Hi!! It's me again. Sorry no updates but thats because no one reviewed my story. I had hits but i was still down. I don't think anyone liked it, but here is my take on how edward felt in breaking dawn.

oh yeah, even though there are a bunch of bellaXedward baby stories in this fandom, this is really pretty much what breaking dawn is about. I was a little disappointed about breaking dawn but i wondered how Edward felt about the whole thing. So this is written for misty, the only one in my entire family who understands the love for this book. ( that's saying a lot because there's hundreds of us...aunts...uncles...cousins you don't know) i missed half of my family reunion for the release party so i was upset when breaking dawn felt like a published fanfic...no offense to any because some were really really great...sorry about the rant but here's

Breaking dawn-Edward's point of view.

Chapter One

"Bella? Can I come in?"
"O…..kay?"
I entered the room and she was sitting cross-legged on the floor by the suitcase, blank and staring into space. I sat next to her and placed my hand on her forehead.
"What's wrong?" I asked worriedly.
"How many days has it been since the wedding?" she whispered.
"Seventeen." I answered automatically. "Why? What is it?"
She held up her finger, telling me to wait, and then she began to count to herself, twice.
"Bella!" I whispered at her. "I'm losing my mind over here."
She slowly held up a blue box of tampons.
I stared at her in confusion.
"What? Are you trying to pass this illness off as PMS?"
She answered slowly and pained.
"No. No, Edward. I'm trying to tell you that my period is five days late."
I didn't move. My expression was still confused. I had turned into a sculpture.
"I don't think I have food poisoning."
I didn't respond.
"The dreams. Sleeping so much. The crying. All that food. Oh. Oh. Oh." She said as if trying to explain her actions of the past days.
My eyes glazed over. I couldn't see anything anymore.
"Oh" She squeaked and jumped to her feet, slipping out of my hands.
I made no move to follow her. I was beyond shock. This was a complete shut-down. The words were forever ringing in my mind. She had said late. That doesn't necessarily mean pregnant. It could just be late. It's impossible. Isn't it
I sat frozen while I heard her in the bathroom. She continued to mumble 'Impossible.'
There has to be an explanation. There was no way I could have gotten Bella pregnant. But how could a vampire male ever know if his only mate was another vampire. Has there ever been another vampire-human relationship?
Bella and I were beyond anything traditional.
We were the couple for firsts.
My phone rang, breaking the silence. I didn't answer it; I allowed it to continue to ring. There was nothing to be said at this moment.
Bella walked back to me and searched my pockets pulling out my phone.
"Hi, Alice." She cleared her throat.
"Bella? Bella, are you okay?" I could easily hear every word as if Alice were talking to me.
"Yeah, um. Is Carlisle there?"
"He is. What's the problem?
"I'm not…one hundred percent…sure…"
"Is Edward all right? Why didn't he pick up the phone?"
"I'm not sure."
"Bella. It's Carlisle. What's going on?"I could feel fear rolling off of her in waves. Still, I couldn't move to comfort her.
"Can vampires go into shock?"
Carlisle turned urgent.
"Has he been harmed?"
"No, no." she assured him. "Just… taken by surprise."
"I don't understand Bella."
She took a deep breath.
"I think I may be pregnant."
There was a short silence.
"When was the first day of your last menstrual cycle?"
"Sixteen days before the wedding."
"How do you feel?"
"Weird." Her voice broke and I could smell the saltiness of her tears. "This is going to sound crazy-look, I know its way too early for any of this. Maybe I am crazy. But I'm having bizarre dreams and eating all of the time and crying and throwing up and…and…I swear something just move inside me just now."
That was the break I needed.
My head snapped up and she stared at me, relief evident on her tear-streaked face. I held my hand out for the phone.
"I think Edward wants to talk to you."
"Put him on."
I pulled the phone up to my ear.
"Is it possible?" I said in a very low whisper.
"It could be, Edward. She does have the symptoms, but its way to early for any of them. I think you should get her home as soon as possible. We need to get tests done quickly."
I pulled Bella into my side. She just sat quietly, waiting for me to finish.
"And Bella?" I asked, staring blankly at the wall.
"This is new so there are so many unknown risks, some maybe a little more….fatal than others. I'm sorry Edward. Please just get her home."
"I will." I hung up the phone, and then dialed the airport.
"What did Carlisle say?" she asked quietly.
"He thinks you're pregnant." I answered lifelessly.
"Who are you calling now?" she said as a slight shiver went through her body.
"The airport. We're going home."

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