So anyways, Let Me Break It Down For You, also known as... lmbidfy. This story is about people who travel to the Smash Mansion most likely on accident. There, they train under a certain smasher. This entire story will be an interactive one meaning there will be points where you can decide things. You know, I think I'll just tell you the rest at the end of the story. ;P Oh, and P.S. Nick is based off of me, but more like, what I WISH I was like. Anyfways, see you at the bottom! Hope you survive! P.S.S. This story also requires that you have SEEN Wes's Osohe Dance so go look it up on youtube or something.
Little do we know, any story that has ever been told, books, television, video games, fairy- tales. All of these may or may not exist in another dimension. Yes, there are people living in alternate dimensions that might be part of a series in our world. Certain people are born and these people have the ability to travel between these dimensions at will. They are born infants, but their minds manage to retain years of wisdom. At some point the child will discover its ability, travel to a different world, and learn of the great heroes that were there. The travelers themselves don't leak what they saw to the real world themselves, but… It's hard to say. Most likely they got drunk, and started ranting to a person who had power over the media or to a person who later came into contact with a person who had power over the media. As for your favorite TV show, I have no idea whether or not they really exist in an alternate dimension. All I know is how our world and the other worlds came into contact for the first time in long time. And it all starts with a dance.
Play Music: Wess's Osohe Dance
…
"YIPPEE!"
Of all the things you would see in a closed off cave with an eerie light, there was currently a young boy in his teens shaking his butt in front of a ten foot tall door.
"Here we go! Big Finish!" he said spinning around at an improbable speed. "BAM! TAKE THAT, YOU STUPID DANCE INSTRUCTRER!" he shouted striking a pose.
End Music
"Haha"
SMASH APPRENTICE
NICK MIN
Well, hello there. By strange coincidence, my name is Quizy. Here I'll lmbidfy to you. It is my job to keep you informed and I will take the liberty of explaining to you anything that needs to be explained. You will see me in this story every once in awhile, but not for long as the only times you'll see me are when there's something that a certain character or characters need to know in order for the story to progress. Anyways…
This is Nick. He's fifteen years old and pretty sweet and innocent… kind of. You see, he's very polite and always does the right thing, but… only if there's a hot girl involved. He became a womanizer around the age of fourteen and he's been happy as can be ever since. In some ways, he could also be considered a "hippy". He never generally denies this, but he'll get angry if you start stereotyping him for it. He has a general sense to him that says "So how's life going for you?" and he has a strong ability to accept the impossible and have his own style. So basically, he's a somewhat laid back womanizer guy who likes to chill out, flirt with girls, and be cool. His favorite games are Pikmin 2 and Mother 3. Nick is 6 feet tall. He has coal black hair that sticks up a little bit, dark brown eyes, and olive-tan skin. He has a medium build and generally wears some sort of black t-shirt with a creative pattern or peace sign on it with some regular jeans and tennis shoes. His introductory quote is "…Oh, hi there. Is this microphone on? Hey Master Hand? Can you come check? And just what's that supposed to mean? Hey! Wait! Were you being sarcastic or did you really mean that? MASTER HAND!"
As soon as Nick said "Haha" he blinked and while he blinked a great spectacle occurred. It appeared as the great door that stood in front of Nick opened by a little crack released a great flash of light. It lasted for less than half a second, but anyone who saw it was held improbably in time as the light was absorbed by the body. The light fast-forwarded time until the point where it started over and then propelled itself back to 1 second after it left in the form of golden dust that fell from the sky all over the earth. If you were so lucky as to witness it, you gained the ability to travel between dimensions at will and instantly realized the answers to all in existence, however since Nick blinked, he managed to miss the whole thing, but did manage to see the golden dust falling from the sky.
"…?" Nick stood for a minute, but then walked over to the door.
"H-Hi?" whispered Nick quietly, assuming that someone on the other side had begun to open the door up.
"HEY! KEEP IT DOWN!" shouted the new voice. Then the door opened all the way and a small boy about the size of Lucas flew out on a jetpack in the shape of bat wings and slowly descended to the ground, but the light was still overwhelming and Nick couldn't identify him right.
"I mean I just dimension traveled for the first time and I have to hear you shouting at me?!"
"But I wasn't sho-"
"SHUT UP! I don't want to hear your excuses! I'm captain of the Pig Mask Army, I'll have you know! If I didn't feel like beating you up myself, I could have a hundred troops on you right now!" He continued ranting, but then Nick's eyes widened a little bit and a small amount of drool came out.
"Captain of the… Wait a minute…C-C-Claus?!" shouted Nick and the light dimmed so that Nick could see Lucas's twin brother thought to be dead, Claus, or the Masked Man. Claus looked exactly the same as Lucas except with the exception of having red hair and wearing a blue-striped shirt instead of red, however a couple of years ago, Claus got into a horrible accident and had to be rebuilt entirely. He now wore a a gray helmet that had a glass plate over his left eye and a shadow cast over the other. He wore a brown shirt and orange pants with brown boots. His right arm was a cannon that connected to his back and on his back was a short sword and a cape that transformed into a jetpack in the shape of bat wings.
"Well, the Pig Mask Army was destroyed at the same time as my death, but you know it's kind of an automatic reaction for me to threat-" Claus was cut off by an Overwhelming bear hug from Nick that began to crush him and made his face start to turn colors.
"Urk…Woah…Dude…That's a little…Gay-ACK!" Nick dropped Claus on the ground who was considerably shorter and ended up falling on his butt after he realized he had just made himself look like he was trying to come on to Claus and blushed, but then realized that blushing made him look even more gay and blushed even more.
"Err, look, man, I'm not gay. It's just that well… YOU'RE MY FREAKING HERO!!!… Ah crap! I did it again!"
Claus stumbled up and looked at him.
"So… uh, How's it going?" started Nick.
Claus looked back down and took out a notepad.
"Easy, Claus, easy, just let the little kid figure out when he's gay-"
"I'M NOT GAY!!" shouted Nick.
"What the-?!" How had he known what he was thinking?
"Oh yeah, I forgot to mention, I can read the minds of plants… and if I try hard psychic people, but not animals or non-psychics and I can also see auras if I concentrate."
Claus lightened up a little bit thinking of how Mewtwo was going to go crazy when someone started invading his thoughts again.
"I bet it will."
"Would you quit that?!"
Claus opened up his notepad and sighed.
"Remember your therapy Claus, PK Thunders do not solve everything and they most certainly do not 'turn on' your girlfriend."
To Do: List
X Convince Palutena to resurrect
X Take Therapy lessons
X Get a job
4. Greet first Smash Apprentice
5. Meet with Hands
He crossed off number four on his list and closed the notebook to see Nick looking pleased with himself.
"So what are we gonna do now?" He said smiling, trying to keep calm.
Claus turned around to the door "PK THUNDER!!" He shot a peculiar colored PK Thunder into the blank space inside the door.
The Door lit up and opened all the way and one could see a portal that flashing all sorts of different colors. "Come on, we're going to meet your new master", he said looking back at Nick, but then added "Oh, and one other thing… don't tell Lucas you saw me. I don't want him to know I'm back yet."
Smash Mansion
Front Yard
Olimar was incredibly nervous. His entire suit was shaking and the small light at the end of his antenna was quivering. He had never expected to get an apprentice so soon, he had hardly even expected to get one at all. He was never even sure he wanted one. When Master Hand told him the first student would be his, he was incredibly shocked, but he decided this would be a great opportunity to work on his teaching skills. He couldn't help but shudder as he remembered what happened to his last student…
"Watch out Olimar!" shouted a younger astronaut in a blue space suit as Olimar grasped a purple pikmin's stem. Before him stood the most monstrous spider he had ever seen. It was armed with an arsenal of weapons that shot various hazards.
"Hold on, Louie!" Shouted Olimar. The Spider took out a giant flamethrower and pointed it at Olimar's head.
"Oh, mother-"
Just then, Nick fell out of a couple of clouds in the sky and landed on Olimar who was flattened under the weight.
"OOAH!" shouted Olimar as he was crushed under Nick's weight. Nick scrambled up to his feet hurriedly and pulled Olimar up to his side while apologizing.
"Oh, sorry Captain. Please excuse me. I just accidentally fell from the sky, hope you don't mind." stated an embarrassed Nick. Olimar tried to regain his balance, but the added weight of his helmet threw him off and he fell over on his back again a second later. "Oh it's fine. I'm just a little groggy, anyways you may just call me Olimar. I guess you must be Nick, my new apprentice." Nick held back a squeal as Olimar said this.
"This is so freaking exciting!!!"
At this moment, a nearby Red Pikmin took the liberty of plucking itself from the ground and supported Olimar. It patted him on the back and then it looked at Nick. And then it stared at Nick. "Your pikmin is very loyal to you." said Nick simply. Olimar looked at the pikmin with appreciation. And then he looked at Nick. He didn't need to be explained that he could see into the pikmin's mind.
The pikmin kept staring at Nick and Nick stared longingly at the pikmin too occupied by his own thoughts to listen to the pikmin's. Olimar understood that he could read the minds of plants. "Hey pikmin, what's your name?" quietly whispered Nick.
"I TOLD YOU TO KEEP IT DOWN!!!" shouted a voice from the sky. Just then a crackling thunder was heard and a blast of lightning streamed through the clouds and sent Nick rocketing through the mansion door. "I'M SOOOORYYYYY!!!"
"Woah!" Olimar quickly raced after him and as soon as they were gone, Claus descend from the clouds and the pikmin muttered something to itself in its plant language.
"Look there, Petal. There goes our future…"
"Petal" looked at Claus.
"Yeah, yeah, yeah, just because he can read the minds of plants and is the first one here automatically makes him 'the chosen one'".
Petal narrowed her eyes.
"Oh, well excuse me… So it's not called the chosen one anymore…Oh, well excuse me again, you don't even do prophecies ever since you lost your giant prophecy rock. What a waste of a perfectly good rock-Oh look at me, I'm arguing with a plant, just make sure he defeats the Giga Progg or whatever the prophecy was" Claus blasted off back into the clouds again before Petal's thoughts could reach him.
Smash Mansion
Living Room
Master Hand was tense. He was nervous about the whole apprentice thing that Quizy had convinced him to do. The idea of having children run amuck granted with super natural powers made him queasy. Next to him was Quizy, the dimensional traveler, who smiled and waved at what Master Hand thought was nothing, but was really me, the narrator. I gave an awkward wave back and continued narrating. Quizy looked a lot like Nick except he wore a brown cloak, was considerably calmer, a couple inches taller, and he had a little peach fuzz on his face.
"Tense Master Hand?" he asked
Master Hand grunted in response.
"Don't worry, I'm sure it will be-" Quizy was interrupted.
"-RYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!" screamed Nick crashing into the two.
"OOAH!" they both screamed as they fell over on their backs.
Nick scrambled up excitedly and Olimar dashed by his side and looked indifferently down at the two.
"Oops, sorry Master, or is it Crazy? No wait, it's Master Hand. Oh and sorry to you too, other guy." apologized Nick happily. He was really excited now.
Quizy stood up and Master Hand floated back up as well. "That's fine, oh, and no need to introduce yourself. My name's Quizy and this is probably the last time you'll see me for a while, but anyways, I've already gotten all the information I needed from the Masked Man. I already knew you were going to train under Olimar, he could see it in your mind so I convinced Master Hand to let him be the first to greet you." explained Quizy.
"Oh, so Claus really can do telepathy." muttered Nick.
Olimar wondered to himself who Claus and the Masked Man were.
"Well Nick, since this is the last time I'll see you I left your birthday present in the back yard! See ya!" said Quizy who strolled off casually waving goodbye to everyone in the room.
"What a cool guy. If I were a girl, I would totally want to date that guy, especially if I was a hot girl. Then I would really want to date him", thought Nick to himself.
"…Can I go get my birthday present now?"
"Well, Olimar, Nick, let's go get the paper work done now…" said Master Hand turning around and going up the stairs while ignoring Nick's request. Olimar followed, but Nick went out to the backyard. He went out and a small tear swelled in his right eye.
"It's… beautiful!" His face was overjoyed.
Smash Mansion
Master Hand's office
"Hey, where's Nick?"
"I think he went to go get his birthday present." Master Hand looked out the window and saw Nick jumping joyously around a green colored Onion.
Olimar looked over and gasped and ran over to push his face against the window.
"A N-N-New P-Pikmin?! A New Discovery! Oh joy, look out journal! Prepare to be written in tonight!" Olimar ran all the way down the stairs faster than Sonic and Captain Falcon on steroids and he could be seen crashing into the onion as Nick activated it and a small seed popped out of it. They were both jumping around like crazy.
Master Hand sighed as Crazy Hand crashed nonchalantly through the left wall.
"Look, big bro! A Green Onion! This is amazing! Alert the media! Tell all the smashers! Hey, Where are all the Smashers anyway…? Tell Georgely, my new pet psychotic, cyber-turtle with heat missile launchers! Tell-"
"Crazy, I told you to stop buying dangerous reptiles!"
"B-B-B-But-" *thud*
Crazy Hand passed out and landed on the floor, occasionally twitching.
"Oh no, I've got a headache already…"
To be continued… XD
Next time ~
Nick flopped over on his back while the light in the pit dimmed. He looked up at the sky depressingly. Then his head flopped over to the green pikmin cleaning up the bottom of the pit. "Why do you like it so clean? You were born in the dirt for crying out loud." Nick pulled himself into a meditating position and closed his eyes, humming silently to himself. His ears perked up moments later as he heard the sound of Olimar's ship crashing into the ground, but at the same time, the piercing cry of an angry bulborb. "Oh, great…"
YEAAAA! You survived the end of my story! Happies! Well, great, I hope you're all ready to join me and help me out because according to the preview I get stuck at the bottom of the pit with a neat-freak pikmin! Oh, and here are some side notes-When Claus talks about a giant prophecy rock and the Giga Progg, it was a failed pikmin fan fiction I never published, and No, Nick is not the chosen one, the chosen one is Olimar dummies, but I'm not even putting that in the story- If you didn't notice, I managed to work myself in the story, but that's the last time I'll be in the story for awhile (Except for right now because technically this is Quizy talking)- I actually started writing a story about Master Hand's and Crazy Hand's childhood. In it, Master Hand would always get picked on by everyone and Crazy Hand would always get really excited for no apparent reason and randomly pass out. I plan to use this in the story. He also owned a pet Anaconda named Jeffrey or something- Nick isn't really gay, he just gives people that feeling a lot and there will be Absolutely NO NickxClaus. Look you made me write it down... I feel all weird now.
RULES FOR ENTRY XD
Here's the list of available characters
Smashers:
Captain Falcon (Taken) King DeDeDe (Free) Diddy Kong (Taken)Donkey Kong (Taken) Falco (Taken) Fox (Taken) Mr. Game & Watch (Free) Ganondorf (Taken) Ike (Taken)
Kirby (Free) Bowser (Free) Link (Taken)Lucario (Taken)Lucas (Taken)Luigi (Taken) Mario (Taken) Marth (Free) Meta Knight (Taken) Ness (Free) Peach (Free) Pikachu (Free)
Olimar (Taken) Pit (Taken) Ivysaur (Free) Charizard (Free) Pokemon Trainer (Free) Squirtle (Free) Popo (Free) Nana (Free) Jigglypuff (Free) R.O.B. (Free)
Power Suit Samus (Taken) Sheik (Taken) Snake (Taken)Zero Suit Samus (Taken)Toon Link (Taken) Wario(Free) Wolf (Taken)Yoshi (Free) Zelda (Taken) Dr. Mario (Free)
Pichu (Free) Roy (Taken) Young Link (Taken) Mewtwo (Free) Toon Zelda (Free) Toon Sheik (Free) Plusle (Free) Minun (Free) Dixie Kong (Free) Master Hand (Free)
Crazy Hand (Free) Red Alloy (Free) Blue Alloy (Free) Yellow Alloy (Free) Green Alloy (Free) Sandbag (Free)
Villains:
Petey Piranha (Free) Rayquaza (Free) Porky Minch (Free) Galleom (Free) Ridley (Free) Duon 1 (Free) Duon 2 (Free) Meta Ridley (Free) Tabuu (Free)
Maybe you didn't notice, but all the cut characters are there as well as The original Smash characters.(I think it'd be funny to see Sandbag apprentice as a super intense fighter.) You can put polygons or wirefrimes too, but it doesn't really matter. And anyone who didn't snoop around too much when Brawl was still in development wouldn't know about the six incomplete fighter entries on the disc. The data showed Dr. Mario, Mewtwo, Roy, a Plusle Minun duo, Toon Zelda, Toon Sheik (Which might just be Tetra), and Dixie Kong so I put those on there too. However if you're too good for any of the basic characters, feel free to submit your own. Later, also decided to add bosses.
Here's how you apply
Character you want to train under: (As you can see, some people will train two people ex. Samus, Zelda, and even Pokemon Trainer and Nana can be trained under separately.)
Your Character's Name: (This is encouraged so that you can just submit yourselves as a main character so if you're not going to do you, at least make it sound realistic, but my character's name was Nick Min, the obvious pun being Pikmin- Get the idea? You don't have to do that though.)
Age: (whatever, except like old men/women or babies or something. I'm gonna say, I'm only gonna take people up to 26 years old)
Gender: (I dunno)
Original Quirk: (Writing about people who all have the same general quirks is a little boring. Create a unique quirk, doesn't have to appear right away. If you skip this, your character won't get too much screen time)
Your Character's Personality: (This is where the character's personality goes [Oh really?]Pretty basic. Put how your character would react to certain characters [Having no idea who they are, getting completely infuriated, getting on knees and bowing] Also put your character's personality- the main thing this section should be made of.)
Fighting Style: (and your character should not be completely defenseless, they should have some sort of fighting style before they learn from the masters. A lot of people had trouble with making their characters weak. The whole point of this entire story was that PEOPLE GO TO THE SMASH MANSION AND LEARN TO FIGHT like the smashers. And if they don't put it down here. this section should be very short) It's not really a big deal, it's just annoying having to repeat myself ;P
Your Character's Physical Traits: (Skin Color, Hair Color, Eye Color, Age, Stature, Face, Style, Clothes, Build. Put if they're bulky or lanky, short or tall, medium or in between, whatever, also please avoid doing weird species like star warriors/pokemon/anything else weird)
Overview:(Put three or four sentences describing your character overall and put anything that wouldn't go in any other categories here.)
Introductory Quote: (Also write how your character introduces themselves to the rest of the apprentices and smashers. Nick tried to do one, but failed miserably because he can't tell if the microphone is on and then got insulted by Master Hand. By the way, if you've written another fan fiction and want to reuse a character, that's great. They're more developed that way, but whatever works.)
Secrets: (This means that this entire category is something that you need to personally message me about. This category is optional though. It needs to be personally messaged because if I like what you say, then anyone who just felt like looking at the other reviews could see spoilers for the rest of this story so TELL ME IN SEEEEEECREEEET. This category includes plot-related stuff. If you want your character to fall in love, if you want to betray the smashers, if you secretly have someone that's been trying to kill you ever since you screwed up major. Something like that- anything that will get it's own arc. Put a dark secret that your character doesn't want anyone else to know)
Reactions: (How they would react to various things, like [These are just examples] fighting, flirting [cuz Nick will BE THERE], bombing, fire, death, birth, cook-off, Ganondorf in a dress, Tiger shark, magic lamp, Optumus Prime, whatever the heck you can think of.)
Loves: (What they love and love to do!)
Hates: (What they hate and hate to do!)
Attributes: (This would go under Personality, but I'm just reminding you of something you might of forgotten. Like if they're competitive, a sore-loser, loyal, lazy, random [I know you're all going to say random]
Hobbies: (What the heck do they do when they're not on screen?)
Room: (Everyone gets their own room eventually, What does your character's room look like?)
Home World: (Which world your character was born in "Real World" "Pokemon World" "F-Zero World" "Mushroom Kingdom" (THIS HELPS ME A LOT!)
Optional Stuff (You don't have to do this) (I'll also be updating every once in a while)
Birthday: (If you want your character's birthday to be specifically addressed in the story.)
Friends: (Check out other people's reviews to see their OCs or just pick the one's I've already written about. Also, which Smashers and other video game characters they would get along best with.)
Shenanigan: ( Submitting a small story idea you have that involves your character)
Various: (Anything completely random like Ex. "If your character were to be left alone in a room with a banana and a car wheel for several hours, what would happen", or The thing your character should never be trusted to handle Ex. "Jim Bean can never be trusted with a shovel because he always tries to bury himself alive!"
Speech: (If your character has a funny way of talking, says words that aren't said often, or likes to use metaphors or puns Ex. "Nick often mutters either ludicrous or ridiculous when there's something going on that doesn't include him" or if they get an accent like Cheerio, or say Japanese suffixes like Zee.)
Enviorment: (How they will act in certain weather, or certain mood Ex. "Jabalee will freak out in the fog because her great grandpappy was killed in the fog. She will also be oblivious to the mood of the room like she will act like normal when everything is real tense")
Morals: (Like... how would they react to a person coming on to them... If they would squish a helpless and defenseless bug, or just pluck and pluck all the little leaves off a tiny little bush. Also how they respect the law and agree with the rules of things.)
Assistant: (Ex. Peach's Toad, Olimar's Pikmin, Lucas's Rope Snake, Nick's Green Pikmin, Zee's Riolu, and Trey's Pegasus. Not supposed to be human, really just a bio weapon. Definitely NOT required, but if you want a little partner running around and helping you, put it here.)
Move set: (Try to make your character have an original move set as well as copy your trainer's move set.) Ex. If you trained under... Pikachu and your character fought with... nun chucks, then it would be some sort of combination of thunder shocks and spinning the nun chucks around. Or Mario, and you fought with your hands, then you could do anything from chucking poison shrooms instead of fireballs to jabbing people and having ice from ice flowers pinch the opponent. (This will only be used after the graduation phase of the story.) Also, how would your character arrive on the stage, Mario's pipe, Kirby's warp star~ be creative. Winning and losing poses and stuff. Need B Move, Down B, Up B, Side B, standard attacks, misc, and Final Smash. Be creative.
Team: Also, there will be teams for each character to fight on. There will be eight teams in total as well as the option to make a new independent team. Here are the options (These are all names I made up, you and your teammates can make up new ones. This also determines who you will share a dorm or whatever it's called. Bigger than a room yet smaller than a house.
Team Outrage: Simplicity is good. Fighters on this team give it their all, never quit, and are most likely muscle heads. People here know how to utilize brute force and weaponry. Team Leader is Link.
Team Lightning: Fighters on this team are the fastest out there, not just in pace, but mentally too. They keep their cool in intense situations and never slow down. Team Leader is Sonic.
Team Teeth: This group is made up completely of animal styled fighters. These fighters are completely vicious and are full of cunning tricks and other ways to annoy you. Team Leader is Pikachu.
Team Smarties: These fighters rely more on brain than brawn. They think things through before doing them and always have a back up plan for when something goes wrong. Team Leader is Mario.
Team Majesty: Fighters on here are known for their majestic way of attacking, fighting with style and grace. Very Wise and Smart people are on this team. Team Leader is Zelda.
Team Team: These Fighters rely on other people to get what they want. Their greatest weapon is each other and get together extremely well. They are filled with combination attacks. Team Leader is Olimar.
Team Cool: This team is filled with people who improvise everything. They know nothing and look good doing it. It's all part of the plan, they say when it's really not. Team Leader is Luigi.
Team Tricksters: A team filled with deviants who specialize in making themselves stronger by making their opponents weaker. Chocked full of techniques and style. Team Leader is Snake.
Sorry for talking about this for so long, but I want to make sure you give me long and extensive entries. The more detailed and interesting your character is, the more likely you are to become a main character. SO GOOD LUCK!
Alright, Alright, Alright, Alright… Hold on here.
Let me give you guys a bit more information. The Smash Apprentices will be living in the Smash Apprentice Mansion as in separate from the original Smash Mansion. People who don't have their own means of transportation (space ship, race car, flying horse) cannot get there easily as it is a two day hike on foot. If your character is over 16 then your trainer will give you some sort of vehicle at some point. (Like 2 hours for Sonic and 3 1/2 for people who have fast transportation and 6 for people who have things like a horse, small boat, or anything else that goes less than 30 mph. I don't know.)
Also, the MAIN thing here is this. Originally I was planning on having everyone come from the real world, but we get a Pokemon trainer so I was planning on everyone just being human, but then we get a Kirby so... HERE'S THE NEW DEAL! The only limit is this~ Your character has to be weak. As in "wouldn't last 30 seconds with a real smasher" Sorry if I'm coming off as angry while I'm writing. I'm actually very calm and understanding right now. So let me lmbidfy to you. The thing is the reason you are here is to train under a smasher not compete with them. 0~0...
Here's the basic sequence of events for this story.
1. You do some sort of retarded thing (jump down the toilet like Mario, do the Osohe dance, play Song of Time on a music instrument.)
2. Claus comes and gives you- an almost average person- a lift to Smash Mansion.
3. You are greeted by your mentor and make a good first impression.
4. You bump into Nick and his fancy Green Pikmin or another Smash Apprentice.
5. You ignore Master Hand's request to do paper work and go pick up your early birthday present.
6. There will be about 15 or something chapters about the first couple of Smash Apprentices coming through. (Before School Phase)
7. There will be another couple of chapters showing each person training under their master and interacting with each other. (During School Phase)
8. There will be some sort of chapter showing everyone getting their approval from their Master. (Graduation Phase)
9. Some sort of plot will finally take hold and we will all do something other than mope around Smash Mansion. (Adventure Phase)
Note: I will try to make it so anyone can join even if we've gotten an incredible way through the story already and I will try to do separate arcs for each character proving themselves to each other somewhere in time.
Also PLEASE send me any new information you have about your character. (Having to write entire dialogue and interaction about a character I only know 4 paragraphs about is A LITTLE TOO MUCH. Just a little ;p) Everyone doesn't get to be a main character. People who give me as much detail about their character get on my good side. People who don't give me much to work with will not get very far. Don't worry if your character seems to have a 2 page long summary. That's good.
And one thing I forgot to mention. You really only need to submit one character. The reason of this is so everyone gets to submit their own character and no one gets left out. You can however have buddies over with you. Someone asked if two of their pokemon could each separately train under a Smasher. My answer to this is (sorry) no. You ARE however, allowed to have your pokemon fight with you, simply mope around the mansion, OFFICIALY train under an item pokemon, but go and see and unofficially train under the person you wanted to train under originally. X)
I've already tried introducing four people at once and it really dragged, so each character gets their own chapter, but you'll probably notice a kind of "chapter grouping"
I forgot to mention as well (Devilish Smile Appears) As soon as everyone has gotten used to their surroundings they go under a certain "change". Crazy Hand straps you down to his examination table and doses you with questionable substance. The substance COMPLETELY REARRANGES YOUR DNA to make it so you are technically the spawn of your trainer.Unless of course you really like the way your character looks and acts now. This was really the whole inspiration for me writing this, but if you want to deny it, then the most you'll get is 2 inch difference or a pair of Elf ears, but people who train under Pokemon or animal characters will become anthropomorphic unless you're just too cool for that. Me, Nick's going down to 5 feet tall as well as get some Hocotatian elf ears.
Sorry about the tremendous stream of author's notes! The story really picks up around Ch. 4-6, So far, a lot of people like 6