So I'm trying out with story writing? Is it good? Is there any areas for improvement?
Prologue
It was a stormy, wet, night in the Thunderclan camp, all the cats but one were sleeping calm fully in their nests; this one cat that was awake was a young kit named; Blackkit who slipped away into the darkness of the forest looking for an adventure.
'I shouldn't be doing this!' he fretted,
Remembering Rosestar's speech about the wild rogues living deep in their territory, so as the torrential, downpour continued to shower upon him, he decided to give in to instinct and head back towards the camp.
As Blackkit pushed his way through a thick, clump of bracken he heard a quiet mewling coming from the hollowed out log to his left.
'Huh?' he squeaked,
The mewling grew louder as he continuously padded around the old, mossy, log; eventually he gave in to curiosity and poked his head inside the log.
'Hello?' he mewed 'Is anyone ther-'
A terrified mew interrupted him
'P-p-please don't h-hurt me!'
'I'm not going to' Blackkit replied in a soft voice, 'I'm going to have to take you back to my camp though'
'N-no I hear stories about t-the savagery of those beasts!'
A small ginger kitten emerged from the darkness.
'We're not savages!' Blackkit protested at the small cat's remark, he continued 'Just please! Come with me, the clan will make you feel safe and you won't have to stay in this cold!'
'O-okay then' The smaller kit replied.
As Blackkit pushed through the gorse tunnel a thunderous, booming voice erupted right next to his ear.
'WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?' The voice screamed.
'Uh oh' Blackkit thought as he shrivelled in fear.
Woop, prologue complete. YAY.
