the first time in he didn't know how long took in a strange sight; small brown creatures with long ears and stupid expressions were looking at him in absolute glee. He tried to rise from his position on the ground but found out he couldn't move. The gray one with the cloak bellowed;
"Get the master out of here you stupid wastes of flesh! We need to get him to the Tower at once!"
The strange creatures complied and lifted the paralyzed person of the ground and placed him on a stretcher hauling the unconscious body out of the cave off to god knows where.
TL:DR this chapter was short and vague on purpose it is just the set up. The rest of the note is babbling and whining over brainy stuff as grammar.
Hello dear readers who have me on author alert or stumbled over to this little story of mine! I am back with a vengeance after about, oooh three years of inactivity to anyone who actually gives a flying fuck sorry about that -.- I just revised my other fics and realized they were utter bullcrap and was inspired to write this after reading a few Naruto/Overlord fanfics but I have noticed one BIG problem (at least in my mind) with the fanfics and that is that they tend to get WAAAAY out of hand. I can understand that the overlord would gain some allies but most of these fics tend to get it to such a large number that it seems hard to keep track or get an actual connection to the story they just cram'em in there which in my mind doesn't work since if you are putting something in a story it should have a constant part in it, now I'm not referring to EVERYTHING some things are temporary but when an overlord gains oh two thousand warriors and they move in to his tower and are barely mentioned in the rest of the story it annoys me, a lot. On a completely different subject this is a message to any author reading this PLEASE! STOP using abbreviations and numerical's in your story let me show some examples!
Example 1
Wrong way
Guard 1 "Hey it rains!"
Guard 2 "Yes."
Guard 1 "I hate rain!"
Right way
The first guard said "Hey it rains!"
The second one answered "Yes."
To which the first guard replied "I hate rain"
Example 2
Wrong way
Sasuke used the lvl 2 form of the cursed seal
Right way
Sasuke used the second level of his cursed seal
You see were I'm going with this? There is a reason why no published book uses the wrong way of these examples and this is because they are grammatically wrong and generally look amateurish and things like these can make or break a story. I am aware that this is just fan fiction but you can still try to keep some modicum of standard even when you are writing fan fiction.
Gee this was a long author's note but I'm tired of seeing this in fan fictions.