Clash of the Populars
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Max and Fang are back. Fang is the new eye candy for the populars Lissa and Brigid, but with Max climbing rapidly up the popularity ladder (not that she cares.) Can Max save him or will she fall too… {No Wings} FAX FAX FAX FAX FAX
Lissa POV
Nick… The name was like music to my sexy ears. Wait… Everything on me is sexy so just imagine every time. His dark floppy hair and his eyes were everything that a girl wanted. I wanted him and I'm Lissa. He is so mine.
Brigid, my best friend, strutted up. Brigid was the Queen Bee, or Queen Slut, but I can't tell her that!
OMG! I like so have to introduce myself. I'm Lissa McSlutta! I'm in my sophomore year and I have shiny red hair and pretty green eyes. Mummy and Daddy are rich so like I get the best designer clothes and I'm really popular. I was like a boy magnet!
" Hey, Liss! OMG! I so wanna show you new meat!" she shrieked as she dragged me around the corner and there in his glory stood MY man.
My Nicky. This might be tough…
Max POV
I arrived at school. I pulled off my helmet and released my hair. The lusty look of boys and the jealous sighs of girls followed after me. I sped down the hallway, trying to attract as least attention as possible.
~Flashback
The cold water splashed my face showing my blue covers with the icy liquid.
"ELLA!" I hollered angrily, sitting up, startled. Ella, my little sister, sat at the foot of my bed, a red bucket in her hands with a small mocking smile on my face.
Ok. I'm Maximum Ride. The badass chick. Call me Max. I'm in my sophomore year of high school and I have two sisters. They are the complete opposite of me. My best friend is Nudge and she is currently dating Gazzy or Zephyr Smith. She was in the same year and had caramel skin and beautiful straight black hair.
There is Angel. Her real name is Angela Batchelor. She has flowing golden wavy locks that come from my mum and the bluest eyes you could ever see. She's 10. My other sister is the devil. Ella. She is currently going out with Iggy Venom, Nicholas Venom's brother. She has dark brown ringlets that fall in tumbles to her hips and a huge contagious smile. She's 14. They are opposites but they have one weapon. Bambi eyes.
Angel stood at the foot of my bed. She bit her lip and her eyes began to well with tears. The weapon. I squeezed my eyes shut, trying at all costs to avoid obvious death. One glance sent my resolve disintegrating into the dust.
I was dragged to the bathroom as various hair products were whipped out and my hair was curled. Angel went to Ella's closet and chose some clothes. Ella curled my hair and applied makeup. I fidgeted as the foundation went on my skin. THIS IS HELL!
I ran out of the bathroom. Finally, I was free! I gasped. I had spotted myself in the mirror downstairs. I had curly brown hair with blond streaks. It had been braided and pulled into a ponytail. My dull brown eyes were now sparkling and had a nice natural glow. The skinny jeans and the white tank top showed off my curves to make me look sexy but not slutty. The look was finished by Converses and my leather jacket.
~End Flashback
I soon spotted the new target for the twevils, Brigid and Lissa. Let me explain. sighed. They are the sluts, the whores and the not-so-surprising popular bitches with their own posse. I sighed. The poor unsuspecting guy. He would be wrapped around their finger soon. Brigid and Lissa attached themselves to the dark boy. Isn't he emo? The girls giggled as he glared. Only just. I might like this guy…
The two bitches squeezed his biceps as he grimaced and withdrew. Good luck…
Fang POV
Look here. I'm Fang. Most people call me Nick but only Iggy and my close friends can call me Fang. I am in my sophomore year of high school and I'm not that popular but girls say I'm hot. (Their words not mine.)
A girl walked up. Nothing special. In fact, there was something seriously wrong.
"NICKY! Why didn't you call me?" she complained in her high, nasally voice. Recognition started to form in my mind. OH! It was her. My lab partner for the past week. Oops…
Flashback
"Nick" the red head sitting at my table said, twirling her locks. I turned away as the teacher called my name. I looked back at my work before I realised that my partner was trying to reach that area. I shifted uncomfortably. She leaned her head on my shoulder as I tried subtly inch away. And I don't want to bore your brain with useless facts but she is a sucky flirter. As soon as the bell rang, she swiped a permanent marker and scribbled over my arm before winking a strutting and using her hips with so much more force than necessary. Needless to say, it took a long time in the showers to get rid of that number…
End Flashback
"Uhhhh, what's your name?" I asked, quizzically. Her name was like Misa?
She grinned, thinking I was interested with her. Uh Oh…
"Lissa," she screamed. I grimaced and realised that another one of the skanks, Brianna or something, had noticed me. Oh God, hell was so awaiting…
How dare that bitch go near my man! Sure, she was by BFFL but like she doesn't deserve Nicky. I was most popular! She wasn't worth my men. She was only worth scum.
I twirled my glossy hair around my finger and smiled, coyly. He clenched his sexy jaw. OMG! He is so trying not to jump me! This is it. I turned up the flirting up to 100% and fluttered my eyelashes. I pushed my boobs up and lifted my dress and lent down so he could she my big ones. I pursed my lips and went for it.
"Hey, hot stuff; wanna come over to my house?" I smirked. This was easy. I was so pro at this.
"No," he said bluntly before walking away. WHAT? No one rejects Brigid Dwyer. It is on.
Fang POV
Thank God. I got away from those people. My eyes. I need a checkup with the optometrist. Her body was too plastic. Was she a Slutty Barbie?
Apparently a dude called Max is joining our PE class since he didn't have a boxing partner. Probably a jackass. Most people are in our grade.
" NICHOLAS!" Coach yelled. A girl stood next to him. She had tumbling golden streaks and dreamy brown eyes. Her smug smile was se- . Fang, you're a rock. You don't do this. Those curves. Okay, I'm gonna shut up.
"Yeah, Nicholas," she said childishly before adding, "By the way, don't check out your new boxing partner."
I blushed. WAIT?! Max was a girl!
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