Beautiful Pain

by goneinnocence

It's an entry from Hinata's diary. She wrote a poem for Naruto. Please review. It's my first wrk and I wanna know if it's good or bad.

I'll Wait For You

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, a very sad fact.

Dear Diary,

For a change, I made this poem for Naruto-kun. I wish I could read it to him. It's entitled Beautiful Pain.

Beautiful Pain

I'm really very senseless

I'm aware you're looking at someone else

I know of nothing but you & my emotions

Yet you have no idea of my passion.

I won't be in your days

I won't be in your rays

But what I feel is only for you

And the tears keep coming recently.

As I watch you walking past with her

I'm still fine as long as you're merry

I know I should stop this and go

But for all I know, I really love you so.

Loving you is like a beautiful pain

I'm willing to stand this terrain

Just to see you happy

I will give in willingly.

I really want to see the bright ray

I'm withstanding the pain each day

Even though I can't hold you dearly

I'm hoping someday I will nearly.

Love,

Hinata Hyuuga