My first go at a chapter story!
Chapter 1
It was a cold dark evening in New York city, And as a mist crawled over the rooftops, a strange dark cloud that looked like it was made of ash slid through the streets. The dark mist was thinking about its next meal. It sank down through the man-hole cover and into the sewers. It was searching and starving.
'I must find food' it thought as it made its way through the sewers it found a door, he could hear laughter coming from inside
'hmm now i must find the purest of the beings' he thought as he slid through the door.
He knew that nobody could see him as he made his way towards the laughter. He entered the room to see a family of 4 turtles and what seemed to be a giant rat, he noticed that they were laughing at the turtle with the orange mask.
He crept closer to the family studying them closely he decided to go from oldest to youngest. He started with the rat, he realised that this rat was not pure, its soul did not shine with the brightest light so he crept towards the turtle with the blue mask. His spirit was strong and shone brightly but he knew it wasn't the brightest here. He made his way towards the red masked turtle his spirit was the dullest in the room but still shone bright, but that wasn't enough for the starving mist, He made his way to the purple masked turtle, his spirit was one of the brightest he had ever seen, but still not the brightest. That left the orange banded turtle last, he made his way towards him and realised he was so bright it blinded the mist, this turtles innocence was outstanding, he was so pure that the mist couldn't take his eyes off of him, he knew that this turtle was pure because he was the most protected. It would be difficult to get to him but it would be so worth it just to consume his soul.
He realised that the room had went quiet, The rat and the blue banded turtle had sensed him. he made his way towards the orange banded turtle, he had to hide within him before the others realised where he was. He crawled up the leg and made his way to the turtles chest. He could see that the turtle could feel him but he slipped inside anyway.
Once he was in he made his way towards that bright beam of light, an orb of pure white beauty, but found that when he got close he was pushed away. He couldn't understand what was happening, then he realised, The pure soul was protected by the turtles love of having his family there with him.
The mist knew that would have to change, so he settled down to rest. he would wait until morning to start his plan. He fell asleep dreaming of the pure soul he was about to devour, He could barely wait.
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