Kowareta hana (Broken Flower)

Sorry for doing this to everyone who really liked the original stuff I wrote but I'll be changing the story up a little bit hopefully you'll like it this way and I will be doing this for my other stories. I will keep some of the original content it'll just be an improved storyline. So I hope you like this version better!

Chapter 1

The night she spoke

You'd think that dying would be the worst experience for someone to go through, but I'm here to tell you that's not the case, well at least it's not for me. Death would have been a favorable choice instead of the hell I was thrown into. A hell created by those who I thought cared for me.

I guess this is probably hard for you to understand if you don't know the whole story. For that we'll have to go back to the night that I heard her voice which was also the night my first love broke my heart.

A long time ago

Normal P.O.V

A pink haired girl ran through the streets of her village sweat coming down her face. Something had felt off to her that day starting with when she went back to see her teammate at his house. At first she didn't notice anything wrong he was his usual cold self it wasn't till he agreed to go eat with her did she feel something was wrong. Something in her gut told her something was wrong, later that night she had went to his place to confront him to see what was wrong but her worries only grew when she didn't sense his chakra signature anywhere in the house. From there her legs just started moving on their own. She held a frantic expression on her face as she ran she could only scold herself for not sensing anything thing earlier she should have known he was off when he agreed to the lunch date.

As she ran she started to see a dark blue shirt and white shorts it was him, he was heading for the village gates with a bag on his back. 'If I don't do something he'll leave!' she thought you herself.

As she got closer he stopped seeing this she stopped a few feet behind him. As she tried to catch her breath he spoke "You shouldn't be out this late Sakura go home" she clenched her fist almost drawing blood.

"Why is it that when I feel like we're getting closer you slam the door in my face?" staring at his back he turned around

"We were never getting closer Sakura, that was just you living in that childish world of yours" he glared at her "That's a lie and you know it I just don't understand why it is that even though you have teammates who care about you, you insist on shutting us out never wanting to confide in us about your troubles." as she said this she fought back the tears that threatened to fall down her face.

"I don't need anyone's help not Naruto not Kakashi and definitely not you" he spat back at her she lowered her head staring at the ground

"You're always like this Sasuke trying to act like your this cold hearted person who doesn't care about anyone or anything but I know that's not the real you. The real you is a caring person you've protected not just me but Naruto as well on multiple occasions someone who didn't care about people or didn't need them wouldn't protect them I know the REAL you."

"SHUT UP!" he yelled at her she flinched "You think you know me you don't know a thing you're always poking your nose in other people's business maybe instead of trying to worry about me why don't you train! You're weaker than Naruto and you're always dragging the team down we're always trying to save you and how do you repay us with your useless crying and whining. So before you sit there and try to help someone else maybe you should help yourself."

At this point she couldn't hold back the tears as they came down her face

"I'm sorry it's just that I love you with every part of me I never wanted to be a burden to the team, it's just so hard trying to keep up with you and Naruto. It's like you two take a step forward and I take a step back, but that doesn't mean that I don't try to be of use. I...I just don't want you to go down this path you're going on. You told me yourself how it felt being alone with nobody to care for you having nobody to love you I understand that pain now. I have a family and I have friends but without you none of it would matter and it would feel the same as being alone. So please don't leave me everything I've ever done has been for your happiness."

She looked up to look at his face but he was gone. She then felt him behind her

" The fact that you try to care for someone besides yourself is what makes you weak, don't be so naive it will eventually get you killed." before she could say anything she felt his hand on her neck "Good-bye Sakura" that was the last thing she heard before she blacked out.

Sakura's

'Sak….wake…..p….'

'Sakura…..'

'Wake up…..'

There's someone calling me.

'Sakura wake up'

There it is again…. such a sweet voice.

'Sakura!'

Hearing the voice shout my name I opened my eyes. I was in a dark room with a single mirror sitting in front of me. I stared at my reflection my eyes were red and puffy I stood up from the chair I was sitting on and walked towards the mirror reaching out to touch my reflection.

'Such a frail thing you are.' Shocked I took a step back, my reflection had just spoken to me "What...Who are you?" I asked staring at the mirror she gave a soft smile

'I'm you or I guess I should say I'm only one of you here, my name is Junsei I am your guide for the time being I cannot foretell what will happen once the others start making themselves known'

"What do you mean the others? I don't understand any of this I'm so confused." I dropped to my knees and covered my face with my hands

'Your heart is broken Sakura we will fix it... we will fix you' I looked up at her "Fix me?" she nodded and placed her hand on the glass.

'Come place your hand on the mirror where mine is this will show that you acknowledge our presence in your mind, once you do that then we will begin the process of fixing you' I stood up "I still don't understand what do you mean by fix me?" I asked her walking toward the mirror. She just continued to give me a soft smile 'in due time you will understand.'

Normal P.O.V

Sakura came to a halt in front of the mirror slowly raising her hand to meet Junsei's she hesitated but the reflection just fed her honeyed words slipping Sakura into a trance like state her eyes turned a pale green color. Without a second thought sakura placed her hand on the mirror not noticing the sinister smile the reflection gave. There was a flash of white light and Junsei began to step out of the mirror.

"Foolish girl you belong to me now, we start your transformation tonight you won't need anyone else when we're done because by that time we will be one and the same" Junsei said helping the entranced girl up.

They both stared at the mirror as other versions of Sakura started to emerge from the glass. Junsei smirked at them "Let's begin."

End chapter 1

Well ok this is the beginning of the revised Sakura's turn it'll have the same concept only better. Tell me what you thought about this one. I'll be trying to rewriting each chapter a day so don't forget to review and favorite. :)