You Told Me Once of Friendship

Hey everyone! This is my first attempt at a Lord of the Rings poem. In fact, it's my first real attempt at any poem. So please tell me whether you like it or not, what you think about it, how I can improve it... things like that.

This poem is about Aragorn and Legolas. You should easily be able to figure out what has happened to them. ;)

Disclaimer: I do not own Aragorn or Legolas.

Beta: Kalisona

OoOoOoOoOoOoO

You told me once of friendship,

of how it would always be.

You told me once of hardship,

of how it would never be.

OoOoO

But here we lay upon the ground,

our hands and feet are tightly bound.

Our captors warn us, "Not a sound,

or else you'll be beaten another round!"

OoOoO

They harshly beat and mock us

each and every day.

On what we need to focus

is how to get away.

OoOoO

Out of nowhere the arrows fly,

striking the orcs that instantly die.

An elven warrior approaches and sighs,

"What will your fathers say? Oh my..."

OoOoO

We now lie in the healing room,

our imprisonment, our cell.

How long we will have this accursed doom

only time will tell.

OoOoO

But at least we were together

while suffering the torture and weather.

I will never find one that is better;

you will be my friend forever.

OoOoO

You told me once of friendship,

of how it would always be.

You told me once of hardship,

of how it would probably be.

OoOoOoOoOoOoO

Please tell me what you think of it!

Arodiel