SasuHina- The love that was ment to be, but never seen
As readers of Naruto, we, for the most part, saw things in Naruto's point of view. Hinata had confessed her feelings for Naruto back when he fought Pain, and in some episodes (fillers) it showed more about Hinata's point of view, which only expressed her feelings for Naruto even more. Meanwhile Sasuke was on his own quest to defeat his brother who turned out to have a different mentality than we had originaly thought, or at least most of us did. He did quite a marvelous job in fooling us the exact way he had fooled Sasuke. Hinata was inlove with Naruto, Naruto is too busy trying to get Sasuke back and is still confused about his feelings for Sakura..but, what about Sasuke? Who has he had eyes for. I dont remember Sasuke and Hinata ever talking. (unless you cosider that 3 second conversation in the 2nd movie where Hinata is in the boat and she said "Sasuke is that you?" and he said "enough talk"...and that was pretty much it.) Im going to try to show you my SasuHina version. its pretty hard if you keep them in character, so bare with me.
this story will start inbetween of Naruto and Naruto Shippuuden (yes..its double 'p' and double 'u'..ShiPPUUden).Starting with Sasuke's POV.
He stood up from his crouched position, drenched in sweat. He had his white sleved shirt off, having it hanged behind him thanks to his purple shimenawa that was tied around his waist. He wore his black pants with a blue cloth hanging from half way up his stomach to his knees. He wasn't panting, and his eyes were cold and emotionless as they always have been. He stood on the water, his chakra focused on his feet to keep him from falling in. He looks back at the water fall, the water hitting the lake, making its roaring sound. His right hand was on his sword of Kusanagi, his left was free and at his side. He withdrew his sword and then moved his right hand up, setting the back of it on his forehead and wipeing the sweat off.
Without saying a word, he walked onto the shore of the lake, the only noise he was making was the sound of his feet stepping on the ground. he walked off into the forest, at the same time putting his white long sleved shirt back on. It didnt take him long to get used to the clothes. It made it easier for him to move around. Not to mention, it was way better, incase his wings were to come out, all he would have to do is remove his shirt as he did at the begining of his training. He closed his eyes for a breif moment, allowing his body to catch its breath.
He didnt want to admit it, as hard headed as he was, but in the back of his mind was Hinata Hyuga. The girl who never seemed to have an inch of interest in him. The only girl he had ever known of, that wasnt drooling over him. Instead, she was inlove with that idiot, Naruto. In his head, he didnt understand why she would like someone like him.
He let out a deep breath, no one but him knew what was on his mind. He set his right hand on his left shoulder and closed his eyes once again, shrugging off the thought. He didnt have time to think about that, and even if he did, it wasnt worth the time to think over it. He had more important things to think about, like his brother, Itachi. Just thinking about him sent a rush of anger through Sasuke's veins. He wanted to become stronger and get revenge on what his older brother had done. He left him alone, he left him with hatred, he left him with the hunger for revenge. After all, he considered himself "the avenger".
Sasuke then makes a sudden stop in his tracks. He has known that someone was watching him, and he knew exactly who it was too. His eyes still being closed, he spoke in his cold voice "you have something for me to do, dont you." he remained his eyes closed. a soothing and familiar voice speaks out, "i have an errand for you my dear Sasuke." Sasuke truns around to see Orochimaru walking out of the bushes. "an errand?" His voice didnt seem all that interested but he was curious, though he wore the same expression. Orochimaru steps closer, stopping a few feet away from Sasuke. Orochimaru had his usual wild smile on his face, the look meaning things were going his way. Sasuke looks at Orochimaru, curiously waiting for him to speak. Orochimaru finally speaks, "go to the hidden cloud village in the country of lightning. There is where our two akatsuki members claim to have something for me. they wanted me to go personally to go get it but my destination is elsewhere. Kabuto and I have some business to take care of..Would you do me the favor of filling in for me and seeing what they could possibly want? I figured it would be better if you fill in for me incase they have any information on your brother". Sasuke's eyes seemed to suddently have a hint of hatred and anger. He then closed his eyes and turned around, keeping his cool and remaining calm. He starting to walk away. Orochimaru's voice lingered in his ears as he spoke "by the way..your training is going marvelously. wont be long before you end up stronger than your brother." Orochimaru grinned to himself before walking into the bushed, dissapearing from the scene. Sasuke walks on his own path, heading to the village hidden in the clouds.
Along the way Sasuke caught himself thinking of the Hyuga girl again. The fact that they never talked of even came close to any kind of contact. As he walked, he raised his right hand and placed it on his left shoulder. he tilted his head slightly to the right as he masaged his left shoulder a bit, brushing off the thought again. He eyes still closed, he placed a rather annoyed look on his face. It was that pose that usually had the girls go nuts for him. He did it to simply relax and loosen the tension he had. he lets out a small and silent sigh. through his head he knew he would have to pass by the leaf village to arrive faster to the cloud village...or he could go around the leaf village and take longer to get to the cloud village. If what Orochimaru told him was true, if they did have information on his brother, he wanted to find out as fast as he could. He removed his right hand from his left shoulder and tilted his head back up right, letting his right arm hang on his side again. He opened his eyes. He knew what he had to do, he had to go through the leaf village to get to the cloud village sooner. His mind set and his determination in order, he took off at a faster pace, running through the woods, reluctantly heading to the leaf village.
***this is the first chapter so far. ill be updating it soon. im always open for ideas and comments (as long as they are good) im trying really hard to keep them in character. hope you are enjoying it so far***
