Yeah, whats up guys. I was reading The Trainer Rises and I found my own story confusing.
So I decided to redo it.
To start things off I've made a little prequel thing that will be like 5 chapters, not a big story. But it will focus on how Ash was supposed to be heart broken
Right now the story takes place after the Unova League. Ash came in 1st place giving him the honor to battle the elite 4 and the champion Alder.
May has also been successful and won her 1st grand festival, by beating Harley at the finals. She is now a top coordinator.
After Ash returned to Pallet Town he found out May's big win. He called Brock if he wanted to travel with him to the Johto and he said yes.
Now our heroes are at the train thing to goldenrod city.
Chapter 1: Saving May
"Man, I can't wait to see May and everyone, right Brock?" Ash asked as they were on a Train closing in on Goldenrod City.
They originally wanted to go on a ferry but the Train from Saffron city to Goldenrod City was much faster and it was also the destination for the Grand Festival.
"Yeah, it's been a while hasn't it?" Brock replied.
"Yup, wonder what kind of new Pokemon May has…..she is a top coordinator after all.
"Well, I kept in touch with her and her team hasn't really made any changes."
"Oh that's too bad, I thought she might've had some new Johto pokemon..….but I'm pretty sure they've gotten really strong. Maybe I should challenge her to a battle…."
"Ash, you'll never change will you? He always thinks about battles….I wonder if he'll ever fall for a girl considering his denseness." Brock thought.
After about 10 minutes they finally arrived at Goldenrod City. It was probably the biggest city in Johto and the most crowded one too.
Ash and Brock were searching for May but there was no luck with all the rushing passengers ….well rushing past them.
Right when Ash and Brock were about to leave the station Ash was tackled by a very familiar coordinator. He was now locked in a bear hug by May.
"I…..missed…..you…..too…..May." Ash choked out since he couldn't breathe.
When May finally let go of Ash, Brock held out a hand he also got tight hug but not as tight as Ash's.
"Congratulations May! You finally achieved your dream!" Ash cried out.
"Thanks Ash. But I'm really mad at you though. Not only did you miss my grand festival but you never called! Brock did a few times, but you didn't even try to keep in touch!" May said slightly irritated at Ash.
"Sorry, I was just really busy on training and stuff." Ash said sheepishly while a blush on his face, due to his "close encounter" with May.
"Ok, but if we ever travel separate again you better call." May warned while she noticed Ash's blush. "Hey Ash, why is your face get red?"
"Oh, um that's because…um…" Ash stuttered as he started blushing even more.
"May, I thinks it's the after effects of your tight hug." Brock said making May blush at her sudden outburst towards Ash.
"Um, how about we go to the pokemon center and meet up with Dawn and everyone." May asked shyly with her blush still visible.
"Yeah, that's, um a good idea." Ash said with his blush starting to fade away.
Brock couldn't help but chuckle at the sight. Once they reached the Pokemon center they could see Dawn, Drew and Solidad waiting for them.
After the quick reunion, Dawn asked "What took you guys so long?"
May and Ash started blushing as they recalled the event.
"It was nothing; there was just this huge crowd that was hard to get by." Brock said saving May and Ash from the embarrassment.
Solidad and Dawn just shrugged but Drew noticed May's sudden shyness. This was not going the right way for him.
Once everyone got into the Pokemon Center lounge they started talking about their journeys.
Ash was talking about his whole experience at the Unova League and his battle against Virgil.
"So, I was against this super tough opponent who uses all eeveelutions and in the end it was Pikachu against Jolteon…"
*Flashback*
"Alright Pikachu, this is the final battle. If we win this one, than we can Challenge Alder and the Elite Four!" Ash cried out to Pikachu.
"Pika!"
"Good luck getting past me though! Jolteon start off with a pin missile!" Virgil yelled.
"Pikachu, spin while using iron tail to block it!"
As the pin missiles came charging at Pikachu, its tail turned into a metallic color and shined in the sun. Pikachu jumped and spun making the pin missiles useless as the tail deflected them away.
"Now quick attack while Pikachu is busy with the Pin Missiles!"
The Jolteon charged at Pikachu with an incredible speed.
"Stop Jolteon in its tracks and use Fake Out!"
The mid air Pikachu quickly stopped spinning and hit its tail right on the floor causing a large shock wave and pushed Jolteon back a few feet.
"You can do this! Jolteon use thunderbolt!"
Virgil cried out the attack but Jolteon was shaking with its eyes closed….it was flinching
"Use signal beam than brick break.
Pikachu lifted its tail up (like it does for electro ball) and a green sphere formed on it. It then shot a super-fast white beam (with a green hue) at Jolteon. The attack was right on and hit Jolteon, which made it fly back a few feet.
Jolteon was staring to get back up and had recovered from the flinching but, Pikachu was right above Jolteon and hit it with its tail (the move was brick break).
"Jolteon don't give up! Use double kick!"
Jolteon quickly recovered and jumped in the air hitting Pikachu with its front paws, sending Pikachu away from Jolteon.
"NOW, USE YOUR STRONGEST THUNDER!" Virgil yelled.
Jolteon mustered up all its energy and unleashed a thunder right towards Pikachu (imagine this thunder doing 200 damage).
Pikachu was on the ground standing unable to move as the Thunder was consuming Pikachu.
"Oh man…there's only one way Pikachu can defeat Jolteon. I'm not sure if its safe though…" Ash thought.
"Pi ka PI!" Pikachu cried as it knew what its trainer was thinking
"Are you sure buddy?"
"PI KA!" Pikachu yelled as it wanted to get rid of the pain.
"Alright! Pikachu absorb that thunder with your pouches!"
"PIIIIIIII!" Pikachu closed its eyes and started absorbing the thunder into Pikachu's pouches.
Once Pikachu had absorbed all its energy it cringed a little at the power inside of it as random bolts sparked form it. When it opened its eyes it was blood red and had a cruel mean look.
"Pikachu! Release all that electricity using a super powered thunder!" Ash yelled as loud as he could.
"PIIIIIII KAAAAAAAAAAA"
Pikachu had released about 750,000 watts of electricity inside itself. When Pikachu released the electricity, it was powerful enough to pierce the ground and cause chunks of Rocks on the battle field to go fly in Jolteon's direction.
The Thunder attack caused a dust to form around the battle field and everyone waited for 3 minutes for the dust too clear.
When it did a huge crater could be seen in the field were Pikachu stood.
Both Pokemon were on the ground, but Pikachu twitched a little (Pikachu was in the crater).
"Pika Pi?" Pikachu said slowly.
"THE WINNER OF THE UNOVA LEAGUE IS ASH KETCHUM OF PALLET TOWN!" cried the referee.
*Flashback End*
And that's how the whole day went by. Ash went on about his journeys in Unova and exchanged stories with May and the rest of the group.
Everything seemed to be going pretty good. But off in the distance was a Cacturne trainer despising our favorite coordinator.
"Uggggghhhh. I hate you May!" Harley thought in the distance. "I can't belive you embarrassed me in front of everyone at the finals. For that…I'm gonna get my revenge on you…tonight!"
Talking about each other's adventures made the day pass real quick. May was still surprised at the fact she won the Grand Festival and was taking a walk around the city since she couldn't sleep.
"Well tomorrow is the Closing Ceremony and I can't wait to get the ribbon cup…." May said as she expressed her thoughts. "I finally achieved my dream…but what am I gonna do now?"
"I know something you can do!" A familiar voice said while someone punched May unconscious.
When May finally woke up she found herself tied up to a tree.
"Well, looks like you finally woke up."
"Harley?" May asked.
"Yup, the person you embarrassed in front of everyone! Do you know how heartbroken I am right now?! DO YOU!" Harley yelled.
"I'm sorry you lost Harley but there's no reason to be this mad. You but up a good fight and you should be happy about it" May said calmly.
"HOW CAN I BE HAPPY WHEN YOU CRUSHED MY DREAMS!...and now I'm gonna make you pay for what you did." Harley said meancingly as he extended his hands toward her.
'Wha….what are you gonna do?" May asked fearfully.
"I'm gonna crush your life!" Harley said as his hands got closer and May screamed.
"Hey Pikachu? Did you hear that?" Ash said as he was walking at the outskirts of the city.
He was doing some late night training and at the entrance of the Aezela Forest (Which is south of Goldenrod City).
"Pika pi." Pikachu said agreeing.
"Can you use your ears to find out where the sound came from…it sounded like a scream."
Pikachu's ears were raised as he led Ash towards the scream
Harley's hands were now touching May and he was taking off May's pack (That yellow back thing that's at May's waste)."
"Harley, please stop. If you let go of me right now I won't tell anybody." May said trying to convince Harley out of this.
"Heheheheh. I rather just let you tell everybody of my…act!"
Harley was now slowly trying to pull May's shorts down.
"Ohhhhhh, I'm really going to enj—"
Harley didn't have time to finish his sentence as Ash tackled him. From May's perspective Ash was furious. He was punching Harley on the face furiously giving him many injuries in seconds.
Harley got 2 black eyes, and his nose started bleeding. He knocked Harley unconscious but he still wouldn't stop punching him.
After about 3 minutes Ash's rage finally subdued. He quickly ran over to May and untied her while Pikachu guarded Harley to make sure he didn't wake up.
When may finally got out she hugged Ash and fell into tears.
"Thank you Ash….thank you so much…..thank you." May repeated while she was crying into Ash's chest.
The two stayed there for hours while May was trying to forget the "almost-happened-event"
Ok, it's finally done. Actually I finished this like 2 days ago but I was waiting for my beta reader to give me an revised copy.
I waited, then waited, eat some breakfast and waited some more until I finally decided to proof read it myself and hope that you guys won't mind the mistakes that I didn't find. Even though I kinda have beta reader I still want some more readers. I would like about 3 readers so my stories are perfect grammatically.
I wanna finish this prequel ASAP before I continue any of my other stories….but I'm probably gonna forget and update PDA since I left a pretty mean cliffhanger.
CaTcH Ya LaTeR, TBC