So this is part one, nor sure yet how long it will be. Final Destination 3 isn't my favorite of the series but it does have Mary Elizabeth Winstead. Yes this is an incest story so if you don't like that sort of thing stop reading now. Not a whole lot of sexual content in this chapter, mainly an introduction. Will follow the movie loosely. Please review!

It was grad night and the seniors from McKinley High school were spending it at the carnival in town. A man that had long since graduated, Frankie Cheeks was stalking Ashley Freund and her friend Ashlyn Halperin. He filmed the girls on his camcorder for his own devious reasons. He was a known sleaze in his school days on his quest for babes. He knew two hotties when he seen them but this wasn't spring break so there were slim chances of seeing anyone going topless.

The girls were sitting down at a game booth. Frankie zoomed in for a closer look at the girls' thongs as they leaned forward on their stools. Unlucky for him, someone decided to ruin the shot. Erin Ulmer, the Goth girl of the group had no idea how Frankie was freely going around recording teenage girls without anyone stopping him.

"What are you doing here, Frankie? Didn't you graduate like 2 years ago?"

"You think I'd miss out on this?"

"What's stopping me from alerting security?" She glared at him.

"Come on, you wouldn't really do that...right?" He couldn't tell if she could really be joking with her frequent sarcasm and packed on makeup.

Erin caught sight of an old friend, now sworn enemy. "Let this be a warning to you." She left him to continue his creeping.

The old friend that distracted Erin was Wendy Christensen, she might have seemed sweet on the surface but Erin knew she was a back stabber and a shitty friend. She wanted to get back at her desperately for what she did to her but wasn't sure how to humiliate her. Whatever it was, it had to stick.


Wendy was taking pictures of her own but was doing it for the yearbook and she had a deadline. Her boyfriend Jason, her best friend Carrie and her Boyfriend Kevin were riding the free fall drop. She wasn't much for the rides, she was scared fairly easily, she was a control freak and didn't like the idea of being strapped in and shot up into the air.

There was something off about the ride, she always felt like she could sense danger or something off about things that nobody else noticed. The Neon sign on the ride that spelled out 'Dive' had the lights for 'V' burnt out. Kind of fitting.

When the three got off the ride they wanted to get food, Wendy tailed behind. She noticed the back of someone familiar up ahead.

"Excuse me?" The group of three turned around. One of them was her younger sister Julie. "You're not a senior!"

Julie was in fact only a Sophmore and on a strict curfew. "And what are *you* gonna do about it, Mrs. ''cutest couple' rah-rah?"

"Mom know you're here?"

"You are a complete bitch if you tell her!"

Wendy quickly snapped a picture. "Proof where you were."

"Take a shot of this!" Julie stuck both middle fingers up at her. Wendy snapped another picture of her. She could some times be a bitch but she never really meant it; Julie had really always been the one person she could turn to when things got rough.

"Hey, where you going?"

"I'm going to get something to eat."

"Well come by the strongman game after. I need your sailor arms," she said, flexing.

"I don't have sailor arms."

"Come on, they have the best prizes."

"Fine," Wendy sighed.


Erin didn't have time for fun. She couldn't believe Wendy had to move in on Jason when she did. She never used to dress this way, it was after she met her boyfriend Ian. She dressed more like Wendy when she was younger, though some might say Wendy is prettier than her; she almost seemed too perfect for her own good.

Erin didn't plan on sticking around McKinley after graduation and certainly not with Ian, she wanted a fresh start. After cleaning out her Grandmother's place she saw everything she collected over the years, all the places she visited. Some of her old jewelry might help her get out of this town if it's actually worth anything. She did hold on to one piece, it looked like an old ring but it was weird looking. She had it on her finger, some times she would move her hand and swear there was something inside of it turning like gears.

"Hey, weird ring," Julie walked by with her friends.

"Uh, thanks?" Erin scoffed.

"I didn't mean it to sound mean. You like...weird stuff, right? So isn't it a compliment?"

"Are all you Christensen ' s total bitches?"

Julie had no idea why Erin and her sister had a falling out, she just assumed it was Erin 's fault, some phase she went through. "Whatever. Mind stepping aside?"

Erin was blocking the fortune teller machine, an antique, kind of like the wish maker robot machine from the movie Big only this one was a woman. "This is lame any way," she said before leaving them to find out their fake futures.

"See your future...if you dare!" The mechanical woman said. Julie put in her dollar. A card popped out of a slot and Julie read from it.

"Something most unexpected will happen to you. Most will see it as bad but to you it will be very good...huh."

"I bet it says the same thing for everyone," quiet guy, Perry quipped.

"It's fun!" Julie snapped. "Let's go on the rollercoaster!"

"I thought you were going to get your sister to win you a panda with her man arms?"

"Right!" Julie led them to the strongman game.


Erin couldn't find Ian and she was low on cash, she really wanted something to eat. There was a cotton candy stand but she wanted actual nourishment. It was $5 which was ridiculous for how little you got. She approached the young man working and thought she could persuade him. "Hey, you...I'm a little short on cash...do you think..."

"No, I can't give you free cotton candy."

"But..."

"No. Get lost!"

This only made her more irritated. "You are going to give me that!" For some reason his eyes glazed over, he just stood there. Erin wasn't sure what he was fixated on until she heard a noise like a cricket on her hand. The ring. It was hypnotizing him. She lifted the ring up to his face as if she were holding a gun. "Give me everything you got!" He obeyed, next she told him to forget she was ever there. Indeed when he did come to he found himself staring off at the night sky and an angry lineup, with no cotton candy in his cart. No clue what happened.

Erin had trouble believing this could be real, she had to try it again. Luckily she bumped into a security guard while she wasn't watching where she was going. The guy she bumped into happened to be a tough looking black guy; if she thought more about it she could've used this guy to scare off Frankie but he made the mistake of nearly bruising her arm. "Punch yourself in the face as hard as you can!" He knocked himself down in his ass.

Erin laughed and ran off.


"Why do you think I can do this?" Wendy asked her sister as she lifted the hammer.

Julie clapped, "Come on, Wendy! I believe in you!"

She took off her jacket as if that would make a difference. She was afraid of throwing her back out when heaving the big mallet. She sang and watched as the ball made it a little more than halfway to the bell. Wendy dropped the hammer and showed off her arms to Julie, flexing them. "Look at that, tough as iron."

Julie collected her stuffed panda, "It's not the biggest one...but thank you."

"I've gotta get back to Jason. You better get home."

"Whatever, Mom!" She made an 'L' shape with her thumb and index finger and put it to her forehead. Wendy just laughed it off and went to go find her boyfriend.


Erin found Frankie spying on some girls from behind the shack that sells burgers. This was just getting sad. "Hey, Frankie!" It almost looked like he was ready to run, he put his camera down any way. "Wanna make yourself useful?" He was curious but he didn't really trust Erin. "I think I found a way to make us both very happy."

"Oh really?" He smiled creepily.

"No. See this ring? It can actually hypnotize people. No illusion or lame psychiatry shit."

"Um, ok?"

"This can literally make people do whatever you want them to." A jockey guy walled by her. "Hey, dipshit!" The guy stopped and stared directly at the ring. "Drop your pants!" He unbuckled his pants and sure enough let his pants hit the ground.

Frankie was mesmerized. After Erin took the ring away and snapped a finger the poor guy had no idea what had just happened but a group of people were laughing and taking pictures. It took him a minute to realize his pants were down.

Frankie tried grabbing the ring from her but she pulled her hand. "Only I touch the ring!"

"This is great! Just think of all the stuff we could do with it!"

"Endless possibilities, Frankie!" She had so many things she wanted to see Wendy do and with his help, Erin was going to take her down. "I think we can use it to help each other with our own fucked up plans."

"Fucked up? I'm making art!"

"Yeah...sure...but more importantly I need it to..." Both spotted Wendy, she was too far to get trapped in the ring' s gaze.

"Wow, you know I always thought Wendy was a babe. She's kind of uptight though."

Erin smiled, "Let's see what we can do to help her with that!" She ran over to Wendy, she wasn't far from where her friends were. "Hey, Wendy!"

Wendy looked at her startled, "Erin?"

Erin put the ring up to her eyes. Wendy already had huge brown eyes but he ring made them look bigger and more chocolatey. "Come with me." Wendy obeyed her order. She took Wendy to the back of the burger shack. Frankie started recording. "She'll do anything we tell her to. Anything."

"Can we get her out of her top?"

"In good time. First I think I'll get her loosened up like you suggested." Wendy was told to be carefree, ditzy and a little slutty. Wendy accomplished this rather well, removing her jacket and flinging her hair back. "Now say ,I'm a whore' but like it's a good thing!"

"I'm a whore!," Wendy exclaimed, smiling. Both Frankie and Erin laughed. There was an old sofa beside the old green dumpster Erin noticed. "Almost too good for her. Sit down over there!"

"And take your top off!" Frankie added.

She did so, much to Erin's dismay, she thought maybe the wearer of the ring had a link or something. Wendy had a bright pink bra on. She looked so cold and pale. "Do you want me to take my pants off too?"

Erin cut Frankie off before he said anything, "Later!"

Frankie continued recording, "Man, I could be bigger than that Girls Gone Wild guy. I'll making a killing on video."

"This isn't humiliating enough. I need more..."

"What did Wendy ever do to you?"

"What do you care, Frankie?"

Neither were aware Julie had found them and was witnessing her sister playing with her breasts on an old dirty couch. "What's going on here?" Frankie put his camera down but Erin got an idea. She got a really terrible idea.

She pointed the ring at Julie, "Sit down!"

Seeing the two siblings sitting down next to each other gave Frankie so many ideas. "Sibling stuff gets so many hits!"

Erin looked at him in disgust, "What?...well it was better than my idea."

She let Frankie direct them. "Now Julie, you seem like the more fun sister, but how about just relaxing a little more. Wendy looks cold, how about warming her up?"

Julie massaged Wendy, both smiled at each other as if they were drunk. "You love your sister don't you, Wendy?" asked Frankie.

"Yes. I do," Wendy said, not taking her eyes off of Julie.

"And Julie you really love Wendy?"

"Uh-huh," she nodded.

"Time to show each other how you feel. Let's see some kissing and not just friendly. I'm talking tongues!"

Erin thought this was the greatest moment of her life, watching Wendy ruin hers. Both girls made out like long lost lovers. It was intense. Erin felt mad with power.

"I'm going to make so much money," Frankie whispered.

"Do whatever you want with it but I want a copy of that tape!" When it seemed like things had gone on long enough she pointed the ring at both of them. "When I snap my fingers you will leave and not remember what happened. You'll go back to being your boring selves!" She snapped her fingers. Both girls stood up still in a trance, "Put your top back on, Wendy!" Erin ordered. Wendy did so and once she and Julie walked back to where they started, they forgot everything.

They had their backs to each other, unaware the other was even there. They had stars in their eyes. Julie caught up with her friends and Wendy noticed hers waiting for her by the rollercoaster.

"That was hot!" Frankie said.

"Oh, I'm not done yet," Erin smiled evilly, "Not by a long shot, Wendy Christensen."

More soon. Will include some deaths from the movie. Until then.