Tomoko and Yui Komori

Heyo booklovers! So I got this idea a while back, but then I didn't like the chapter so I deleted it to fix it and that was about 2 weeks ago. Yes, yes, I know there are a bunch of fanfics on Yui having a sister, but the idea wouldn't leave me alone. Let me know what you think!

I looked up from composing a song for my violin and looked out the window at the house, more like mansion, we were approaching. I still had second thoughts about this, despite Yui's assurances that everything would be fine. The car dropped us off, letting us get our stuff, and zoomed off, leaving us coughing in the dust. "Jerk" I muttered, brushing dirt off my dark blue knit sweater and out of my long blond braid. "Maybe he was just in a hurry. Come on, Tomoko, it's starting to rain. "Yui said and we walked up the steps and she knocked using the knocker.

Lightning flashed and she cringed. She hated thunderstorms and I hugged her. "Thanks Tomoko." She said, smiling at me and I smiled back. The door opened and we looked at each other, confused and slightly creeped out. We walked in and the door shut behind us. I was starting to get a bad feeling about this. "Hello!" Yui yelled loudly, and I winced at how loud her voice sounded. "Yui, maybe you should stop yelling." I said, but her eyes focused on a guy who looked like he was our age and she ignored me. I looked at him and hesitated, my bad feeling getting worse. She walked over to him, ignoring my attempts to grab her arm. I sighed and followed her over, cursing under my breath, getting over there just in time for him to sit up and pull her down onto the couch next to him. "Hey jerk, you leave my sister alone!" I yelled, trying to get her away from him. Wait, were those… fangs? A horrible suspicion started piecing itself together in my head.
"Ayato, how many times have I had to tell you? The foyer is for greeting visitors, take such activities to your room." A tall impeccably dressed man with black hair and red eyes said to the red haired creep. "Please help us!" Yui said, running over to him. "Who are you two?" he asked us. "Our father told us we were supposed to be living here for now on." I said, tugging on the end of my long braid which hung down to my waist, a nervous habit of mine. "You didn't say anything about that, Pancake." Ayato said to Yui, and she retorted, "That's because you grabbed me out of nowhere and… did you just call me "Pancake"?" She asked. "My sister's name is Yui Komori, not Pancake and don't you grab her like that again, got it?" I said sharply, loosening my knife from i's sheath in my sweater pocket. The black haired man sighed and pushed his glasses further up his nose. "This is a very strange situation, and must be solved. Please follow me." He said and turned and walked away. Yui and I glanced at each other and started jogging to follow him, Yui glancing over her shoulder at Ayato, who was watching her back.

We came to a sitting room and Yui and I sat down on the couch. We heard laughter and glanced up as another red headed fedora wearing guy our age said, "I thought I smelled human in here! Two new bitch- chans to play with!" He said and I narrowed my dark blue eyes at him then nearly jumped out of my skin as I felt something touch my neck and it turned out to be his tongue and I glared at him, and realized that he had moved way too fast to be human. Yui shrieked and I turned to look at her and saw a kid with purple hair clutching a teddy bear. I stood up, pulling Yui up with me and we backed up a couple of steps. She yelped as the guy with the fedora licked her cheek and I gave him a withering look and was about to say something when the guy with the black hair said," Laito and Kanato, that is extremely rude behavior to someone you've just met.", looking sternly at them. "But Reiji, everyone wants to taste something sweet." Fedora boy whined. "Pancake belongs to Yours Truly, you can have her sister." Ayato said, looking up. "The way you call yourself "Yours Truly" is really starting to piss me off." An ornery voice said and Ayato jumped, saying "Subaru, show yourself!" looking wildly around. "Over here." The voice said and I looked over at the wall to see yet another teenage boy, this one with pink hair and red eyes. "What excuse do you have for waking me up from my nap?" He growled, and Yui asked, "Um, where did you come from?" not expecting him to slam his fist into the wall and yell, "I asked first!" She winced and I put an arm around her shoulders. OK, I was done being quiet! "Don't talk to my sister like that! Our most sincere apologies for waking you up from your precious nap!" I snapped, and he glared back at me and opened his mouth to say something back when Reiji said, "That's enough you two!" and glared at us then turned his attention to a blonde haired teenage boy lying on a couch.
"Shu, do you anything about this?" He asked and Shu said, "Possibly." Not even opening his eyes. "Don't "possibly" me. I asked a question and I expect an answer." Reiji said, irritation in his voice. Shu sighed and said, "That man called and said that there were two new brides coming and not to kill them." "Well, if we can't kill them, then it looks like we're going to have a verrry long relationship with them." Ayato said and I frowned, not liking this one bit! "No one said anything to us about brides" I started and Yui finished, "And, to be honest, you guys are kind of weird." She said and we started backing up when Yui slipped and fell, scraping her knee. "Yui, are you alright?" I asked pulling her up and we glanced at the guys and… Holy Crud! They're eyes were glowing and those were definitely fangs! "Vampires!" Yui and I said together and she grabbed her cross necklace and yelled, "Get back!" Shu only smirked and Reiji said crossly, "Do you really think that crosses, garlic and the like actually harm us? How pathetic!" OK, I guess we were running then. I grabbed Yui's hand and started running, knowing she would keep up. We passed Kanato who smiled and said, "I will break you!" we kept running and saw a phone up ahead and Yui rushed over to it, picking up the phone and held up the cord which had been cut. "I told you that you didn't need a phone while you were staying with us, bitch-chan." Laito said and she and I looked around for the source of the voice and she started to backing up, only to back up into Laito who grabbed her shoulders. I ran over and promptly kicked him in the shin, causing him to let go of her. "Run, Yui, run!" I yelled, trying to run, but Laito grabbed the end of my braid and pulled me back to him. "My, my, you are quite the little warrior, aren't you?" he said, chuckling, ignoring my stomping on his feet. I felt his breath just before he bit my neck and I hissed in pain and felt myself go limp and darkness started closing in. I had been ordered to protect Yui and I had already failed. "I'm sorry, Yui, please forgive me." I thought then lost consciousness.

After several fixs and detail add-ins, I can re-update this story! Yea! Let me know if the first chapter was OK and let me know who you ship Yui with and who I should ship Tomoko with! Peace out, booklovers!