Episode 1: Neo Queen Serenity's Quest


I am a warrior, protected by the moon light. I am the current Queen of this earth, Serenity, but it seems that all my powers haven't been enough. Evil has swept the land again, and I fear for my people. A black dome has covered my palace, and I don't have enough power to protect everyone in this city and around it. This earth has been polluted by evil and we must relocate. Isn't there anybody who cares enough for my people, for this land, and of me, to come and help?

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Mom, have you seen my Grammar book? Yanamo asked her mother as she shoved a piece of toast into her mouth. Her mother smiled and handed her the book, decorated with purple and blue stars.
Thanks, mom! Yanamo ran out the door and headed off to school.
Hey Yanamo! Sunny yelled, as Yanamo ran into the classroom, Wow, you made it again! But it was really close! Anyway, did you see the newspaper this morning? There is a new super hero in town! They described her as medium height, with brown hair. Hey Yanamo, you look a lot like the description of her!! Are you leading a double life? Yanamo laughed and poked her in the stomach.
Class, settle down. Take out your English please. Ms. Seki-son gasped as she ran into the room, late as usual.

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Brrrrrrring!! The school bell rang and Yanamo ran out of the school and met Sunny outside.
So, what do you think about the new girl, Elara? Sunny asked Yanamo.
Well, she sure is smart. Did you know she doesn't even go to cram school and she gets the best marks in the district! Yanamo whispered excitedly in Sunny's ear.
Hey, do you think she could be an android? Like, something out of a science fiction? Sunny said excitedly back, a little too loudly.
I think she heard you. That wasn't very nice, at all! Yanamo cried as she opened up her lunch.
Well, I'm the gossip queen, it's what I'm supposed to do. Okay, see that girl over there? The one with the long black hair? Sunny asked Yanamo.
Yanamo answered.
Well, it seems that her foster brother was put into the insane asylum. Her name is Kiko. And see the other girl beside her? The one with the blue hair? She was the only witness of the death of a five year old girl and her family. And the one with the pink hair? Her name is Rini and she is handmaiden to the princess. Sunny ended with a flourish. She stood up and bowed, and a few girls giggled, but Rini was glaring at them.

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So, what are you doing after school today? Yanamo asked Sunny as they walked out of the school.
Well, I thought I'd go to the mall, and maybe pick up some Micky-D's afterwards. So, do you have any plans? Sunny replied, turning the corner.
No, I don't have any plans at all. Do you think I could come with you? Yanamo asked timidly. Sunny cocked her eyebrow at Yanamo and punched her lightly on the arm.
Do you think I would turn down my bestest friend and go to the mall without you? I don't think so! Come on, let's go. I think there is a gigantic sale at Bootlegger. Maybe they have some really cool socks!

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A man with blue hair paced the hallway in front of a steel door. A lot of yelling was going on, and there were some crashes.
the man said, shaking his head. The door crashed open and a girl with frizzy brown hair ran out.
Watch out, Cheroko! She's in a pretty rotten mood. I'd be careful if I were you! The girl cackled and turned the corner. Andrew stepped inside the room and the door swung shut. Black mist clouded the large room, corners darkened by the lack of light. A gorgeous women with red hair sat at the throne, arms folded across her chest.
Well Cheroko, our search is over. The Girl of the Golden light has revealed herself to us. With Neo-Queen Serenity trapped in the orb, and all of her sailor scouts with her, the Golden Girl will never escape us. The fiery lady stood up and walked to the window.
Did I ever tell you our mission? I mean, the real reason we're doing this? Andrew shook his hair, and walked over to her, The real reason we are trying to get the Golden Girl is that she is the key to the universe. She holds in her body a crystal that rivals the crystal in Sailor Moon's heart. But, the girls crystal is stronger, in a way. She has gone through many more trials than Sailor Moon has ever had, and she is, in fact, much younger. The reason why we are trying to get the crystal is that if we have the crystal, we can rule the universe. But, to gain the crystal, we must penetrate the forces of the queen, because she will break through. There is no way that our shield would hold for more than a week under her rule, and I am sure the Golden Girl has many strong friends. The fiery lady turned around and headed for her throne.
That is why we need the Life Stones. If they fall in to her
hands, the Golden Girl will be able to defeat us and we will never gain the crystal. Please, try and collect the Life stones and bring them to me. It is your destiny! The fiery lady's eyes flashed and Andrew disappeared from the room in a flash of smoke.

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Sunny walked past Baskin Robins and yelled with glee,
I've got to try all thirty one flavours! It is my destiny!! Yanamo laughed, and scooted past her towards the counter.
If I let you order, you would really order all of the flavours. Anyway, I want to choose my own. Yanamo ordered Sunny a gigantic ice cream cone and bought some vanilla yoghourt for herself. They walked through the mall, and came to the doors that led outside.
Yanamo, I need to go home. There is a storm brewing, and I don't want to leave my younger brother alone in a thunderstorm. I better go, bye! Sunny ran off down the street, just as the first drops were falling from the sky. Yanamo held her book bag against her chest and started home. Rain poured against Yanamo and she was drenched as she turned down the street towards her house. Yanamo shivered and started to run for cover.
Hey, do you need some help? Rini, the girl Sunny pointed out from her gossiping. She stood under a building and held an umbrella over Yanamo's head.
I'm sorry about this morning. Sunny is the gossip queen of the eighth grade, and she usually preys on the new kids in school. I don't agree with her, but she is my friend. I'm just not like her. Yanamo whispered as they walked toward her apartment. Rini stared off into the distance, her pink hair flowing behind her.
I never noticed before, Rini said, and fingered Yanamo's long brown hair, Your hairdo is exactly the same as my mothers, except for the colour. Have I met you before? Yanamo shook her head, and stared at the ground. They stopped under Yanamo's apartment.
Thanks for the umbrella. If you hadn't helped me, I probably would have caught phenomena. Would you like to join us for dinner? Yanamo asked Rini, holding open the door. Rini smiled but shook her head.
I need to get home. My mother is probably worried as it is. Rini turned and left the building. Yanamo turned and walked up the stairs to her apartment. As she walked upstairs, she could hear a scream coming from below her. She ran down the stairs, just in time to see a blue haired man. He was holding a black stone, and it was pointed to Rini, who was standing across the room. Yanamo hid behind a low wall, and watched what was going on.
Cheroko held up the black stone, which responded to the girl across from him. She must have a crystal, it shows that she is extremely strong. Falishna, get her!! The stone changed, and turned in to a tall woman. She leapt towards Rini and slammed her palm to her head. Energy drained out of her body, and she rose in to the air. Pink light blasted everywhere, and Yanamo gasped. A silver stone came out of her body and rose up in to the air. I've got it now! Cheroko called, and grabbed the crystal. Farishna, finish her off! I have no more use for her anymore!! Cheroko opened a portal behind him, and was about to step through when Yanamo ran right in to him. He fell on the ground and Yanamo glared at him. Purple light blasted over her body, and she fell to the ground. A woman who looked exactly like her stood over her still body. Cheroko, give me her crystal, now!! Cheroko shook his head at her. Who are you? No matter!! Farishna, finish the two of them off!! Farishna nodded and turned towards the new scout. Prepare to die!! She fired a bolt of lightning towards the new scout. She dodged out of the way, and grabbed her locket. Gold light came out of it, and transformed in to a staff. Rainbow Rain, Shower Down!! Rainbows shot out of the wand, and wrapped around Falishna. She screamed, and turned back in to the stone. The stone crumbled, and turned in to black dust. It whirled around, and disappeared. The scout turned in to a bolt of energy, and wrapped around Yanamo. Yanamo woke up, and ran to Rini. The silver stone rose up in to the air, and went back in to Rini. She suddenly sat up, and opened her eyes. Rini, you okay? Rini nodded her head, and said, I'm fine. I'll just go home now, see you later! Rini ran down the street, and Yanamo walked in to her apartment.
Night mom. Yanamo called from her room, across the hall from her sisters. She laid her head on the pillow and went to sleep.
Yanamo... Yanamo... Yanamo... Yanamo sat up, her eyes still closed. A light burst through her window and her eyes burst open.
I feel, strange...

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Neo Queen Serenity ran up the palace stairs in Crystal Tokyo. She entered the room in which a silver crystal laid on a golden pedestal. She picked it up and clutched it to her chest.
Oh, Imperium Crystal of my heart, guide my actions! Neo Queen Serenity yelled, holding the crystal above her head, Find someone of this time, to save my world! Please, help my people! Make them remember or let them create a new future for ourselves!! The crystal rose above the queens head and silver light beamed over her head and filled the room. Across the city, five girls heads lit up with planetary symbols.
Please... help my people... Neo Queen Serenity whispered, staring off into the distance.

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So, what do you think? This is the fourth rewrite of this story, and I hope you like it. ;-)