Disclaimer: I don't own Maximum Ride, Wal-Mart, or anything Nerf. I DO own melody.
Hello people, avian hybrids, zombies, and other stuff to my story! I'm not too skilled at writing, but I'm willing to try! Might as well tell you now, if wanted give me ideas, because if I'm out of them, this is no longer. Well, enough of sad stuff. ON WITH THA STORY!
Update 12-23-12: AHHH! HOLY CRAP! OVER 400 VIEWS?! Just this month I had 71 views and 48 visitors! And all of those came from the US, Philippines, Singapore, Puerto Rico (REPRESENT! If you don't get it, look at my profile.), Bahrain, and Australia! ANYWAY, I'm going to update this story, being my first story and all. So yeah, enjoy!
Max's p.o.v:
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! "Ugh, its 8:00 already! 5 more minutes!" As soon as I slam the clock, I hear the Nudge channel on.
"MAX! YOU SHOULD SEE THIS!" I could tell this was Nudge.
"I'm coming! Dear god, can't I have a normal life!" I ran down the stairs to see a nightmare in the kitchen.
A person was decorated with whip cream, which it seems like it was Fang sleeping in a chair.
"Gazzy I need chocolate syrup, cherries, and a camera stat!" I had a plan so amazing in mind.
"This is going to be good." Angel said with devious eyes. As Gazzy got the items I set the plan up.
"Angel and Nudge are on syrup. Iggy and I are on cherries. Gazzy, you got the camera. Ready with the stuff Gazzy?"
"Ready!" Gazzy replied.
"GO! GO! GO!" I commanded. After we were done with our masterpiece we posted the pictures on Fang's Blog. Oh we were going to get it after this.
Fang's p.o.v
I woke up to the sound of giggling. As soon as I opened my eyes it stopped. "What so funny?" I asked Nudge led me to a full body mirror to see the handy work of the flock. "WHAT THE HECK!" they all started laughing again. They had a whipped cream dress on me with chocolate syrup slatted all over with cherries in my now sticky jet-black hair. Then something weird happened.
Melody's p.o.v
"AHHHHHH!" I was free falling right into the earth. My black with tints of gold wings were broken and filled with pain, not able to be opened. My life passes by me. All the memories flutter in my mind.
"You WILL OBEY ME!" His gruff stare stabbed me.
"P-please…d-d-don't do this."
"Fine, I guess your mother and father will pay the price." The hairy beast tackled my parents as I was held captive against my own will.
"No. No no no NO NO NOO!" I screeched. My father was clinging to his life, my mother was ripped apart. I had no other choice. I popped out my wings and fought back. My arms started to make the floors rumble. Each tile popped out one by one. I threw them at the monsters and at the glass. The glass shattered and I jumped to my father. I turned around to see my father and I surrounded by monsters.
"Whatever you do," My father whispered to me. "Don't li-." The man stomped on my father's head. I screamed my head off when the blood spattered. I was covered in my father's blood. My watering eyes drifted to the man himself.
As my last memory goes by, I black out.
Max's p.o.v.
We were laughing so hard I fell to the floor hardly breathing. Then we heard something. We ran out the door flying in the sky seeing what was going on. (Thankfully the whip cream disaster was off of Fang) We all saw it, a girl like us, with wings, was falling in our direction. She fell right in a tree. We went up to her to see if she's alive. She was, but she was knocked out cold. She had dirty blond hair like mine, but her curls where tighter and had a little more "dirtier" (a.k.a little more brown), she had wings of black with tints of gold, she look somewhat Puerto Rican and American at the same time, see looked around 12 years old too, hope she does not make bombs, she had a good fight recently with an eraser. Hope she can survive the night.
"Fang, put her on the couch now!"
"She's moving Max."
Melody's p.o.v
I wake up, finally. It felt like days. I close up my mouth to stop the urge to scream from the pain.
"Don't worry Melody, you're fine."
"Hello voice, long time no hear."
"Ditto. Listen Melody, you fell in a tree and the flock found you."
"The ones who freed me from the school, or the others?"
"The ones who freed you."
"Oh..."
"Bye Melody…"
"Wait! Dang it voice!"
"Are you ok?" Oh it's Fang.
"Yeah, I guess so."
Max's p.o.v
"Hey, have I met you before?" I asked. I swore she look familiar.
"You freed me from the school." She replied.
"Oh sorry, my name is Melody."
"Why Melody?"
"Because of this." She sang a calm simple song and light shined all around here. The flock surrounded here flabbergasted at her power. Her cuts and bruises were healed and her wings stretched out with the golden tints glowing brightly and then it stopped.
"I can also do a lot of other things.
"Like what?" Angel asked. She did a whole bunch of stuff. She turned invisible, she made herself look and sound like everyone, she can control weather, she can create anything, and she can do mind control with singing. "Wow…that's a lot of things you can do."
"Melody, could you try something?" Iggy asked
"I wonder what it is now." Fang whispered to me. I replied
"Five bucks it's to see."
"10 for a bomb." He replied. Iggy whispered into her ear.
"Can you, please?" Iggy begged
"I'll try it, but there's no 100% chance. Ready?"
"Ready." She sang a quiet song, but she put her hand on Iggy's eyes.
"Here you go." Fang gave me a look and gave 5 dollars to me. Score! A few minutes later it stopped.
"How do you feel?" Melody asked. "Good, and you should brush your hair, it's very tangled."
"Wait, you can see!" Nudge beginning her oh so famous ramble.
"Apparently, yes."
"OMG MELODY YOU DID IT! I can't believe it! You did it YAY! Iggy is not blind! OMG FANG PUT THIS ON THE BLOG! NOW NOW NOW NOW! IGGY CAN SEEEEEE! I'm SO HAPPY I CAN-." Nudge rambled.
"Thank you Gazzy." I replied.
"Sorry!" A hand-covered Nudge said.
"Max?" Angel asked.
"Yes sweetie?"
"Is Melody staying with us, forever?" I really didn't know what to say, she did give me Bambi Eyes
"I guess for now." Melody is a little freaky. For all you know she could be an eraser. Stupid Bambi Eyes.
Melody's p.o.v
"Hey Max! We should throw a party!" Gazzy exclaimed hoping on a chair.
"I don't know you guys."
"Please Max, please!" I gave my Bambi Eyes everything I got. Even Fang was surprised how much effort I put into it. 5 minutes later we were flying to Wal-Mart. When we got there I ran to my favorite part of the store, The Nerf guns. I swore I was in heaven. Then the idea came to my head.
"Gazzy and Max over here fast!"
"What's wrong Melody?" Max asked concerned.
"I have the best idea ever." After we were done setting up the plan we were devious devils.
"Oh this is gonna be sweet!" Gazzy whispered.
"Ok I'll get the weapons, Gazzy get Iggy, Max get Angel and keep Fang around the area, but not too close, got it?"
"Got it." They both replied. I went to get Nudge out of this cause if she got mad, I would get tied up having make-up all over me. Just in time we had Me, Gazzy, and Max on guns, Iggy on samurai swords, and Angel as bait. Angel did just what I said; get Fang around the area within 10 feet. Max was aiming for Fang's legs, Gazzy on chest, and me on head.
"What's going on Angel?" Fang asked.
"Nothing Fang." Angel replied. She winked, it was time.
"Ready, on three, one, two, THREE! GO!"
There were bullets flying, an Angel hiding, A Fang being attacked, and a samurai Iggy whacking Fang. Oh and Angel was filming all of this. This was golden. By the time we were out of bullets we were laughing our head off, and Fang pissed off, badly. Sadly, after that we went home, big mistake.
I hope you liked it lots! I made it really long just for you guys. Oh, and I have a mission for YOU WONDERFUL, CREATIVE READERS! Send in some truth or dares PLEASE! Or else I may have to take out a big chunk of writing out of the story! It can include other characters, (such as Dylan, not that anyone likes him, Maya, Jeb, etc.) violence (YAY!) and anything else. Just keep it Teen at the maximum. So yeah, Bye Bye por ahora! (Bye Bye for now!)