Hello everyone. ok, this is my first time publishing on here so PLEASE review because i wanna know if im any good.
thanks,
lyssie
"BONES!!" Booth cried, seeing her head go under due to the murdering scumbag dragging her down in the water with him. He called her name again when he saw her bob to the surface, spluttering before she was dragged down once again. He waited, praying with all his might, all his faith that she would come up again' but no such luck. He looked around for help in the split second before yanking off his suit jacket and plunging into the salty water.
It took him 10 precious seconds to get to the place where he last saw her auburn hair and he dove deep, his eyes wide and searching despite the stinging ocean water. He 't caused by the coldspotted her slight form after about a minute, just when the pressure was starting to kill his ears. One powerful stroke of his arms got him to her and he grabbed her with one arm while with his other and his feet he furiously paddled to the surface. They reached air at last, but Bones was unconscious.
"C'mon, bones, we can get through this!" he muttered as he sidestroked over to the bright orange inflatable lifeboat. He reached it and pulled the side down so he could lift her up into it. Booth followed and he felt for a pulse.
"No,no,no,no,no…… please, God, help me!" as he started CPR.
"Two breaths, thirty chest compressions. One, two, three, four…" He counted them out aloud. He blew another two breaths and checked her pulse. YES! He thought. He had a pulse, but no breathing. "C'mmon, Bones, I need you." he returned to her clammy mouth and blew another two breaths and leaned his ear against her nose listening
Her throat suddenly started convulsing and he heard a gagging sound so he pulled his head away, turning hers to the side. He backed up as far as the small raft would allow.
Bones vomited up seawater, coughed, spluttered, then vomited again. After a few more rounds of this she was able to breathe freely she looked up at her savior, who was silently thanking his savior. She wrapped her arms around him as tightly as she could, accidentally knocking him over an letting even more water in their life raft. Neither cared.
Booth landed hard on his back, Bones' cold arms circling his chest so tightly his breathing was constricted, and he held her against him just as tightly if not more. He planted a forceful kiss on the top of her head and rubbed her arms up and down so the friction would warm her up, not noticing that his own teeth were chattering.
Bones, however, did and when she looked up into his deep brown eyes thet were overflowing with concern looking back, she felt goosebumps on the arm he was rubbing that were't caused by the cold. She hooked her arms up under his shoulders, pulling herself up so they were nose to nose and pressed her lips against his.
His teeth stopped chattering.
ok was it good? please tell me cuz if y'all like it i'll see where the story goes.
PLEEZ review.
lyssie