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Eagletail watched the clan gather around the new kits, Harekit and poppykit who blinked up at the warriors. Eagletail watched from a distance in the darkest part of Thunderclan camp. He may have been kin to those squealing scraps of fur but he didn't love them. He had no mate; no she cat would look twice at the brown and white warrior.
Dawnstripe purred at her first kits while her mate Duststar talked to the other warriors. The young leader was proud to have such a beautiful mate and two wonderful kits. Eagletail felt resentment at his brother. He had everything. A loyal clan, a mate, kits. Everything Eagletail wanted.
Snowpaw ran up to Eagletail with a big grin on her face. "Their so cute!" She squealed. "I hope one day I have kits even more adorable!"
"Well you'll have a mate perfect for you. You will have a handsome mate who you will have many kits with." Eagletail growled.
"I hope he is handsome, kind, wonderful! Maybe he'll have amber eyes." Snowpaw said brushing against his fur.
Eagletail jumped up, shook his pelt, and left the camp. He stalked off to the border with Riverclan. He sat down on sunningrocks; which was theirs at the moment. Thunderclan had recently fought for them again and won. Riverclan has made effort to reclaim the heap of rocks so Eagletail didn't feel the need to be aware. He just stared down sunnickrocks face at the water thinking violent thoughts.
Then he heard pawsteps behind him and jumped up and growled into the forest behind him. His pelt bristled and his eyes scanned every tree, bush, and crevice. He scented the air but only caught a whiff of someone. But, they weren't any clan scent that he knew of. "Hello Eagletail. I'll be watching you." The voice whispered. Then the scent was gone.
"Who? Who are you?" Eagletail called out. But no voice answered his question.
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