I am now editing all of my previous chapters, in every story, so ya. Sorry that they were so sucky in the first place.
The day had been peaceful, as always. Nothing to warn what would happen later. In fact, this day was a day to celebrate. Today, the Yondaime Hokage was celebrating the birth of his second child, a baby girl, with his wife and one year old son. His son had come to look like a baby Yondaime, and his new daughter looks just like his wife, Kushina, with an exception of a streak of purple down the middle of the red heads hair. The day was perfect, that is until young Kakashi Hatake bursts into the room.
"Yondaime-sama, there is a mass problem!" Kakashi urges as he ran into the room.
"Calm down, Kakashi, what is it?" The Yondaime says smoothly, trying to calm the boy down.
"The guards were feeling a mass potency of chakra, so they looked out into the horizon. The Kyuub was running towards them, and is almost here, destroying everything in its path!" Everyone gasps, and looks around worriedly.
"No, this is very bad. Gather all available ninja, go to the academy first and tell them to evacuate the children. Then spread the word to ninja, and help them with the civilians. I don't think its going to be a good day at all." Minato sighs.
Kushina looks up at Minato in shock. "Minato, what are you going to do, you can't defeat the Kyuubi!" She whispers worriedly.
"I know, but I have to try. I trust that you will watch the children?" With a sad nod from kushina, he jumps out the window to ready the ninja.
Battle field
When Minato reaches the battlefield, it was gruesome. Bodies of ninja and no longer identified flesh were everywhere, blood painting the ground and anyone on it. The Kyuubi was standing crouched, using its tails and chakra to defeat the ninja still able to fight.
There was no way to defeat it, unless... No, it was under construction, a prototype. But, it was all they had left.
"Asuma, watch the frontier for me, I think I have a way to stop Kyuubi." Minato ordered his old friend.
"Hai!" Asuma answered, ordering the ninja to focus.
Hospital
Minato runs into Kushina's room, and sees her sleeping soundly while carrying their new baby.
"I am sorry love, but I need the children for this, take care of them." Right before he leaves, he is knocked unconscious by Sarutobi.
"Sorry Minato, but I will do this. Kakashi, come with me so that you may be a witness and bring the children back." He orders, getting a sad nod from the boy.
battle field lalalalalalalalalalalalal sorry i was bored, to lazy to erase. continue!
Aarutobi walks on the battle field, everyone backing away at his firm order. Suddenly, Kyuubi stills and cease fire when he notices the ninja also doing so. Sarutobi walks forward, right in front fo the beast and stands perfectly still as Kyuubi stares at him. He stares unflinchingly into the eyes of Kyuubi, until it speeks.
"Hahahah, they send an old man, a boy, and a little girl, I'm shaking in my pelt. You think you can defeat me, THE GREAT KYUUBI NO KITSUNE!"
As he rants, the girls eyes open and she stares at kyuubi questioningly. The demon shows her his fangs and scary eyes, but all that does is make her stare more and giggle quietly, while one year old naruto is shaking in fear crying silently.
"Ahe is interesting, interesting indeed. Tell you what, I am quite boared, I will let you seal me inside of them, as long as my soul and influence are sealed in to her. The boy can have my chakra, the girl will not need it when my plans for her are complete."
Sarutobi nods firmly and does the Jutsu Minato was to do, calling the Death God and saving the village.
After the children were brought back to a skeptical Minato and a curious Jiraiya, Kakashi tells them everything.
"So, you check his seal, i'll check her seal" Jiraiya offers, getting a nod from Minato.
After a few minutes, Jiraiya gasps. "Youre not gonna like this, minato. Kyuubi quickly altered the seal some how, because he can easily influence her. But there's something wrong, like he's trying to merge, but he wants to wait. We cant seal it ,though we could accidentally seal something else off, or make it worse. I just recommend you to watch her carefully." And with that, jiraiays gone.
"Minato, what do we do? I don't want that thing to influence our daughter." The Yondaime sighed tiredly,"Theres nothing we can do, we can only watch and hope that the demon doesn't do as much as jiraiya said it would."
Seal/mindscape thing
"Lets see, ah here we are."
chi's infant body manifests, and she smiles happily at the demon.
"I will train you to be the best, none of my hosts will be defenseless baby's, you will be here at any free time you have, I will teach you until I have no reason to, then I will give you all my power. Come, kit, let me show you the way to greatness, young oni..."