GUESS WHO'S BACK! BACK AGAIN?! It's just me!

Soo here's the start of the new revised To Find Life. I had originally wanted to write a three part story but then band and senior year started! So enjoy the story.

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I slid down the cold silver railing with my daunting black and midnight blue dress fluttering down around me. The guard on duty said nothing at my unusual behavior as he placed his hand on the wooden door and the other on my wrist.

"Bravery." He whispered as I stepped close to him.

"And courage." I whispered back. It was my family's motto that I ran my kingdom by and he opened the door for me to gracefully walk into my throne room where my gold and silver throne sat on a platform. I could hear the blood pounding in my ears as I turned and sat down. She stood tall with her crown melting slightly in front of me.

"Daughter of Abraham." I glared at her black and soulless eyes.

"What do you want? My father banned you from this country and I extended your banishment when I accepted this monarchy. Make it a good reason." My wolf guard stood up with her teeth bared.

"It is simple my darling, I just claimed all of Narnia and since your little kingdom is a little off from Narnia, I figured: why not have Catalina rule with me."

"No. Get out seductress before I send my arrow in your neck." I stood up to leave before she ran up and grabbed my throat.

I gasped as I woke up. Ever since last December I've been having these weird flash backs. I'm only sixteen. I couldn't have been a Queen, I'm still in High school in America. I pulled on a pair of skinny jeans and a flannel and thought about the night that this all started. It still scares me.

The rain beat down the window of my grandmother's car as we made our way home from shopping for my mother's birthday. I grasped the flowers tighter. I looked down and saw myself in a soft white dress that had a sweet heart neck line. The flowers cascaded to the ground softly. I looked up to the wood door in front of me before it melded into the window.

As I walked to my bus stop, snow began to fall in fat and fluffy flakes as I flicked the snow covered ground with my shoe. I was already hiking through last night's thick snow fall.

"Stupid Ohio." The snow hiked to pass my hips. "Jesus." I was struggling with the snow as it escalated up and up and up and up and up. I huffed as I mulled over my situation. Maybe being snowed in won't be bad. Maybe I'll be blessed to die young. There's worst ways to go I suppose. I took a gasping breath as the snow closed over the top of my head. I tried climbing to the top, but the snow melted into clear water. I closed my eyes at the burning salt water and swam to what felt like up. My once curled hair now danced around my head as I swam, my lungs burned, my flannel stuck to my body. Air, air, air. An arm reached around my waist and began to pull me down. I kicked as my lungs screamed. The stronger arm pulled me up. My lungs burned as water filled them. I let the person drag me down as I went down with them.

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IMPORTANT: THIS IS JUST THE FIRST CHAPTER OF THE REVISED VERSION SO IF YOU WANT TO KEEP READING, HAVE AT IT, JUST KNOW THAT IT MORE THAN LIKELY WILL BE CHANGED.