Hi Everyone. Allowed me to introduce myself. My name is DreamGirll. Im the Author of the FanFic, Tangled: No More Goodbyes. This is my second Fanfic and im excited. You know this all started by a few dreams and some thoughts I had. Then Rapunzel in my mind came out of nowhere and hit me with her frying pan saying, "DreamGirll put it all together!" Then boom...this came along. ( thank you Rapunzel and your Frying Pan. Ha ha.) Well instead of explaining, I'll just let read the story. Well Here's the first chapter for A Tangled Twist.
Oh Yeah Three Things:
1. Please Read and Review.
2. I don't own Tangled. Grrrr. :(
3. Enjoy!
CHAPTER ONE
Rapunzel's POV:
I couldn't believe it. It had finally came. The moment I was waiting for. Not just my birthday, But those lanterns I've long to see for eighteen years outside of my tower, will be released. Tonight.
I mean just yesterday, I was staring out my window wishing to go out. Then Flynn...I mean Eugene, came. It took me for a while, and he finally agreed to take me. I was finally out of my tower for the first time ever and I had seen so much more. I felt the soft grass beneath my feet, smell different flowers, feel the breeze flow through me, climbed and swung on trees. It was so breathtaking.
I also went to new places. Eugene brought me to pub called The Snuggly Duckling. There were ruffians and thugs everywhere. I was scared. But it turns out, they were all nice and they all their own dreams just like me. Then we were chased into a dam, which bursted and water was filled everywhere. We were trapped in a small cave that was being filled up with water. Fast. Eugene told me his real name, Eugene Fitzherbert ( Flynn Rider was made up.), and I told my secret, magical glowing hair that can heal. Which made us lucky because we're alive.
Maximus. I cant forget about him. He's a really big sweetheart. To Eugene, he's just a bad horse and a fleabag (not true.) Maximus is also a palace guard horse. Bravest and strongest. His job was to capture Eugene because he's a thief. But I don't he's a bad guy after all. He is a nice and...well...a charming man. Maximus actually came to kingdom with me, Eugene, and Pascal, my chameleon.
The Kingdom was amazing. I was speechless. Everyone was so kind. They smiled at everyone, including me. I did so much things. My hair was really long. Seventy feet. And I was all tangled up. So girls braided it and pinned flowers on it. The braid was gorgeous and it was up to my ankles, so I could walk around and not be worrying about it. Soon I was walking through the whole village. I painted, ate treats, I even read books ( I only had three in my whole life), and danced. I also got a flag with the kingdom symbol on it, the golden sun. Eugene gave it to me.
Finally I was walking down the kingdom dock, where Eugene lead me to a boat. I sat down in it, so did he and pulled the oar in the water and we started to float away from the dock. I didn't know where we were going, so I asked. Eugene was bring us to the middle of the river so I can see a better view. I smiled for what he did. The boat stopped and we waited.
What is it going to be like? I thought. Then I sighed.
Eugene looked at me, " You okay?" he asked.
"I'm terrified." he wondered why. " I've been...looking out a window for eighteen years. Dreaming what it will be like when those lights rise in the sky." I continued. " what if it's not everything I'd dreamed they'd be."
"It will be." he said, giving me a comfort smile.
"But what if it is? What do I do then?" he looks back at he water then me again.
" You go find a new dream." we smiled and stared at the sky. I don't have to worry a thing. It will be perfect just like I have dreamt it to be.
I was excited again. But I had to wait. So while I had waited, I picked out some of the flowers out of my braid and place it in the water. And I watch them slowly flow away from on another. Eugene smiles at me and my funny Flower masterpiece.
"Do you want help?" I looked at him with one of his hands out. I nodded and handed him the pile of flowers. As our smiles were stilled connected to our faces, one by one, I picked upa flower from his hand and place it in the water. Then I saw a small bright light floating up in the sky. And that's when I saw it.
But it was not a star...
It was a lantern.
Chapter one done. Okay this chapter was like the movie. It's going to change during the next chapter.
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