Okay, here is a rewrite to my One Piece story. I'll need oc's but I have new ideas and lets get started.

Chapter One: A Last Hope.

Lightening shoots across the sky as a huge storm raged over a small village, but the storm was the least of the people's trouble.

"Run, THEIR COMING!" yelled a middle age man as he and sevrell others ran through the streets as the houses were a blaze.

"Look out." A young woman yelled as she ran through the crowed with a younger boy holding her hand.

"What do you wan..." the mayor was trying to pleaded with the attacks, only for one to shot him in the head at point blank range.

"Hahaha, will, I guess he knows now." said a shadowy figure with a smile on it face.

"Hey, you dare attack our leader." yelled a young man a he and three others tryed to attack the figures, but before they could do anything. One of the figures just appeared behind them with a sword darw. It then sheath the sword and the four men fell to the ground with blood spraying fom fatal wounds.

"Huh, that was too easy." the sword figure said a he looked over the crowed of fearing people. Afte sevrall other people fell the deffent attack from the figure. The leader stepped up.

"Hmmm, this isn't fun any more., So, let's finish this." he said as he held up his hand, formed a little ball of wind in his palm, and then it began to spin and grow. He started to laugh and then the ball bloo up, destorying the village and the whole island as turned into a waste land, with figures laughing.

15 years later.

It's a bright and sunny day, as a little girl run through the village, looking for some one. She wear a sun dress and sandas

"Oh, where is he?" she asked herself as she ran to the dock, that's when she heared snoring coming from a small rowboat. When she got to it, she saw a young man sleepng soundly. He was wearing black vest, blue jeans, and sneakers. "Oh,there he is." the girl said as she got just a foot from him, and smacked him upside he head.

"Oho, whats the big idea?" the boy said as he stood up. He stood about 6'2 feet tall and had long red hair. As he looked over and then saw the little girl. He just smiled as he got off the boat, he then said, " Oh, hey Suzy. hat's up?"

"My grandpa wants you before you leave." she said as she began to walk down the planks back the shore. The boy followed her closely down the dock. The two walk through town with others looking at them and soon the two where at a rickady shack on the out skirts of town. Then the two entered, with Suzy saying, "Grandpa, were here."

"'hic' There you are Raven." said an old man as he sipped at a bowl of soka. He was waering a white robe and red pants.

"What is it Ean?" Raven asked as he watch him sip more soka.

"Well, I heared,'hic', I know your starting your journey," Ean stops to take another sip of soka and continued, "And I wanted to give you someting."

"Really, what?" Raven asked excited about hearng this.

"Well, A great pirate captian needs a ship to be proud of, so," he stops again to finish off his soka and then said, "I'm going to give you a ship."

"Really which one" Raven said smiling at the juster.

"My very first one, the one that faced the most battles." Ean said as he stood up and walked out the shack, a little wozy. He then turned, not to the docks, but to a small cliff wih both Suzy and Raven folowing. As they got closer, the two kids saw a old, raddy ship that as seen better days.

"This it?" Suzy asked looking hard at it.

"Yep," Ean said with a smile as he looked at Raven, who was smiling at the shi.

"Sweet, I love her." Raven said as he jumped off the cliff and landed on the deck.

"Ha, I thought you would, now I stucked I up for few weeks." Ean said with a smile.

"Really? Thanks." Raven said as he pulled up the ancor, and used the wind to take off.

"Bye, Raven." Suzy said as Ean and her waved.

"See'ya, One day I'll come back, take you with me Suzy." Raven said as he waved back to the two.

"Remember Raven, Never change the way you think, you will alwas do the right thing." Ean said as he watched Raven sail along with Suzy.

"Grandpa, do you think he'll become the third Pirate King?" Suzy asked him.

"Yes, I do Suzy, Yes I do." Ean said as he smiled.

TBC

Next Time. With Raven started his journey, he ends up in trouble with two Marines, but will a unknow ally get him out, and join him.

This is a new One Pie fic I'll be exepting oc on my forum or PM. Their are two forums, one's for normal oc and the second is for the WarLords. To get to the app go to my profile, and theirs a lnk to it.

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