My Redwall

Chapter 1

This story is dedicated 2 the late Brian Jacques. Do u think he would like it?

Hi, my name is Ramona Darkfur Shadow'ness Ebony Lee, and I'm a sqouse, which is a pentagram between a squirrel and a mouse. I'm also a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have black fur with pink streaks in it (that's how I got my name), and limpid blue eyes. I'm not related to Amy Lee of Evanescence even though we have the same last name but a lot of animals tell me I look like her. I live at a big castle called Redwall Abbey where there are lots of cool and gothic animals like mice and squirrels and moles and badgers. But sometimes we get attacked by the bad animals, the vermin.

Anyway, today I was walking in the Abbey courtyard. It was snowing and also raining at the same time so there was no sun which I was very happy about. I was wearing a gothic black top, a black miniskirt and black ripped-up jeans.

And then suddenly I heard a voice call "Hi Ramona!"

I gasped. It was… Matthias!

"Hi," I said back shyly but then I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

TO BE CONTINUED

AN: IS it good? Please tell me fangs!