Good evening all (well, its evening for me! is 10:43 in QLD at the mo!)
This is my poem for The Hideaway (link in my profile) Poetry Competition for July.
I really like this poem. its a cross over of Both potter men, and their thoughts about the red haired loves of their lives!
just so you know:
James says the BOLD lines
Harry says the ITALICS lines
Both potters say the BOLD ITALIC lines
A Potter's Obsession.
My Obsession daily haunts me.
But her anger doesn't make me fear the girl I want.
Yes, I do want her, but I have fears for her.
The man that could kill her is slinking around his old haunt.
Her red hair, red like her passionate heart.
Her red hair, red as the blood my heart pumps, longing to reverse my decision.
Why wont you let me stay?
Why can't you stay away?
Let the waters flow gently, bringing me to you...
Let the banks on the great lake keep you grounded, keep you seated, away from me..
Pass, pass, I let all your rejections pass,
Just leave it be, you'll be mine someday.
Pass, pass, just please let me pass
As soon as he's dead I'll come claim you heart.
But you continue to stare at me
Eloquent and daring
Spirited and daunting,
With one look, it is confirmed,
my obsession will not stray
My love for you...
Lily...
Ginny...
will not die this day
Well, let me know what you think! i want all the reviews I can get
AND > > > > if your from the Hideaway, let me know!