I hate this part right here.
Lily Evans has doing her rounds on Hogwarts. She was a beutiful red-haired Gryffindor monitor.
She was in the seven floor when she heard a noise comming from a door. She knocked and imitate Finch.
"You sick students, get of right now" she snapped and putted her hands on her waist, one with her wand.
"Fine, where leaving." a voice very know for Lily spoke, James Potter. He leaved de room followed by Sirius Black and two blond girls.
-Well, well, well, dumass and asshole and their 'kiss friends'" she snapped with a sarcastic smile. "You two, the idiots, the blonds, just go" she add, making the boys confuse "to your house, and, make me a favor and never again date them."
The two girls looked maddly at Lily and keept walking to their houses.
"Ooh, oh no, you both no!" She said mad to them, that where trying to scape "Here, N-O-W" she spelled de word. "So, my clients, James Potter and Sirius Black again hooking up girl stupid blonde girls. So, well, one question, hooking up in the same room, isn't it akward?"
"Nope, he's my friend." Sirius said.
"Okay. Anyway, the next time I get you, even with the invisible cloak – and know, I have a way to find that you are out even with this –, I will report for Dumbledore." she said with a big and perfect smile. She took her wand and a paper and wrote "Less twenty points for Gryffindor."
"Whata? Lily love, don't do this, twenty points, it's too much!" James beg.
"HA, you even heard the rest, twenty points for each head!" They opened the mouth to spoke but she was faster "One word and more twenty points for head. House, NOW!" she dragged them until there and, when she was going to put James in the common room, he stopped her for a moment.
"Lily, that was not what you are..."
"Look, I'm not your girlfriend, you don't own anything for me." she spoke with a sweet air..
"I know you hate me..."
"Hate? Hate, I don't hate you, I'm just dissapointed with you. But common room, now."
"Merlin, that's even worst!"
She pulled him into the common room and keept with the rounds.
But she couldn't. She wanted Snape to her her friend again, she wanted that he never went to Slytherin, she wanted that everything would be different She just needed peace. Just a little....
The set in the floor of the fat lady corridor and started to crying, with her face buryied in her legs.
"Lily" a soft voice asked her. James Potter. She wimped fastly her tears and looked at him. "Why are you crying?"
"Bullshit, I'm not crying. Common room, NOW!" she said again to him. But he didn't heard her. He set on the floor with her and lyied his back on the wall.
"Now... last year my... my.... my sister was murderd. By a death eather. She... she was 19, her name was Elizabeth, but everybody called her as Lizzie. She was amazing, she was like me, but prettiest. And, one mornig she woke up with a noise, and there they was, in her house. Bellatrix Lestrange did it. She killed her. That's why I don't follow the rules. Because I wanna now about stuff, because I wanna live. Even if was with the love of my life dissapointed with me." he said saddly.
"I'm sorry, I guess." She whispered, leaning her head in the wall.
"Don't be. It's not your fault" he whispered back.
"But feels like it is." she whispered, wepping her tears.