This is my new story. It's called Heartbreak and its set in New Moon after Edward left Bella. This is just the preface and I need to know what you think of it before I continue with the rest of the story.
Sam xx
Preface
My breathing was heavy, my heart was racing, my palms sweaty, and yet I knew I couldn't stop long to get my breath back.
I collapsed under the oak tree and peered behind me.
Silence.
Maybe too quiet, my mind thought and it felt eerie being here on my own.
Where are you when I need you Edward? My head hissed his name, putting him down as guilty.
Guilty for leaving me, guilty for never coming back, guilty for moving on without me, guilty to lying to me, guilty for duping me into believing that he loved me…
I felt tears awaking, but I forced them away, like everything else, as I needed to be silent if I was going to survive. I stood up slowly and ran to my escape. I jumped into the ditch and piled leaves onto me to cover my scent.
"Bella," she cooed.
I held my breath and just prayed that she couldn't see me. Water from the rain we had from last week seeped into my clothes and I retained myself from shivering. If I shivered now, everything would be over and no-one would find me. My rotting corpse led under here forever. The woods would be quiet once again.
"Bella, I can see your foot." She chuckled, but I stayed rooted to the spot.
"Fine, if you want to do it the hard when then I'll come to get you." She moved closer, and I knew my life was coming to an end.
Please god, please save me. I've got Charlie to think about. Please
So, what'd you think?
Sam xx