Hello! A kid is talking to you! In the past this chapter was just a simple "Dialouge Simulator" and since I like to modify things, I felt like to edit this chapter, so here it is. This is my "Third" time to write a fanfiction. So you can now unleash your criticism while reviewing this.
Hyperdimension Neptunia - The Sudden Awakening
Enter Subject, 124.
Name: Jho Ryan.
Surname: Valdez Sebastian.
Species: Human.
Gender: Male.
Those were the words...
Until I fell asleep...
A beautiful plain... with flowers, trees and monsters...
There a kid was sleeping, without knowning what is happening around him...
"Hey! Hey! Wake up!" A not-so-great Angelic voice speaks.
"Look, Neptune, you shouldn't waste your energy! He's probably dead!" says a Tsundere.
"I don't need your opinion! No one would simply die under a tree!" says the voice.
"(Seriously... who's interrupting my nap...) Nnnghh... Who... Who's there?" he said, acting if he has already woke up.
"Ah! See! He's not dead! Hey, let me give ya a hand" the voice lends a hand to him and with that help, he finally stood up.
The boy, still doesn't know what's in front of him, but what if those are evil people? What if they're acting friendly, just to kill him without mercy after he opens his eyes? Well, if he doesn't decide to open his eyes, we'll never know who those people are, but we know that one of them is called "Neptune".
The boy has finally builded some courage and decided after thinking what would happen next, to open his eyes... 2 Girls were standing near him, he doesn't know what to say on this unexpected situation, but the girl with pink-hair asks: - "H-hey, are you feeling ok? Cause we found you sleeping under this tree, you know there's going to start a war... right?".
"A war?" says the boy.
The one with black pigtails replies: "Yes, a war, but first, what's your name?".
"Jho Ryan, Jho Ryan Valdez Sebastian" that is the name of our protagonist, the one who's eyes are not just filled with shyness, but are, and will always be filled with "Hidden Determination" or what we call it "clichè power".
The girl with pink hair suddenly speaks: "L-Look! They are coooooooming! Ready to finish this quest once and for all?".
"(Quest?)" says our boy, in his mind.
The one with black pigtails looks at Jho, saying: "Neptune, we should at least know if he's stronger enough to fight a battle, I'm curious after all."
Jho didn't expected this to happen and without hesitation tries to find something to fight with. And he found it, a wooden sword.
The one who's probably Neptune says: "Oh! It's my wooden sword! Mmhh... maybe I don't need it, it's yours now kiddo! And go get them! I'm curious too!"
"sigh." The boy was really happy to finally fight, we all know that kids sometimes dreams to do incredible fights with a sword, and finally his dream is becoming true...
"Are they really coming...?" Far away, an army of soldiers, tanks and helicopters were coming.
Scared, our child doesn't know what to do, but without hesitation does a swing that knocked-back the tanks, sent the helicopters right where they were coming and made the soldiers fly away from where they were standing. Scared, he cannot believe what he just do, and cried for a bit.
"N-Noire, this kid is... really good!" happily yells Neptune while jumping for no reason.
"Hmpf! I've got work to do on Lastation, feel free to visit me, kiddo." says the one called Noire, walking away from them.
"Did I... Did I do that...?" Jho couldn't still believe on what he did, but Neptune pats his head saying: "It's ok! No need to be scared! Hey! I've got a friend that probably knows you! Come with me, on Planeptune!".
Jho, feeling safe, follows Neptune and they began to walk... and walk... and walk...
*knock knock knock*
Another angelic voice can be heared behind the door: "Is that you Neptune?".
"Yup!" replies Neptune while opening the door.
With the door opened, Jho began to examine carefully the room, like if he's on a crime scene, Sherlock Holmes-Style!
It was a little girl, sitting on a floating book, she was the angelic voice and Jho was surprised.
The girl noticed Jho and quickly asked to Neptune: "Who's this little child? Is he lost?".
"No! He's Jho Ryan, a powerful boy who can knock-back your butt with a simple swing of my wooden sword!" Happily yells Neptune, again.
"Jho... never heard of you... and there's no data of you..." looks at Jho with a suspicious look.
Jho couldn't help to ask something to the little girl: "May I please know your name...?".
"Oh, such language, anyway, the name's Histoire. You can think of me as Neptune's "Mum", do you need something?" replies Histoire, while carrying a dress made somehow for Jho...
"I just... want to know if you can change my name..." says Jho while being a little embarrased.
"And what will be the new name?" asks Histoire smiling for some reason.
"Amtra, Amtra Yayuri." replies Jho.
"Ok... let me just put this here... and... Done! Here's your new name little one! Amtra Yayuri will now be your name, do you want to change gender? Because I can't do it... Te-he!" says Histoire.
"Woah, Histy! You were out-of-character for a second!" says Neptune.
"Oh, I'm sorry for that, anyway, why did you wanted to change your name? Amtra?" looks at Amtra with a suspicious look, again.
"Well, Jho Ryan Valdez Sebastian was a name very hard to memorize for some people..." explains Amtra.
"Good enough... it was great to see you Amtra, I hope we can meet again!" says good-bye to Amtra while giving a look at those dresses with a very weird smile...
Our little Jho- I mean, Amtra, changed his name and now by Neptune's request, he follows her to visit her other friends. With this little adventure, our little child will have a great experience in this world, where things will never be as expected... like:
"By the way, I'm 13" points out Amtra.
"WHAT?!"
TO BE CONTINUED
