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First fanfiction, please give it a try..

Tris PoV

My name is Beatrice Prior, but I go by Tris out here. Where is here? The ruins of the city, the ruins of Bridgton. What is left of my home from the war.

How this happened is a long story. It all started when Millatore, the city next to Brigeton, suddenly attacked us. None of us knew why. It just happened.

Of course, none of us were ready for it, and our city became what it is now..

Nothing but ruins everywhere.

I'm not the only one out there like this. In fact, most of us from Bridgeton are hiding out and fighting our way through, trying to escape. How, though, we have no idea.

Something I do know though, is that my brother, Caleb, is somewhere out there. We traveled together at first, but then we were separated because of unexpected circumstances. Ever since then, I haven't seen him again. Whatever happens, I will find him again.

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Boom!

There it goes again. This happens every day. Each day, at least one person is shot and killed by the soldiers that are everywhere. The only way to live is to fight back. I hear footsteps close by, and start running towards the sound. Whoever it is, better watch out. Because Tris Prior always wins a fight.

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So how did I do? I know it isn't all that good, but it is my first fanfiction.

I promise to write more next time, I just have way too much homework today..