Okay so this is just the prolouge. Here is the deal I get 10 reviews I will try to update the next chapter today! I'm almost done with it, so if I get 10 I promise to post it as soon as it is done. Otherwise the chapter will be out tommorow or the day afer. Can anyone guess who the POV is?? If you do I'll give the first two a preview of the next chapter.
Unknown POV:
Tears streamed down her face, but there was not a sound. The room was dark, all of the windows covered. And in the corner there was a vampire, her golden eyes duller than they would have been due to the film that seemed to cover them, and then slowly one tear fell and landed in her lap as she watched the girl in front of her struggling, thrashing, yet making not a sound and the tears stopped the change was almost complete. Her heart beat continued once twice and faltered, with one more beat it stopped. She laid still for a moment in almost a fake slumber, she sat up and she opened her eyes, once brown now a deep crimson. The vampire in the chair rushed to her side, and recognition crossed her face. She started dry sobbing into the other girls shoulder. A moment later the door burst open flooding the room with light. And the two of them gasped because in the doorway stood Renee gaping at the two of them.
So tell me what you think! I kind of like this idea, but I have a couple other stories I want to work so I might not update as frequently. Review. Please?