Hello everybody! This is my first fic, and it's NOT in my language, so please MERCY! I'm translating all the story. But if someone wants me to translate it to spanish, just tell me.
If I have mistakes of spelling PLEASE tell me so I can learn and don't commit the same mistake again.

The story starts when they return to the castle, after the war with Miraz.

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DISCLAMER: Narnia doesn't belongs to me. (But I wish so, especially Caspian =D *drool*) haha

Everything was fine. The battle had finally finished. All the problems disappeared. Narnia was finally free of telmarines that have been beaten by the Kings and Queens of Old and Prince Caspian.

The kings, queens and prince were in the big telmarines castle. The kings and queens were parting in five days, after the coronation of the new High King.

They had arrived that morning, and now was almost evening, all the monarchs had already dinner and were going to do what they wanted, to enjoy Narnia while they could.

Peter was going to read a book; he was the smart of the family, obviously. Lucy started playing with some narnians in the forest near the castle –They didn't want to being seen yet-. Edmond was looking for someone who wants to play chess, because "Caspian wasn't at mood".

Caspian was going through the corridors thinking. What he would do when he was a king? Would he be a good king? Would he make his people happy? Would someone try to betray him? He didn't know it. Maybe yes, maybe not. He wanted and needed someone to help him. Then he thought of Doctor Cornelius, but then he thought of the Kings and Queens of Old. They know how to hold a kingdom; maybe he would ask them how to do it. But this would take a long time; they couldn't be there for so long, they had to go, Aslan told them. He wished they could be there for a long time; enjoy with them a part of his life. They got along very well. Edmond was his best friend ever! He was cunning and friendly at the same time… They were very alike; they liked almost the same things. Peter was… A very good person, he had to admit that. He was responsible; he always cared for people, especially for his family, and tried to do his best to pleasure them. Lucy was a sunshine, she always was smiling (unless things weren't good) and bringing happiness wherever she goes. And Susan… Oh! Susan. She was so… gentle. She was the gentlest, bravest, fiercest and most beautiful woman in the whole world. She was a true queen -and a very beautiful one too. The legends said that she was the most beautiful woman in the world, but in that case, the legends were an insult. But he couldn't help admiring her gentleness. Her touch for example, was so delicate… She almost seemed so fragile although she showed the opposite.

He remembered the kiss in the cheek she gave him when he saved her in the forest while they were riding the horse. She thanked to him by heart, kissed him in the cheek and made him shiver. My! How good that felt.

Unconsciously he put his hand in his cheek, remembering the soft and warm kiss. Then, he realized he wanted more than that. He wanted to kiss her, to kiss her lips. Oh! If it were possible… He couldn't help thinking of something more. And if that kiss he would gave her gets more passionate? If he kisses her neck and starts to do not chivalry things? And if he finished spending the night with her?

My! What was he thinking about! That was disrespect a woman; he would never do that, less with Susan. But it was helpless. He tried to slap those thoughts out of his head. When he managed he heard a gasp from Susan's bedchambers. He arrived to the door and knocked it.

When he was allowed by her to pass, he entered and saw her with her back almost bare! He swallowed and get a little close to her, very nervous.

When he reached her, watched her gasp again and saw a long and thin wound in her back at a height of his hips. Oh! What a pain! He hissed at the sight of her with such a wound. He almost could feel her pain, how she was suffering. He wanted to sooth her and cure her pain, so she could draw that wonderful smile that he loved so much. See her smile was one of the things he liked the most, and when she gave him that witty smiles and talk to him, he couldn't help imagining he leaned and kissed her. But he made huge affords not to think of that, less NOW that she was untying the ribbons of her bodice in front of him.

He slapped his thoughts again and asked permission to get closer.

She turned around and smiled weakly when she saw him. But a feeling of pain came from her back and she moaned. He kneeled next to her before he himself could realize what he had done.

"What happened? What's that wound, Susan?"

"I had it done at war but I didn´t want to worry anyone. But now the pain is unbearable". She answered. "Please, make me a favor"

"Anything"

"Call Lucy and ask her to bring a sponge and water with her cordial. I need her to heal this." Said pointing at her wound.

He nodded, run towards Lucy's bedchambers and knocked the door, but nobody answered. He knocked again, but nothing.

"Tesa, where's Queen Lucy?" He asked to the maid that passed behind him.

"She is in the forest, Your Majesty. She is being seen by Gelstrome. He will escort her here in half an hour"

"Thank you, Tesa. Could you please bring me some water and a sponge?"

"Of course, Your Majesty."

He didn't know what to do. There was only a choice. He took the cordial that Fortunately Lucy had left in the castle, and wait to the maid.

A couple of minutes ago, she came with all he asked for. He asked her to come with him, to Queen Susan's bedchambers, but she had to deny saying that there were a lot of soldiers that hadn't been treated already.

What? So, who was going to cure her from that pain? He wouldn't do it; it would be so… thrilled? No. It doesn't had to be thrilled, but wasn't it a little disrespectful?

He went back to her chambers and saw her with her back completely bare. He swallowed and entered the room placing near her.

"Su, Lucy is not here in the castle and Peter and Edmond are out of sight. I asked a maid to come but she had to heal other narnians."

"Damn! Ok, you'll have to do it" WHAT! Me! Oh God, this is not going to come to a good end. He was shocked.

"A-Are you sure, Su" He said hesitating.

"NOW" She shouted of pain. He stared at her perplex, but reacted quickly and started moving. He dropped a couple of drops of Lucy's cordial in the water, wetted the sponged and slid it through the wound. She immediately shivered and he moved away, but then started again. Accidentally, he touched her smooth skin and found himself craving for more, for touch it again, but restricted himself. That wasn't suitable. But he couldn't help it, so he satisfied himself a little touching her back just for a moment a couple of times. Her pale skin was so beautiful, her shape so perfect, he couldn't resist. She shivered again, so he had to stop. He shifted his position, so he could see her bare back completely. It was so delicate… And the wound had disappeared, so it was more delicate…

He tried not to think of it, unfortunately failing, so closed his eyes and said "Ready"

She turned around and gave him a big smile mixed with relief. But he couldn't help hesitate at the words that she said later.

"Thanks. Now please help me with the bodice" OUCH. He would have to concentrate too much for this. He took the ribbons of the bodice and started to put them through the holes. He gave himself the little pleasure of touch her skin a couple of times more. But they last a little more time, enough for Susan to suspect. He didn't realize she turned her head around to look at him. He was so… tensed, nervous, so much that she had to hold a giggle. But Caspian continued tying the ribbons.

When he finished, she turned around smiling, more than before, coped his face in her hands, close the quite big gap that was between them and kissed him in the corner of his lips leaving him completely shocked… And anxious for more. He wanted to go further, to kiss her. When he moved his head a few inches to touch her lips, she moved apart leaving him mad. But she gave him a huge smile and run off the room leaving Caspian alone, not without looking back, and saw him blushing. Why he make such a fool of himself when he was with her? But what was he thinking about, she almost kissed him. God, he was insane. He craved that again and again. He craved for her touch, her scent- the best scent in the world, jasmine with vanilla. He had already smelled it in Aslan's How, when she teach him some tactics with the crossbow. He almost kissed her that moment, it was so hard not to do it… She was inches from him.

This must be a torture. No, SHE is torturing ME.

I hope you enjoyed =)

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