Hi guys,
This is my second fanfic. [First 'Resident Evil' fanfic died a quick death. It couldn't even make it to the first chapter T^T] If you guys find any kind of grammar mistakes, please feel free to tell me about it. And LONG LIVE BRONIES!
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Year 2576
Equestria is still ruled by the two alicorn princesses Celestia and Luna but the times have changed in past 500 years. The Equine society has progressed a lot after the fall of Princess Chrysalis; better health care, better security. Yet all the equines are not a peace.
"Problems to society are like virus to a body. If you kill virus with vaccine, virus will develop immunity." - Anonymous
The equine society somehow caught the disease named 'Racism'. In a world where earth ponies are considered the lowest class of the equines because they don't have special abilities like Unicorns and Pegasus'. The earth ponies were exploited in any way imaginable. Earth ponies had to do all the dirty jobs of the town, from cleaning the sewers to picking the trash.
Stronghold Castle, an earth pony, fought for the rights of the earth ponies. Stronghold was a well built stallion with a grayish coat, black mane and blue eyes. His cutie-mark was a silver and gold shield. He was born in Trottingham, where he was raised by a Unicorn and a Pegasus. Soon, Stronghold gained recognition in Equestria. Many earth ponies started to join his cause.
The Pegasus and Unicorn society saw him as a rising threat to their status in the society. So, they made a plan to stop Stronghold which included Princess Celestia and the whole alicorn society.
Soon, Princess Celestia summoned Stronghold to honor him for his contribution towards the betterment of the Earth race. At arrival, Stronghold saw the whole court was decorated with flowers and gold, a 40 piece orchestra playing wonderfully, and a buffet table filled with the best cuisines from the best chefs of Equestria. But there was something odd in this picture, the guards; there were way too many guards in the room. "Why so many guards today?" , Stronghold thought to himself, he continued to walk towards the platform in front of Princess Celestia's throne. Stronghold felt something click under the red carpet. "What are they hoof cuffs? A trap door? A bear trap?" Various scenarios had started to run through his mind. But he was sure that he was in for an ambush.
As the orchestra started to play the anthem, everypony (including Stronghold) bowed in the honor of the Princess. "Stronghold Castle", Princess said "the noblest earth pony of all Equestria. Today we all have assembled in my court to reward you for your deeds. We have decided to turn you into an alicorn." Everypony was surprised by the decision made by the Princess; nopony ever thought that an Earth Pony would be promoted to an alicorn.
Now, everything was clear to Stronghold. The guards, the mechanism under him, it was a trap. It was not an award ceremony; it is a conspiracy to stop him. Stronghold started laughing out loud, he didn't know why but for some reasons he found this situation very amusing and funny because he saw an opportunity that nopony could.
After composing himself Stronghold said, "Thank you, Princess Celestia but I'm sorry I cannot accept your gift." Everypony in the court went started to shout at Stronghold. "Have you gone mad you idiot?" "You pieces of dirt should never join the Alicorns." "Kill Him". Stronghold didn't pay any attention to any one of them. He just stood there looking in the eyes of shocked Princess Celestia with a challenging look.
Princess Celestia stuttered, "B-B-But wh-why?"
Stronghold said with a booming voice, "Because I'm fighting for the honor of earth ponies and I want to be the EARTH pony that fought for them not an ALICORN. I don't want the alicorns to get credit for what an Earth pony did."
Princess Celestia shrieked, "I cannot approve that. GUARDS GET HIM!"
Stronghold just stood there as the cuffs got his hooves. He didn't resist at all, he just stood there looking at Princess Celestia with the same look.
Princess along with other alicorns, in unison, shot a beam towards Stronghold.
He felt his wings coming out of his back, his horn coming out of his head. He felt magic fueling him up. He felt himself growing up.
Princess Celestia sighed, "Guards let him go. Stronghold, how are you feeling now? Aren't you feeling great...filled the powerful magic?"
Stronghold said genly, "You know what I think about your alicorn society now?"
" What?"
Stronghold rips out his wings with the help of magic "THIS…"
"THIS IS WHAT I THINK OF YOU..."
Stronghold head butts floor
"THE ALICORNS..."
He head butts the floor; his horn begins to crack
"THE ROYALS..."
He head butts again
"AND EVERYPONY WHO PITIES US..."
With the last head butt, Stronghold breaks off his horn
"and I pity you. I pity you the most Celestia and everyone who thinks earth ponies are the weakest. I declare today as the day when the earth ones rose from the dirt to pull you down and your tyranny, to where it belongs."
As Celestia and the whole court stood silent Stronghold teleported somewhere else with the help of the magic left in him.
So, what do you guys think? Should I carryon this fanfic or take it out and shoot it between its eyes? Leave your queries and suggestions in the reviews.