"Emaya Forever Done Right"
As many of you were outraged by the unnecessary death of a much beloved character, I decided to rewrite the Emaya part of the story. I felt that the writers and creator of the show got lazy when it came to Emaya. They never showed anything, just implied it. When Maya came back, I thought for sure they would continue this beautifully crafted love story. But instead they chose to give Maya's love story to Paige. I still don't get it. I don't think I ever will.
I didn't appreciate the writers changing the PLL timeline either. When Spencer said that Paige and Emily were dating on and off for a year, I was like that's impossible. Maya and Emily were dating on and off for less than a year so how could this be remotely probable. Paige and Emily dated on and off for like a month and a half, if that. Paige tried to drown Emily and she was cruel to her. Maya would never do that. And the whole when you drink you say what you really feel. Whatever! That was the laziest piece of writing to date on that show.
Bianca Lawson and Shay Mitchell have this chemistry that is much more than that. I can't explain it. It just is. Lindsay Shaw and Shay Mitchell have chemistry but not Bianca Lawson and Shay Mitchell chemistry. I felt as though when Lindsay and Shay kissed they couldn't wait for the director to yell, 'Cut'. However, I felt that when Bianca and Shay kissed they didn't hear the director yell, 'Cut'. I don't get how the writers and creator of the show couldn't see that. I don't know why they love this Pailey nonsense so much. It makes absolutely no sense to me.
When I saw Bianca Lawson in "All About Christmas Eve", I couldn't believe how young she looked, especially the scenes at the mini golf course. When she did that infamous head tilt, I was like, that is so Maya. She looked younger in this movie than they made her look on her last episode of PLL. Conspiracy? Maybe.
So this is my rewrite of the Emaya love story. The chapters are mostly in chronological order starting with Maya returning from boot camp. The swim party chapter is complete but you'll have to wait for that until I rewrite the morning after they say I love you to each other and the mandatory overnight at Rosewood High. I might even throw in some flashbacks for birthdays that we never saw and Christmas that we never saw.
I'm giving this an M rating for mature love scenes.
Enjoy!
Chapter 1: Maya Returns
"Maya's back, huh. What did you two do last night?" asked Aria.
"We had a nice dinner at the grill and talked a lot. I couldn't stop smiling the whole time. I was like a love struck teenager," offered Emily.
"You are a love struck teenager!" exclaimed Hannah.
"So, today is her first day back?" inquired Spencer.
"Yep."
"You look really nervous. Why? You already saw her so it's not like seeing her again is gonna be a surprise," reminded Spencer.
"I know. I'm just anxious I guess. It's not like I was completely faithful to her while she was away."
"Yeah, well was she completely faithful to you?" asked Aria.
At that moment, Paige McCullers interrupts her thoughts.
"Hey, can I talk to you for a minute? It's important."
"Umm, well I guess," Emily manages as she looks around for her Maya.
They walk over to Emily's locker as the Liars look on.
"I told my parents," stated Paige.
"You told them what?" inquired Emily.
"Emily, I told them that I'm gay."
"What, oh my god, that's so great! I'm so happy for you!"
"Emily, I'm out. Isn't that what came between us?"
"It was part of it but things have changed," Emily says as she looks away.
"What things? Em, we can be together out in the open now. I'm not afraid anymore. I don't care what other people think," assures Paige.
At that moment, something catches the attention of the rest of the school in that hallway. Students drop their books; mouths fall open; guys and girls eye sex this amazing creature sauntering down the hallway. Jeans molded to her perfectly tight body; black leather boots rise to just below her knee; a form fitting tee shirt that accentuates her beautifully sexy breasts; hair straightened down her back side; lips pressed together forming a very purposeful yet kind of sinister smile as Maya continues towards her destination…Emily Fields.
The liars look on as Hannah states oh so Hannahlike, "If Caleb and I break up and Emily and Maya don't get back together, I so have dibs on Maya."
Aria and Spencer give Hannah a look and continue to watch the action unfold.
Paige spots Maya first as Emily turns around and sees what all the fuss is about. Emily freezes, her breathing begins to surge as her heart is practically pounding out of her chest.
Maya approaches, pinning Emily up against her locker. She dives into the sexiest, most smoldering kiss you could possibly imagine as everyone looks on including Paige. Emily gives just as much to the kiss as Maya. Mouths open, tongues exploring, lips crashing. Finally, they pull apart, breathing heavily.
Paige starts to shout at Maya, "What the fuck was that?!"
To which Maya turns towards Paige and with all her force behind her, punches Paige right in the face. Paige tumbles backwards as Maya hovers over her while everyone else is aghast.
Maya stands over Paige and warns, "It ain't ova Bitch!"
Maya grabs Emily's hand, dragging her away.
Emily stops, pulling Maya to face her and demands, "What was that for?"
"That, Emily, was a warning to Paige. She tried to drown you and she's not going to get away with it!"
Emily relaxes as she sizes up this incredibly sexy girl who just defended her honor. "You're lucky you look so hot otherwise I'm not sure I would have let that go."
Maya steps closer to Emily and whispers in her ear, "Let's get out of here."
Emily whispers back, "What's the hurry."
Maya eye sexes Emily and purrs sexily, "The things I'm going to do to you."
Emily's breathing hitches; those all too familiar butterflies dancing throughout her body; her legs weaken as Maya pulls her gently yet eagerly to the school parking lot.
EPOV
We arrive at her house, Ali's old house. We ascend the staircase to her room. Oh my god what the fuck is she going to do to me!
Maya closes her drapes; she puts on some sexy music and leads me over to her bed. I'm breathing faster and faster as she does that signature head tilt of hers and then that seductive smile of hers and then that infamous eye sex of hers. She puts my hands on her waist as she presses her body against me. She puts one of her hands on my waist and the other hand on the back of my neck gently bringing my ear closer to her lips so she can say in her low, gravely, seductive voice, "I'm gonna make you scream until your throat is raw."
Oh my fucking god! I'm a little scared but in a good way. My body is filled with excitement and anticipation. My breathing is quick and short. I lie back on her bed with nothing but a nervous smile as Maya's beautiful, sexy, nude body hovers over me. Oh god what is she going to do to me!
MPOV
There she lies, naked beneath me. I'm thinking so many naughty wonderful thoughts. It's been three months of wanting, yearning, waiting for this moment. Once I'm done with her, she will never want for another. I can feel her getting wetter by the second beneath me. Our juices combine as I thrust myself slowly, grinding myself onto her. I quicken my pace as my girl begins to scream my name just as I said she would. A wicked, 'I told you so' smile forms on my oh so satisfied face. And I'm just getting started.
I pull away from Emily who gives me a 'why the fuck are you stopping' look. I spread her legs, licking up her inner thigh until I reach her center. I spread her with my fingers and decide to tease her with my breath; blowing ever so gently across her center. Emily yells my name, sounding hoarser and hoarser as I knew she would. I giggle to myself as I continue to torture my beauty.
I place my mouth over her sweet spot and suck mercilessly. There she goes again calling out my name; cursing up a storm; I've never heard her use the word 'fuck' in so many different ways. I love hearing her say it or rather shout it.
I continue my torturous journey, placing two fingers on the outside of her entrance. I tease her by slipping both fingers a touch deeper and as she starts to thrust her hips against me, I withdraw them. Emily's breathing is so labored; she is glistening and she is pissed!
I start to relax her once again by entering her body with one, then two, then three fingers. She screams for more. Oh yeah, I've been waiting to do this for so long and now I can do it whenever I want. I move effortlessly deeper and deeper inside of her. I can feel her begin to tighten but before she can I maneuver my entire hand into her. She screams louder and longer; things I never thought I would ever hear coming from her sweet, sweet mouth. I smile devilishly as I watch her head roll back and her body arch for me. I move with her, helping her to achieve the most spectacular orgasm she has ever had. She tightens and releases as I find that spot that makes her legs shake until they become limp from exhaustion. She continues to strain her voice with 'Mayas' and 'fucks' and 'oh my gods'.
I remove my hand and begin to lick every ounce of my beautiful, sweet Emily. I kiss up to her sexy, pouty lips; a glint in my eyes reveals my true intentions, "I told you I would make your throat raw."
With that, Emily takes in a deep breath and expels in a very rough raspy Me like sexiness, "the things you did to me. I, I can't even right now." I place my body behind hers and wrap my arms around her shivering body. I hold her so close to me as I breathe out, "I'm back and I'm not going anywhere. You are mine always and forever." To that, Emily eases, "always and forever."
