A/N
I am back so soon :D
Well this is the continuation of "Painful Moment".
I am posting it as a new story caz i am much satisfied with the end i gave to "painful moment" and i was not willing to extend it any further.
Well this is on the demand of reviewers, i hope you all will like it guys.
I have a surprise for all of you in the end..don't go there directly read and then go.
Continuation of painful moment...
The voices of laughs and teasing were going distant in his ears, his vision was turning blurry. He could feel himself loosing the grip on his life, that soothing hug in which he was surrounded now seemed so much light. He looked here and there but everything was just a simple blur. He was not able to distinguish anyone... from anyone.
He completely loose his body as he felt so many hands now coming to support him, a simple smile came on his lips with his eyes giving a shade of sadness as those three months were still locked there somewhere in his heart. His half closed eyes managed to get a blurry small view of his buddy who had grabbed him so tightly fearing the fall and the loss of that relation again.
Tha last thing he could remember before slipping down in complete darkness was being laid on the bed and the loosening of that hand grip.
They saw him slipping into unconsciousness as his half closed eyes shut down completely. The door in their front was closed down and the person inside was separated from them. Doctors, nurses and ward boys hurried inside on an immediate call as Avinash took the charge of his patient now.
This time Salunkhe and Atul also outside as this was Avinash's area of expertise and they had no doubt on his abilities.
Stress, worry and fear were some emotions that could be seen very clearly, but there were some other emotions which were hidden somewhere really deep inside the heart of these people.
The ticking sound of the clock can be heard clearly in this dead silence. After every few minutes the watches tied around the wrist were brought down against the eyes and were taken a look at while some just glanced with worry on the wall clock present there as a reminder that time never stops for anyone.
Daya had picked that diary up earlier when they had moved out of the ICU and eyeing it for once, he had secured it near his heart with the intension to never to let it fall in the hands of its owner.
The wait came to an end as after what it seemed like an eternity, the doors were opened in silence and the doctors with a nurse moved out with avinash still instructing something to the nurse with serious expressions.
The team in silence surrounded the doctors, while all the other doctors left, Avinash stayed behind still in a conversion with the nurse. After few moments the whole conversation was over and the nurse moved inside ICU again as daya traced her steps in order to get a glimpse of his buddy but he couldn't.
All the heads and eyes were turned towards Avinash. Acp sir took the charge and asked avinash in a strong tone.. "Abhijeet?"
After a brief silence avinash looked at them all and said.. "aap log mere cabin mein aaye please..mujhe aap sabh se baat karni hai.."
Acp sir and daya exchanged worried glances..as Avinash turned to leave daya asked him a bit hesitantly.. "Doctor..hum..woh..abhijeet..usse..usse dekh sakte hain?"
Avinash smiled and said.. "sirf dekhna hai..so raha hai woh abhi..main tum logon ko chatting ki permission nahi de sakta.."
Daya smiled while a grin appeared on other faces too.
Daya moved forward and slightly opened the door. He could see his buddy lying on bed with oxygen mask covering half of his face and drips and needles attached to his body. There were machines attached to detect his heartbeat, pulse rate, BP and the working condition of his brain. What daya could grab was only the fact that till this time...abhijeet was not as well as he pretended to be.
Daya closed the door silently, not wanting to disturb his buddy's sound sleep. As he turned he found avinash looking at him smilingly..
Avinash.. "aur bhai mill liye apne dost se, mill gayi shanti tumhare dil ko"
Daya(with shy smile) "jee doctor"
Avinash signalled all and now they all heading towards avinash's cabin..while avinash said to daya..
Avinash- Bhai daya tum na mujhe avinash bulaya karo, main tumse itna bhi bada nahi hun.
Salunkhe whispered.. "haan sirf 15 se 20 saal"
Smile appeared on all faces after hearing that meant to be whispered comment. Avinash looked at him angrily and said to daya.. "daya abh mere kissi ki tarah nakli baal toh hain nahi.."
Salunkhe in rash.. "mere baal 100% asli hain, samjhe tum"
Avinash(innocently)- Toh maine kahan tumhara name liya tha, (wink to daya), kyun daya"
Salunkhe again in anger while others still smiling..
They entered the cabin and now avinash sat on his chair while signalling others too as he already arranged for extra chairs.
Avinash now started in serious tone after glancing at salunkhe and atul. Both nodded and now he first introduces the team with the scenario they dealt with abhijeet before.
It was a shock of course for all of them as the way they were greeted by that amazing smile, which was so pure and lovely without even a slightest hint of pain, it was impossible to guess that abhijeet was not in a condition to even to stand. But yes that lost shine in those eyes was something they still couldn't forget. It was painful to see those eyes without any shine, any fire in them.
As Avinash finished, he took a brief pause to look at all the faces, with the exception of salunkhe and atul all had tears in their eyes and they were shocked, angry and guilty.
A tear slipped down daya's eyes but before it can fall on the table, a hand captured it smoothly; daya looked up after seeing that hand in front of his eyes. It was avinash who had stretched out his hand to protect that precious drop of salty water.
Avinah said to daya in a calm soft tone "nahin daya...(looking at that drop), yeh tumhe abh bahot sambhal kar rakhne hain daya, bahot sambhal kar, tumhe bahot strong rehna hai daya abh...abhijeet ke liye (daya looked at him)..usse tumhari aur aap sabh ki bhi bahot jarurat hai"
Daya and others nodded and now avinash continued...
Avinash- meri baat aap sabh ko bahot dhyaan se sunni hai, khaskar daya tumhe..(daya nodded and looked at him) Abhijeet ki condition iss samaye bahot critical hai (everyone looked at Avinash shocked), usske brain pe ekdum se bahot jyada pressure padh gaya, phir already usse internal bleeding ho rahi thi, inn sabh ki wajah se iss samaye usski body bahot jyada weak ho chuki hai, usska brain bhi bahot tired hai. Halaki abh internal bleeding ruk gayi hai, abhijeet bhi apni taraf se thoda mazboot laga hai mujhe, magar.."
Acp sir "kya doctor"
Avinash took a deep breath and continued "usse ek chain ki need ki jaroorat hai sir, (everybody in confusion), sir humne usse sedatives deke sulaya hai abhi, usska brain bahot jyada restless hai, woh har waqt kuch sochta rehta hai, waise bhi sir haemorrhage ke baad mind aur body ko relax rakhna bahot jarori hota hai, aur yahan toh abhijeet...sir usske demaag se, usske dil se, ya toh woh saari batein nikalni hongi hume, jo ki bahot time consuming kaam hai sir, abhijeet ke dil se woh sabh kuch nikalne zarori hai magar abhi hume ek instant relief chahiye sir, taaki bas abhijeet apne upar pressure na dale, usska dhyaan bhatkana hoga sir hume taaki woh unn sabh chezon ke bare mein kuch na soche, aap sabh samajh rahe hain na meri baat sir? (everyone nodded)..iss samaye abhijeet ke liye aap sabh ka sath, proper care, love, concern bahot jaroori hai, usse relax rakhne ke liye aap log jo bhi kar saken woh Karen, magar bas itna hai ki woh abh stress na le, bilkul bhi."
Salunkhe(bit hesitant)- Avinash, kya..kya abhijeet abh tayyar hai?
Avinash clearly understood what he meant; abhijeet had very clearly declared earlier that he is not willing to live and now this! It was a state of utter confusion for him.
Avinash(in low tone)- nahi..(everybody looked at him, bewildered), woh confused hai abhi bhi, usske andar abhi bhi vahi dar hai, woh ussi soch mein hain ki usska yeh faisla(decision) theek bhi hai ya nahi? Woh khud yeh janta hai ki woh unn sabh chezon ko, uss dard uss takleef ko apne sine(chest) se nahi nikal sakta hai, aur yahi wajah hai ki woh ek continuous pressure face kar raha hai. (taking a sigh) jitna maine abhijeet ko jana hai, woh apne pehle unnka sochta hai jinse woh pyaar karta hai, yahan bhi wohi hai, usse yeh bhi dar hai ki usske galat faisla se aap logo par koi asar ho, phir usske der(delay) karne se bhi koi mushkil."
There was pin drop silence for few minutes, Avinash took a look at all and after that continued again.
Avinash- yeh 24 ghante bahot critical hain sir. Abhijeet ho sakta hai koi galat faisla bhi..(heartbeats present around came to a halt), aap sabh ko uss situation mein abhijeet ko wapas lane ke liye bahot mehnat karni hogi, usse kayi aise baton par yakeen dilana hoga jin par se shayad woh apna trust puri tarah se kho chukka hai. Aur agar abhijeet wapas aa jata hai toh..(looking at all)..difficulties aur bhi badh jayengi sir(everyone shocked)..trust build up karna itna mushkil nahi hota sir jitna usse continue karna hota hai, bas yahi samajh lijiye ki ek bhi fault, ek bhi takleef ya dard ya keh lijiye koi ek aisa comment jo usse hurt karde usse aap sabh se humesha humesha ke liye dur kardega. Iss samaye yeh woh abhijeet nahi hai sir jisse aap sabh par beintehaan bharosa tha, iss samaye yeh woh abhijeet hai jisse toh shayad apne aap par bhi bharosa nahi hai. App sabh meri baat samajh rahen hain na sir?
Everyone nodded.
Avinash- abhijeet ke hosh mein aane ke baad usse bahot soft behaviour rakhna hai aap sabh ko. Weakness abhi aur badegi hi, waise toh hum usse maximum time ke liye sedatives par hi rakhenge lekin jabh bhi woh hosh mein ho, usse koi bhi aisi baat nahi karyega jisse usse takleef ho ya usska brain pe koi pressure pade. Usse bahot relax rakhna hai sir. Abhi usse thode din breathing mein problem rahegi, toh oxygen mask hum abhi bhi rakhenge.
Daya(in low tone)- ABHI..i mean Abhijeet ko hosh kab tak aayega doctor.
Avinash- umeed toh 24 ghante mein aane ki hai daya.
Rajat(in confusion)- sir?
Avinash- mera matlab hai usse 24 ghante ke andar andar hosh aajana chahiye..agar woh chahe toh.
All of them new the other possibility so they all just quite.
Avinash said in fresh tone.. "sir aaplog sabh abh araam karlen..(yawning) mujhe bhi badi neend aarahi hai.
Everyone smiled
Avinash- Daya maine tumse kya kaha tha?
Daya(in confusion)- kya kaha tha?
Avinash- arre maine kaha tha na tum mujhe avinash bulaya karo.
Daya just smiled. Now everyone stood up and moving out after acp sir and daya shaking hands with avinash.
Avinash sat there quietly at his place and thought "bas abh abhijeet ko hosh aajaye, halaki yeh sabh bhi uss baat se wakif hain magar woh ek umeed ki kiran toh maine hi dee haina itna sabh batake." He took a deep breath and sat there still as a voice echoed in his eyes which made his wet and erupted a smile on his lips.
"Bhaiya..!"
"bhaiya..!
The shout of this lovely voice echoed all around as a Boy nearly in his teens entered the enormous hall with a big grin on his face.
But soon the voice faded as there was no answer from other side. Dejected the boy sat on the face with his grin drowning with passage of time as he thought.
"aaj phir lagta hai bhaiya chale gaye" he placed his head on the head rest well acquainted with the responsibility his Doctor bhaiya handled.
Just then some voices in the kitchen took him by surprise, he took off his shoes in order to avoid making some noise, he reached near the kitchen but was shocked to not to find anyone. He was sure he had heard someone. Just then his eyes fell on the intercom that was hanging inside the kitchen. He smiled thinking.
"bhaiya"
He sat calmly on the couch now watching tom n jerry. There were further noises but of course they didn't worry him anymore, he knew who was behind all that.
An irritated voice erupted from behind as a familiar looking man emerged from somewhere inside the door.
"tu apne aap ko jyada shaana nahi smajhta?"
"toh hun toh samjhunga hi na" the boy answered with a grin.
"hmmm...toh yeh baat hai mera chota sa Abhi bahot hoshiyaar hogaya hai ,haan?"
"haan toh" the boy said raising his collars.
While the man just sat beside him and whispered. "paas ya fail"
The boy said with a grin.. "aapko kya lagta hai?"
Man- fail..
Abhi(shocked)- BHAIYA!
The man started to laugh, while boy first looked at him and then also started to smile.
Abhi- kya bhaiya aap bhi. The boy now said excitingly, "pata hai bhaiya mera selection hogaya hai..(looking at his bhai keenly)..wahan pe"
Man was shocked so just looked up and hugged his bhai tightly with.. "mujhe yakeen nahi tha"
Abhi(warningly)- BHAIYA...!
Man(hugging the boy)- haan mere bache.
Abhi- mera gift?
Man- oops! Kya maanga tha tune?
Abhi looked at him and then said a bit sadly.. "koi baat nahi bhaiya, aapko bahot kaam hota hai na, aap bhul gaye honge, main zara fresh hoke.."
But he was stopped in mid as a letter was presented in front of him..he looked at his bhai and then snatched the letter and reading the contents his eyes became wet with tears of happiness.
Abhi- BHaiya..
Man- kaisa laga tera gift..
Abhi hugged his brother tightly and said.. "bahot bahot acha..abh hum kuch waqt saath mein guzar sakenge na bhaiya.."
Man with smile.. "haan..sirf main aur tu aur.."
Abhi(with sad expression as there were not many occasions when he could spend time with his brother)- aur?
Man- tom n jerry..
The boy started to laugh with.. "kya bhaiya"
The man could see his bhai laughing heartily..
That smiley face became blurry just like the wonderful memory, avinash wiped his tears and presenting himself again as a doctor who was happy throughout he headed to face another new patient whom again he cannot afford to let him loose his hope.
A/N
So now guys, TIME FOR SURPRISE!
Guess what..
Kkkloveu is back in her avatar..
Which avatar?
The blackmailing avatar..!
Very happy na, well i am. I need reviews this time, many many reviews since only then the story will be continued from my side. Sorry guys but i must say this, i was very disappointed with the number of reviews on the last chapter of "painful moment", i respect those who reviewed and i am thankful to them but guys this time i need more encouragement since i want to know whether anybody is interested in reading or not? What will i do with the story if there's no one to read? So i need reviews this time.
And not to mention, i will stop posting next chapter the moment i felt reviewers are less. Without any warning since i cannot beg for reviews again and again na.
Sorry for being rude but guys i am really upset with this.
I am writing this on the demand of someone special, well from my side it's a birthday gift for her since i was not able to present something on her birthday itself. I am sorry for that yaar.
I hope you liked this chapter, nothing much though, just a calm starting. I will try and post next chap soon.
Till then
Take Good care guys.
Bye and don't forget to review (after reading of course.)
Kkkloveu.