Ok this is my first fanfic. So tell me what you think. Tell me how to improve. Thanks.

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Max POV

Is it enough to love…

I almost fell out of bed to the sound of my blaring music. Lucky for me I caught myself.

"Max are you up!" My 12 year old sister, Ella, yelled.

"NO! I talk like this when I'm asleep."

"Whatever. Just get up. I do not want to be late again." She said while rolling her eyes, and with that she was gone.

Great. I thought to myself. Another day of high school, fun.

I got up any ways and did my daily routine. Brushed my teeth, put my hair in a ponytail, got dressed, and walked down stairs for breakfast. But as soon as I got down stairs I heard a groan.

"Max, can't you wear anything cute." Ella. Ugh. We go through this everyday! I looked down at my outfit. I saw nothing wrong with it. It was regular dark blue jeans and a t-shirt that said "I'm not going to lie this face should fool you, 'cause I don't care."

I looked back up at her and gave her a look that said I-see-nothing-wrong-here.

"Please, please, please let me dress you today." I started to refuse but then she pulled my weakness, Bambi eyes.

"Fine, but only today."

3rd person

Dr. Martinez sat at the table, sipping her coffee. Max had been pulled, literally, upstairs by Ella. It hadn't been five minutes when she heard Max say "No, absolutely no skinny jeans."

She laughed quietly to herself. But that changed to full blown laughter when she heard Max yelling "Ella. NO! ELLA! Please NO MAKEUP!!!"

Max POV

I arrived at Ella's school, which is right next to the high school, wearing a Hollister, V-neck, blue shirt that showed my figure and regular jeans (not skinny jeans). I was also convinced into wearing what feels like tons of lip gloss and eyeliner and mascara. She also straightened my hair where it falls gracefully against my back. But worst of all I am wearing high heel sandals. And somehow Ella managed to do all of this without being late.

"Bye Ella. I am so getting you back." I said as she got out of the car to go to her school. The one I hated so much, Randall Middle School.

"Of course you will. Bye Max." She gave me a hug and ran up to her school.

I pulled out and drove to my school, Newsome High School, in my shiny blue convertible. I parked the car and climbed out and walked in. As I walked to my locker I heard people whispering things like,

"Oh my gosh. Is that Max Ride?"

"Dude, she actually looks kind of hot."

"Is she new?"

I ignored them all and kept walking to my locker. When I got there three of my friends ran up to me. Nudge, JJ, and Alex. They looked so excited I thought they might explode.

"OMG, you look so totally cute!" JJ.

"The day has finally come. Max has good taste!" Alex.

"ZOMG! You look amazing. Where did you get those shoes? Oh one time I was at the mall and I had gotten all this clothes and shoes and stuff and I was walking and I ran into this really hot guy… it hurt. OMG, one time-" Nudge was cut off by Alex's hand.

"Ok, Ella dressed me this morning. That's what Alex I always had good taste." She rolled her eyes. "Oh and where is Angel?"

"She had to go to class now 'cause she is a freshman. She said she will see us at lunch." JJ stated. I nodded.

That is when my friend Iggy, who is going out with Alex, walked up to me. When I turned to face him his eyes widened a bit.

"Wow, since when does Max have good taste." He said with a smirk on his face.

"THANK YOU. I told you so Max." Alex yelled. I smacked both of them upside the head. It was then I noticed Iggy's friend, but not only did I notice he was there I noticed how cute he was and I have never said that before. Our gazes locked and we stood like that. Just staring into each other's eyes. After what seemed like forever Iggy decided to break the silence.

Fang POV

I just stood there staring into her beautiful brown eyes. Thats when Iggy decided to butt in.

"Oh, this is Fang. Fang this is Max, Nudge, JJ, and my girlfriend Alex." He said poining to each one as he said their name. "He is new here and I was going to show him to his classes but he has none with me. But I'm pretty sure he has some with you, Max."

"Well, let me see your schedual." She said. I handed her my schedual wordlessly. she studied it ind then said "Yup you have every class with me except science and history. But those are in the same hallway as I my classes at the time, so I can still show you where." I nodded silently.

"Ok are you like mute or something." The girl Ithink her name was JJ asked agitated.

I smirked and said "Yes."

"Haha very funny. so your a mute that can talk. Jeez, your just like Max." She said.

Thats when the bell rang so Max led the way to first period.