this is my second fic. wow. it feels strange to say that. well, my other one is called poison heart, and it is a inuyasha fic. this, i hope, will be slightly better as far as romance and the storyline and all. plz plz plz plz review. i love critisim, and if i screw up majorly, then i will simply rewrite it. these are slightly important, so read these. you hear!? READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hinata was something that she was not often. She was pissed off. She attacked a large tree without mercy. Closing her eyes, she let out her anger. Her imagined Kiba standing there, and she attacked all his vitals, hitting them right on. Then she hit all of his chakra points, all right on the head. Then, she wound all her chakra into her legs, and with one loud yell, she kicked with all her strength at the trunk of the tree. A nano-second before her leg made contact with the tree, she let out the chakra with so much force, that it cracked right down the middle, and broke in two. She had just broke a tree trunk that was at least a hundred feet in diameter. She didn't care that her shins and palms were bloodied and that it smeared on her face when she swiped away a loose hair. Kiba had done something that she could never forgive, and that she would fix right now. She jumped up, and began the search for the other shinobi of her team.
She found him in a large grassy meadow with Akamaru. Hinata landed in front of him causing him to jump.
"Oi, you scared me Hinata-chan." Without responding, she moved forward. When she was just inches from him, and gathered all the chakra she could into her palms, and thrust it out at Kiba, forcing it to circle back into her system. He was knocked back nearly twenty feet.
"What the h-"
"You liar." Hinata seethed. The first words that she had spoken in nearly an hour.
"What?"
"You lied to me. You lied to me like you lied to all the other girls that you dated. You lied to Ino, Sakura, Temari, and Tenten to didn't you?" She stepped closer and closer, her face red and contorted in anger. He had betrayed her trust.
"But I bet you got to them didn't you? You told them that it wouldn't hurt, that you would be their first and last time, didn't you?" She was finally close enough to grab him. She lifted him up to her level, and glared at them. "Then you took them out on a nice date, and back to your place so you could have sex with them!!" She screamed, throwing him across the meadow.
He landed with a thud, and Hinata activated her Byukakagan. "One of them said no. Temari told you no. She refused to screw you, so you raped her to get what you wanted. Isn't that right?! Didn't she say no, and you got it anyway!?" Hinata yelled, and she read his heart rate. She was right. Hinata yelled, and she threw a firing ball of chakra at him. He ducked, just long enough for Hinata to get away.
Naruto had left nearly five years ago, and over that time, Hinata had changed greatly. She let her hair grow out, and now it was nearly to her waist. At first, she was all alone. Naruto had been her inspiration, the one thing that kept her going as a ninja. Kiba had been her friend, but she never thought he would ask her out. He did, and they had been going out for two of those five years. He told her the right things to make her feel happy. Soon, her stutter faded, and her hesitation along with it. She moved out of the Hyuga mansion, and into the a new home,who was more than glad to get a ninja with great potiential out of there.
Hinata had learned chakra control, among other things. She learned that she had a temper. It didn't flare often, but when it did, she could throw a jonin to the floor. She was one now, and she was training to become an ANBU Black-op. Her father only realized what a great heir he had had, but it was far too late. Hinata had given that "honor" to Hanabi.
Her sense of style had changed along with everything else. She wore things that exposed parts of her body that she never would have shown before; her stomach, her legs...her arms above the elbow. She wasn't a slut, but she did have a little less modesty. That night, Temai had run into Hinata's house and was shaking and crying. She said that she had a secret that she had been to scared to say before, that it had happened nearly three years ago. Hinata thought that what ever it was, three years was far too long to keep something, anything, away from someone that would take care of it.
Then she heard what had happened, and she didn't blame her at all. Kiba had said the same things to her the day before that he had said to Temari right before he raped her.
"I want to take you out on a special date. You can't tell anyone. I haven't done this with anyone before, but I think that you'll have fun." Hinata spat at the thought.
She was up in a tree, leaning against the trunk, and she heard a yell come from below her. She had literally spat.
"Who the hell did that?!" A loud, obnoxious, familiar voice yelled. It was obviously male, and an octave lower, but she still knew who it was.
"Naruto-kun?" She called out.
"Oi! Where are you, you little-" Naruto began, but stopped as he jumped up to Hinata's level.
"You're the one that spit a lugie on me?"
"Oh, sorry. I didn't mean to spit on you."
"Then who were you aiming for?"
"No one in particular. Hey, how'd the training go?"
"Fine. You don't stutter."
"I don't do a lot of things anymore. I moved out of the Hyuga manor, and into the my own home. I stopped chopping off my hair...I stopped being all that my father said I should be. I am a much better fighter than Hanabi, or Neji even. You can't stay here and talk to me, you need to report to Tsunade don't you?"
"No, not really." He smiled at her then jumped back off the tree. "I'll see you later!!" Naruto yelled from the bottom, Hinata rolled her eyes in response, and jumped back down the opposite way.
Hinata is up before dawn, kicking at a tree again. When her shins were bloodied and sore, she punched with such force that the wood splintered. When she couldn't feel her knuckles anymore, she began her weapons training. After she ran out, and dulled the rest, she began her chakra control, and the Hyuga style. She was much better than she had been. Her father wished that he had showed her more compassion, or atleast allowed her to modify it to fit her body type.
Hinata was glistening with sweat when she heard a familiar scream, one that she had heard only once before. It was one that was rarely heard, by a girl who was rarely caught off guard. This girl had been paranoid, and continued to forget her weapon at home. This was one of those times. Temari was defenseless, and there was only one person that could make that blood curdling sound come from her throat.
She darted through the forest to where she heard the scream. There was where she found Temari, on the ground with her hair undone, and tangled. Kiba straddled her, holding her arms over her head with one hand, and ripping at her clothes with the other. Hinata was over thrown by anger. She gathered all the power she could, and she ran for Kiba, kicking him squarely in the head. She preformed one hand signal, and appeared where he landed, jumping on to his stomach. She spat in his face, and preceded to hit him until blood was pouring out of his nose.
"Why are you such a sick guy?!" She cried out between punches. "Why do you think that you can get away with this?!"
"I can." He muttered, then was knocked out with a hard blow, throwing his head to the left. He was almost dead. Hinata activated her Byuakagun, and slowly hit all the main points to make sure that he stayed that way for a few hours, maybe a day.
Hinata slowly stood, and walked over to Temari, who was sitting, holding her knees close to herself.
"Temari-kun. It's me, Hinata. Can I come a little closer?" She asked softly.
"Hinata...chan?"
"Yeah, Temari, it's me."
"Is he..."
"Don't worry about him. I need you to do me a favor, okay?"
"O...okay."
"I want you to stand up, and come with me. I'm going to take you to the Hyuga Manor, and let Neji-san take Kiba-chan to Hokaga-sama. Can you stand?"
"I...He...already...I'm not...a..."
"Oh my God. He already raped you?" Temari nodded, tears brimming her eyes.
"Okay...you need to go right to Tsunade-sama. But I need to get him thrown in prison...or in hell. Crap." Hinata sat down next to Temari, and put a arm around her friends shoulders. It was then that both of the girls heard someone coming through the woods at a leisurely pace. Temari jumped, and scampered back, and Hinata stood, and threw a kunai at the person coming through the woods.
"Oi!! Who the hell threw that?!" A male voice asked, running through the woods to enter the opening in which Hinata stood protectively over Temari.
"Naruto-kun!" She cried, and glanced at the kunai in his hand.
"Please, I need you to help me."
"Why, what's up?" He glanced over to Kiba, then did a double take. "What the hell happened to him!?"
"I need you to take him to Hokage-sama. I'll be right behind you with her." Hinata replied, venom dripping from her voice.
"First tell me what happened."
"I saw him doing something that he shouldn't have, and gave him not even a third of the punishment that he deserves! Are you going to help me or not?" She yelled, flaring up with more anger. Naruto flinched, and complied, pulling Kiba onto his shoulders, and he took off for the Hokage.
sorry to all kiba lovers, hate it for ya. i wanted something that made the toughest character seem helpless to add a bit of shika/tema in there. review please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
