So this is one of the many ideas I've had lately and wanted to get started. The amount of people reading this one will affect how often I update it because I know that a lot of my other stories need finishing too.
Disclaimer: I do not own Jurassic Park etc.
Chapter 1:
"They should all be destroyed!" shouted Robert Muldoon.
He stepped onto the platform outside the Velociraptor cages. A young girl stood next him. They both had the same dark brown hair, though the girl's was tied back into a tight ponytail. Both of them wore light coloured shorts with matching socks and buttoned shirt, and dark brown walking boots.
"Aha! Robert Muldoon," exclaimed Dr Hammond. Then he turned to the people who were with him and explained, "he is my game warden from Kenya. A bit of an alarmist, I'm afraid, but knows more about Raptors than anyone. And this is his daughter Minnie; she's wants to be a palaeontologist. She's only fifteen but she is a quick learner." Dr Hammond continued and introduced the other people to the Muldoons.
Dr Grant hurried over to Robert Muldoon and instantly started a conversation about Raptors. Minnie remained quiet and leaned towards the Raptor cages, trying to get a glimpse of the beautiful creatures. The leaves shuddered and a screech echoed out of the enclosure. They must have found their food. A mechanical noise sounded and the machine that had been holding onto what must have been a cow raised out of the enclosure. It had been ripped to shreds.
The scientists and the lawyer left to get lunch whilst the Muldoons stayed by the Raptor enclosure. They both stared silently into the leaves as if they could see the creatures staring back. The leaves shuddered again and another screech ran right through their spines.
Robert Muldoon turned to his daughter, "Promise me that when you become a palaeontologist, you'll focus on the bones."
Minnie laughed, "You know I can't promise that, dad," said Minnie, "there are things you can only learn by studying the real creatures."
"In that case, promise me that you'll always be prepared and you won't take risks,"
Minnie smiled and nodded.
The first tour of Jurassic Park had begun. Instead of staying with her dad in the control room, Minnie decided to join the scientists on their tour. There were things she could learn from being in the presence of Dr Grant and Dr Sattler. Minnie hopped into one of the electric jeeps and stuck her head out of the window to talk to her dad. He handed her a radio.
"I'm going to check up on you as often as I can," he said.
"Dad, there's a camera in the car and cameras all around the park," Minnie said with a chuckle, "I'll be fine."
Her dad nodded and kissed her on the forehead, "Be safe."
Minnie nodded and the cars began to move. She waved at her dad before turning around to see who else was in the car. She had been joined by Dr Grant, Dr Sattler and Dr Malcolm. Minnie smiled at them all and noticed Dr. Grant's awkward posture.
"It's ok, Dr Grant, I've read your book three times," said Minnie, "I'm not going to bombard you with questions."
Dr Grant sent her a stiff smile and nodded.
"Though I'm going to say that I agree with you about some dinosaurs evolving into birds,"
Dr. Sattler sent her a grin and elbowed Dr. Grant who nodded and muttered a thanks.
The computer screen in the front of the car started to speak.
"If you look to your right, you will see a herd of the first dinosaurs on our tour, called Dilophosaurus."
Minnie squashed against the window excitedly trying to spot the dinosaur. The scientists all watched intently too but nothing appeared and they soon passed the enclosure.
A voice crackled through the radio.
"Minnie, are you okay?"
Minnie pressed a button whilst rolling her eyes, "I'm fine dad, what's wrong?"
"You're approaching the Tyrannosaurus paddock,"
Minnie smiled and stared out of the window again as the cars stopped. It was uncomfortably silent until Dr. Malcolm started to speak.
"God creates dinosaurs. God destroys dinosaurs. God creates man. Man destroys God. Man creates dinosaurs."
Dr. Sattler joined in, "Dinosaurs eat man. Woman inherits the earth."
Minnie giggled and then the car grew silent again. The computer buzzed and the voice of Ray Arnold came through the speakers.
"We'll try to tempt the Rex now. Keep watching the fence."
A small cage appeared, in which a goat stood calmly. The bars of the cage disappeared leaving the goat tied to a small post. The tyrannosaurus did not appear. The goat even sat down and went to sleep. Dr. Malcolm leaned towards the computer as the car began to move again.
"Eventually you do plan to have dinosaurs on your dinosaur tour, right?"
Let me know what you think and thanks for reading.