Disclamer: I do not own any of this; it is a pigment of my own imagination.
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JESS: I love you.
Rory is shocked- she stands motionless and looks at Jess' beat up car
whiling away into the distance. While standing in the faint exhaust, Rory
begins to silently cry.
Rory blurry eyed, find her mother and buried her head in her mom's chest.
She knows she is to big for this- but she wants her mom.
LORELAI: "Woah, honey, what's wrong?
RORY: Rory pulled up her tear-stained face. "Jess..." she buried her head
again.
LUKE: "What did that stupid boy do now! I told him if h- "
LORELAI: Cut Luke off "Hold it, feisty. I think I'll take a raincheck on
this conversation, and take Rory home." She frowned.
Rory and Lorelai walk away from the beautiful festival, Rory leaning on her
mom shoulder.
La, la, la, la. La, la, la.
Cut to the Gilmore house. LORELAI: "Rory, what happened. Where is Jess?" Rory pushing a pile of dirty tissues away from her, took a deep breath.
RORY: "He loves me." LORELAI: "Who?" RORY: "Jess. He told me." LORELAI: * Gasp * "No way! Where is he now? Did you run into him?" RORY: "He ran." LORELAI: "He ran? Where? From you?" she frowned at Rory's melancholy look. Honey, I think you need some sleep. You will tell me all about it tomorrow."
Cut to commercial.
Come back; see that Rory's head is on Lorelai's lap, she is asleep. Lorelai is stroking Rory's hair. She gently gets up and rests Rory's head on a pillow.
Lorelai walks to Lukes. It's late, and the light was off. However, Lorelai knows where the spare key is. She reaches above the door and unlocks the door. She softly closes the door once inside, and tiptoes to the counter, and pulls up the opening. She walks up the musty, winding staircase, and opens the blurred glass door. She expected Luke to be in bed- snoring, but he was sitting at the table. Tapping his fingers, he said: "What took you?" ____________________________________________________________________________ __
I wont write more until I get at least 3 suggestions or comments. Remember, this was my first fic, so have mercy! =)
La, la, la, la. La, la, la.
Cut to the Gilmore house. LORELAI: "Rory, what happened. Where is Jess?" Rory pushing a pile of dirty tissues away from her, took a deep breath.
RORY: "He loves me." LORELAI: "Who?" RORY: "Jess. He told me." LORELAI: * Gasp * "No way! Where is he now? Did you run into him?" RORY: "He ran." LORELAI: "He ran? Where? From you?" she frowned at Rory's melancholy look. Honey, I think you need some sleep. You will tell me all about it tomorrow."
Cut to commercial.
Come back; see that Rory's head is on Lorelai's lap, she is asleep. Lorelai is stroking Rory's hair. She gently gets up and rests Rory's head on a pillow.
Lorelai walks to Lukes. It's late, and the light was off. However, Lorelai knows where the spare key is. She reaches above the door and unlocks the door. She softly closes the door once inside, and tiptoes to the counter, and pulls up the opening. She walks up the musty, winding staircase, and opens the blurred glass door. She expected Luke to be in bed- snoring, but he was sitting at the table. Tapping his fingers, he said: "What took you?" ____________________________________________________________________________ __
I wont write more until I get at least 3 suggestions or comments. Remember, this was my first fic, so have mercy! =)