this is an experiment so don't expect to much but i would love criticism.
Nothing was all aground me, or is that something? I couldn't tell. i think I've always been here, there's no sense of anything passing, much less time. But then i guess I've never been here either. I need something anything I need change i don't care what. Then something happened, I started too feel something creeping up on me, pressure all around me. it started to push me, I begin to feel time passing again. Light blinded me, i started too hear someone screaming, I felt my body moveing though space so rapidly completely out of my control. Then it stopped, i felt warm.
I started too remember bits my other life, there would be some object or a particular phrase that would unlock this chunk of memory. I had gained enough of these "chunks" too have a pretty good idea of my past life. I knew I was a young man who had a job I enjoyed, a girl that I loved, a family, hobbies, the whole nine yards. I lost it all, i couldn't remember how, it just obviously wasn't here anymore. Speaking of here, I had no idea where I was. When i was taken here my eyes where so underdeveloped I could only see blobs of color passing me. Now that it's been a bit though, my vision isn't half bad, and I've been doing quite a bit of looking around.
One of the first things i noticed where two people. They where always around me so i assumed they where my parents. They seemed nice enough. I did feel this strange attraction to them i would call it love, but it didn't feel like a choice I had made. I felt almost pushed into caring for them, I think it it's just a baby hormone thing.
I don't know how long it lasted, it felt like years, but my body wasn't growing, I guess time just moves slower when your young. it was peaceful I enjoyed laying in my crib and listening to my parents gibberish. Sometimes they pull me out and feed me, i instinctively put anything they offered me in my mouth so it wasn't very awkward for any of us. then they would put on the floor of the house and let me play. the toys didn't really interest me, but i enjoyed moving around and stretching my legs so to speak. one of my favorite things to do was beg my father to lift me up on to the couch so i could look out the window. It was always raining.
As soon as it had started it was over. One afternoon I was on the couch watching the rain fall, when i head my mother scream. I snapped my head aground and saw my parents on the floor in a pool of there own blood. there was a pair of feet in between them, I ran my eyes up to the person's face. He was wearing a mask. when i saw that mask it instantly triggered a flash of memory. Somehow i knew without a doubt that this man was Konoha ANBU.