A/N: Okay, so this story was the very first story that I had ever posted on .
Posted in June of 2007, I was 15 years old; It is now June of 2010, and I recently celebrated my 18th birthday.
This story is on of my most popular stories (for whatever reason), and I am STILL getting reviews on it with readers telling me how much they like it.
So I went back and read it-only to be horror-struck at just how ohmigod-EDWARD-i-love-you-candy-caffiene-let's-ignore-every-single-grammar-rule-EVER it was. Albeit I was only fifteen, and I was overly obsessed with Twilight at the time. So I decided to revamp (not to be punny) this good ole' story.
The story is the same. I changed some of the more juvenile "he said. she said. I did this. I did that. Then I did this," simplistic things, and added some better descriptions. AND GOOD LORD, I fixed all of the god-awful comma splices. WHY DIDN'T ANYONE TELL ME THERE WERE SO MANY? It was like "So, Yankee Doodle, went to town, riding, on a pony, stuck, a feather, in his FREAKING HAT, and called, it macaroni." Sheesh. I was literally laughing at all of my many grammatical errors.
But never fear, dear readers! I have reviewed and heavily edited this story. I tried to add a little more flow, but I will say that I couldn't make it all that I wanted it to be...nonetheless, The Dare will always be near and dear to my heart.
Enjoy, faithful readers.
:)
-Cullenistic Attitude.