Going Places with a too Nice Girl
Chapter 1- Zella
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Zoro was startled awake by a loud racket from Usopp up in the lookout post.
"I see an island! I see an island!" Usopp toppled backward off the lookout post from jumping around but sure enough an island came into view.
Luffy bounded over to the front of the ship and drooled.
"So from there we can get meat, clothes, meat, repairmen, meat, and maybe a new nakama." Luffy yelled.
Nami came out of her room with a grumpy look in her face.
"Turn right, that island doesn't have any legendary treasures." Nami grumbled.
Usopp shocked at her words stood up straight even if he was dizzy from the long fall. He marched right in front of Nami and was going to give her a piece of his mind but was stopped by a kick from Sanji.
"Strike one don't ever try to argue with a lady!" Sanji yelled while Usopp was rubbing his shin furiously. Sanji smirked at him while he kept cursing at his shin.
Nami went into the kitchen to find Robin and drink a giant mug of coffee.
Chopper went to Usopp to check his shin and his head to look for any serious injuries.
Suddenly there was a violent rocking.
"We crashed into a coral reef!" Luffy yelled with a fascinated expression on his face. "We have to go to the island now!" and with that he jumped off the ship.
"Luffy!" both Sanji and Zoro jumped after him with a dive. What they didn't know was that Luffy had landed safely on a coral rock and was watching them keep going under water wondering what they were looking for.
When Sanji and Zoro saw Luffy on the coral rocks they both shouted "Im going to kill you Luffy!!" with that They both climbed on top of the Coral beds and ran toward Luffy.
Everybody safely made it to the island on the coral beds.
"Nami? What island are we in?" asked Luffy while looking around at his surroundings.
Nami now full of energy from the earlier hot coffee cheerfully said, "Well we could be on a island call Ojimoko Island or Majilok Island.
Zoro twitch his eyebrow when he heard the all too familiar name of an island
"Majilok…Island?" Zoro started to sweat and started praying that it wasn't the island where his….
"Guys I see a girl with green hair coming this way." Chopper said squinting his eyes at the girl coming.
Robin also seeing the girl went to meet her.
"Hello my name is Robin and those people over there are my nakama. We need a ship to be repair and do you mind telling us what island this is?" Robin asked nicely to the green haired girl who looked to be the age of Nami.
"You guys are on Majilok Island and my name is Zella. Oh and if you want your ship repair then follow me.
Zoro hearing the name of the girl quickly took Luffy's straw hat and covered his hair which also shaded his eyes.
"Hey Zoro why you take my hat!" Luffy yelled and pounced on Zoro's back and tried to get back his hat.
Zoro taken by surprise fell on the ground face first.
Zella hearing what Luffy said slowly walked over to the green hair man that the Luffy kid called Zoro.
"Um excuse me?" Zella asked Zoro while poking his head.
Zoro looked up revealing his face but then he quickly tried to hide his face again when he saw Zella.
Zella seeing his face broke into a huge grin.
"Zoro! You came back!" Zella exclaimed. She quickly grabbed one of Zoro's leg and started dragging him across the beach to her house while everyone else followed.
"Hey Luffy whose that girl?" asked Chopper.
"She must be Zoro's wife." Luffy answered with a confident grin. "And maybe she has some meat!" with that said Luffy quickened his pace to long strides, swinging his arms by his side.
Everyone else just walked in a normal pace and thought in silence of what Luffy just said. Then everyone started to laugh exept Robin who just smiled.
Chopper whizzed, "Zoro…huuuu…wife? Hahahahahahahahahaha!"
Usopp was clutching his belly, "If Zoro has a wife then Im a chicken." Everyone stopped laughing.
"Then Zoro must really have a wife." Said Nami with a sneer.
Usopp thought for a moment of what she just said. For a minute he just stared at her then started fuming with anger when he caught on. He took out a slingshot but was kicked far ahead by Sanji.
"Strike two never threaten a lady." Sanji said with a puff of his cigarette smoke.
Zella was dragging Zoro when suddenly something screaming landed right in front of them. She stared down at the human shaped hole that was about 3 feet deep.
"Owwww" Usopp wimpered.
Zella frowned and pulled the person up by his long nose and started to drag him along with Zoro.
She must have amazing strength if she is able to drag both of them Chopper thought.
Luffy caught up to Zella and looked at her.She had green eyes like Zoro's, green hair like Zoro's and had a long thin sword on her back.
"Hey Zella? Are you Zoro's mom?" Luffy asked her. Zella stared at the weird person that was walking backward in front of her.
"What are you talking about?" Zella asked.
"You said back there that Zoro came back.
"Oh that. He never told you about me? Well Im Zella and I am his little sister." Zella said with a warm grin.
Luffy grinned a goofy smile, "Do you have some meat? Im really hungry."
Just then she heaved Usopp and Zoro and threw them on the sand.
"Here we are!" said Zella with a grin.
Luffy turned around. His bottom jaw went down all the may to the ground. A few feet ahead of him was a 10-story mansion.
From the impact on the ground Zoro and Usopp woke up. Zoro looked defeated when he saw the mansion while Usopp gawked. Robin smiled, Nami stared with shiny eyes, Sanji just noodle danced around Zella, Nami, and Robin with heart eyes, and Chopper was gazing at the the house.
"Welcome to my home!" cheered Zella.
Everyone started talking to each other while Luffy was walking around the whole group yelling, "Zella is Zoro's sister!"
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