You Sick Son of a Bitch (SasukeXOC Forced Marriage)

by White Wolf With Fire

Ever since Konoha, Sasuke and Ren have had a close friendship, until Sasuke went off to Orochimaru: a supposed mastermind of Ren's clan massacre. In devistation and stupidity, Ren begged and pleaded for the Akatsuki to train her for the "eye for an eye" statement. They made her a pawn, but never let her join. She was simply a spy and servant, angering Sasuke... READ PROLOGUE 1ST

1. Prologue (IMPORTANT)

Before you read, I just want to inform you about two things:

-Sasuke MAY be OOC, even though I tried my best to make him in character; since he's never had some sort of situation loke this before...(let's hope not)

-I am perfectly aware that Ren has sueish qualities. However, I am probably not going to change her ASAP. She's not be written into Naruto and I do believe she has big flaws to balance herself. But I do know that she has a very tragic past and may be a little too strong. Plus I don't think the Akatsuki would accept a girl just to fill desires and be a double agent to Konoha.

So why post it? I'm not trying to make Ren the "best" original character in the history of Naruto OCs or get her well liked. I'm mainly posting so I can improve my writing style. I do believe I have more developed/less Sueish characters in other series, however I love writing with the Ren the most. There are more examples to choose from of my writing as her. So, if you do decide to critique my writing, please understand that I'm not trying to get Ren well liked or adored: I am simply asking for feedback on how I write the story. Thank you and I hope you enjoy. :)