HEEHEE!1! dis is mi first ficcie so plz b nice! if u guyzz rivew enuff, ill post the nest installlmentt1!

oh! there mite b a lil bad language!

disclaimer: i dun own roruni kenshin TT. but i do hav Cds n cds of him drools8...

now... on wi t da stooooooory!

The rain poured buckits down the window sill. Grey light filtered through the glass as Aoshi lay on the bed, staring straight up at the ceeling. The world wuz dark and gloomy... just like his mood. Why? Why did it hav to be ihm? he was only sixteen.he
couldn't be posibly delt such a cruel fate! is parents had died, left him at such a young age. dead in a car crash! why oh why?
HE COULDN'T TAKE THIS SHIT ANYMORE!

"I CANT TAKE THIS SHIT ANYMORE!" he yelled angirly, and thru his pilow against the wall. he pawsed, then got up and put the pillow back. He looked at the batterd pilow. it reminded him of his parents. All bashed up and shit. blood all over the walls in the dining room. aOshi punched tha wall and made a huuge dent. The
angiryness inside of him was building up, thretening to explode...JUST LIKE HIS PARENTS! aoshi screamed in inner pain and collapsed on the bed. the Hurt was eating him up inside. then, he heard a doorbel ring. He walked there and then he opened the dor and then he saw a gril,
"ehllo!1" Jade said happily. Its a lovely day today isnt it?" She then stopped when she saw the sad face painted in the other persuns face. "wus wrang."

"nuffin shrugs sholders" he replId "mah rooma relli meeszed up, so letes go outside.."
"r u sure?"
"yeah... just chill dude, alright?" jaDe and aoshI were
at teh mall. they goes into supre and get an outfi!t. A blu midriff top with lots of gllitters n swirls n a skrt with pink cow patches. They was having a grate tym and AOshi allmost 4got all about his ded pearents...everythin was go ing smoothily until they went ta a place taht sold trips to hawa-ie. "KAWA-IE!1" jade sCremed wen she saw da dancing hawa-ie girl robut. bUt Aoshi was standing silently. jade noticed an saw teears globulating (Authers Note: LOL! Globulate is SUCH A KAWA-IE WORD!) in the cornors o f h i s sparklingg, merky safire eyes. aoSHi wa s sadly reminndedd of his father becase he e had one in his car. ..

"theirIS somthin mixplaced isn theyr?"
"no..."
"cum on. Jost tell me."
"...all riht. my...my parents died." then he could feel all the
angiryness cuming back! he slamed his phist upon the table and stood up!He ran to the kitchin and grabed the butchur niffe n wuz about to ram it into his hert but then Jade stopped it. "NO! ILOVE YOU!1" seh cried and then crid into aoshi's chest. the tears fell down in streeks and landed on the flor. Aoshi cried too and then he sed "ILU TO JADE!I DON THINK I CUOLD EVRE LIVE WITHOUT YOU AGAIN!"
"les go home. Mm--okay!"

LOOOOLLLZZZ! i ttly cant wait until da next chappie! >. ! there mite be a lil bit of luv brewin XDDddDD!

rivew 4 me kays?

luv y'all!