*Note: IY and the rest do not, I repeat, do not belong to my superior
being, because if they did, Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru would be a couple and
Miroku would be in love with Naraku (I love Yaoi!).
A/N: This is a revised version of Unchanted Love. I think I should finish the story so that's why I'm liberated in revising this unfinished fic.
"." = talking out loud '.' = thought
Hai = yes Nani = what Hime = princess Yakata = I'm Glad Iya = no Baka = stupid Soshite = however
Yamero = Stop it
Now on with the show.Enjoy!!!!
Chapter 1: Find Kagome!
Inuyasha ran swiftly through the forest, killing all youkais in the way with his claws. Miroku couldn't open his Air Rip because of the poisonous bees Naraku released. So instead he used his staff to knock down any Youkais Inuyasha have failed to kill. Sango was behind Miroku, using her boomerang. Finally everyone came to a clearing with an enormous castle in the middle. They walked to the front and stopped.
Inuyasha stared intently at the castle. 'Kagome, be safe,' Inuyasha thought to himself. "This must be Naraku's castle."
"Let's go, Inuyasha." Miroku said with a serious tone.
"Hai."
When they tried to walk on, a barrier stopped them.
"Nani?!" Inuyasha pounded as hard as he could on the barrier, but it was of no use.
"Naraku! Let me the fuck in! Or are you too scared that I'll kick your ass?!" Inuyasha was really angry and couldn't control it. The possible thought that Kagome was hurt really got him worked up.
"Hmm. You insult me Inuyasha. To think that I'd be afraid of you? I'm just waiting for another guest. Oh and here he is." All of a sudden, Sesshoumaru emerged from the forest and walked towards them.
"Shit! What the hell is he doing here?" Inuyasha said impatiently.
"He has his reasons for being here. Welcome all to my domain."
"Where the fuck is Kagome?!" Inuyasha screamed with rage.
"Oh, you mean her?" Naraku stepped aside and showed an illuminated Kagome. She was kneeling with her head bent down. She wasn't wearing her usual school uniform. She was wearing a gown similar to those of a hime. Her hair was pinned up and she had makeup on (lipstick, eye shadow, etc.).
"Kagome." Inuyasha screamed with relief. "Yakata."
"Kagome sama!" Miroku said in glee.
"Kagome-Chan!" Sango said happily.
"You bastard! Give Kagome back!" Inuyasha demanded furiously.
"Iya. I think I'll keep her for a while. If you want her back, come get her."
"How the hell we gonna to do that, baka!? We can't even get through the barrier." Inuyasha bragged.
"I will put down the shield, soshite. I wouldn't attack if I was you." That's when the barrier disappeared.
"Just in case you don't understand me Inuyasha, I will show you a little of what I can do. Kagome?" Naraku said softly. Kagome raised her head and turned to the direction of Naraku.
"Hai Naraku-sama?" Inuyasha cringed up when he heard Kagome say Naraku-sama.
"Do you worship me?" Inuyasha tightened his fists.
"Hai Naraku-sama."
"Would you do anything for me?"
"Hai Naraku-sama." Inuyasha couldn't take it anymore.
"What are you talking about Kagome!?" He screamed. Naraku went on.
"I want you to do me a favor, Kagome."
"Anything for Naraku-sama."
"What are you saying Kagome!?" 'That's not the Kagome I know!' Inuyasha thought
"I want you kill yourself." Naraku ordered.
"Nani!?" Inuyasha's eyes widened. Everyone, except Sesshoumaru, was in shock.
"Hai Naraku-sama." Next to Kagome was a dull bladed knife. Everyone knew that Kagome would be in excruciating pain if she stabbed herself with it.
The school girl picked up the knife and looked at it passionately. She held it with both her hands and raised it above her head.
"For you, Naraku-sama." Kagome said before bringing the knife down.
"Yamero, Kagome!!" Inuyasha cried with fear.
If you want more review onegai!!
*Arigatou Gozaimasu for reading
A/N: This is a revised version of Unchanted Love. I think I should finish the story so that's why I'm liberated in revising this unfinished fic.
"." = talking out loud '.' = thought
Hai = yes Nani = what Hime = princess Yakata = I'm Glad Iya = no Baka = stupid Soshite = however
Yamero = Stop it
Now on with the show.Enjoy!!!!
Chapter 1: Find Kagome!
Inuyasha ran swiftly through the forest, killing all youkais in the way with his claws. Miroku couldn't open his Air Rip because of the poisonous bees Naraku released. So instead he used his staff to knock down any Youkais Inuyasha have failed to kill. Sango was behind Miroku, using her boomerang. Finally everyone came to a clearing with an enormous castle in the middle. They walked to the front and stopped.
Inuyasha stared intently at the castle. 'Kagome, be safe,' Inuyasha thought to himself. "This must be Naraku's castle."
"Let's go, Inuyasha." Miroku said with a serious tone.
"Hai."
When they tried to walk on, a barrier stopped them.
"Nani?!" Inuyasha pounded as hard as he could on the barrier, but it was of no use.
"Naraku! Let me the fuck in! Or are you too scared that I'll kick your ass?!" Inuyasha was really angry and couldn't control it. The possible thought that Kagome was hurt really got him worked up.
"Hmm. You insult me Inuyasha. To think that I'd be afraid of you? I'm just waiting for another guest. Oh and here he is." All of a sudden, Sesshoumaru emerged from the forest and walked towards them.
"Shit! What the hell is he doing here?" Inuyasha said impatiently.
"He has his reasons for being here. Welcome all to my domain."
"Where the fuck is Kagome?!" Inuyasha screamed with rage.
"Oh, you mean her?" Naraku stepped aside and showed an illuminated Kagome. She was kneeling with her head bent down. She wasn't wearing her usual school uniform. She was wearing a gown similar to those of a hime. Her hair was pinned up and she had makeup on (lipstick, eye shadow, etc.).
"Kagome." Inuyasha screamed with relief. "Yakata."
"Kagome sama!" Miroku said in glee.
"Kagome-Chan!" Sango said happily.
"You bastard! Give Kagome back!" Inuyasha demanded furiously.
"Iya. I think I'll keep her for a while. If you want her back, come get her."
"How the hell we gonna to do that, baka!? We can't even get through the barrier." Inuyasha bragged.
"I will put down the shield, soshite. I wouldn't attack if I was you." That's when the barrier disappeared.
"Just in case you don't understand me Inuyasha, I will show you a little of what I can do. Kagome?" Naraku said softly. Kagome raised her head and turned to the direction of Naraku.
"Hai Naraku-sama?" Inuyasha cringed up when he heard Kagome say Naraku-sama.
"Do you worship me?" Inuyasha tightened his fists.
"Hai Naraku-sama."
"Would you do anything for me?"
"Hai Naraku-sama." Inuyasha couldn't take it anymore.
"What are you talking about Kagome!?" He screamed. Naraku went on.
"I want you to do me a favor, Kagome."
"Anything for Naraku-sama."
"What are you saying Kagome!?" 'That's not the Kagome I know!' Inuyasha thought
"I want you kill yourself." Naraku ordered.
"Nani!?" Inuyasha's eyes widened. Everyone, except Sesshoumaru, was in shock.
"Hai Naraku-sama." Next to Kagome was a dull bladed knife. Everyone knew that Kagome would be in excruciating pain if she stabbed herself with it.
The school girl picked up the knife and looked at it passionately. She held it with both her hands and raised it above her head.
"For you, Naraku-sama." Kagome said before bringing the knife down.
"Yamero, Kagome!!" Inuyasha cried with fear.
If you want more review onegai!!
*Arigatou Gozaimasu for reading